Trainer Picture

[Magespages]

This is a trainer picture I drew a while back. What does everyone think?;munchlax;

http://www.deviantart.com/view/36015144/

 

[Spookz]

Looks pretty good. Only thing that bothers me is his left arm. The way he's positioned just looks awkward, and his left arm looks like it's probably longer than the right. Nothing too big though. Good job.

 

[duelistXmist]

It good, except the nose and mouth.

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

Very well done. Nice work.

 

[HakuBlue]

Wow, it looks very nice. My only complains would be the left arm and the right leg (the ankle to be more specifically) which do not really blend well proportionally. I like your style and coloring though, very nice indeed. Keep 'em coming.

 

[Omega Pirate]

My only complaint is that his hands are positioned like that of a Mankey. Looks rather strange. But good job on the rest.

 

[Clockworkz]

The facial features are sorely lacking. Try to add a alittle more detail arond the nose and mouth. The anatomy looks good on paper, but after inspection, the shoulders make the entire arms look off.
Also, he stole Astro-boy's haircut >_>

 

[Eevee_Master]

It's nice but the arms look weird...

 

[Moonlight.]

Nice colouring, nice style. The only problems are the shoulders (almost no existant) and the left arm. The right arm looks pretty good, as well as 3-dimentional, but the left arm looks completely flat. Other than that, it's pretty good.

 

[trainer gabby]

Looks pretty good. Only thing that bothers me is his left arm. The way he's positioned just looks awkward, and his left arm looks like it's probably longer than the right. Nothing too big though. Good job.

Agreed,... I only saw that one small problem too. I think that is a wonderful young trainer that you have created. I have some Trainers artwork that I would like to post links to as well. Only my Trainers are much older and more mature!


;251;

 

[trainer gabby]

Here is something on a related topic,...


Hello All,

My friends and I have made up our own Pokemon RPG, based loosely on "Big Eyes Small Mouth" RPG system, plus rules from the video games, the card game and a few elements from the anime. I could post up information about it in detail later if any of you would like to have them. I wanted to post up the three main Trainers from our game to get some creative feedback from other Pokemon fans.

Let me know what you guys think of them, okay??

Introducing:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/TrainerGabby/didi.jpg

Trainer Didi (who in Real Life is my GF and in our RPG my character has a secret crush on her's! - She drew and colored this one herself!!) Her character is around 16 years old. Yes, she is BUSTY and she knows this, so you can save any comments along those lines!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/TrainerGabby/Ven1final.jpg

Trainer Ven (I drew this one and RL Didi colored it!) his character is about 14 years old.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/TrainerGabby/gilu1.jpg

Also Trainer Gilu (my character, DiDi drew and colored this one as well!) this character is somewhere around 18 - 20 years old.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/TrainerGabby/Final-Rosewithbkg.jpg


And Lastly Trainer Rose who is about the same age as Didi.

This was a commissioned & Christmas gift for an online friend of mine Rose. This was also a collaboration piece (as is most of my art) with my girlfriend / colorist, Irisarc (who most of you know as DiDi!).

Trainer Gabby is in this RPG as well, he is our mentor and Leader of the Pokemon Stadium in our game setting!




So, what do you guys think??... :sweat:


If any of you are members of Gaia Online, I have all of these images posted up in the Art Arena there. Would you all please go to vote and make nice comments?? :sweat:

They can be found here:

http://www.gaiaonline.com/artarena/index.php?mode=artistPage&postid=1173858

Thanks,.... we are working on another one, if any of you would care to see it once it is done! ;munchlax;

 

[H.M]

Here is something on a related topic,...

It's still in the wrong forum, go advertise it somewhere else. :\

As for crit on Magepages' trainer, the line art is a bit too fuzzy. Outline with something darker like a pen.

 

[trainer gabby]

Fan Art (Trainer Picture) ??

Let's see the topic thread was: Serebii.Net Forums > Other Forums > Fan Art > Trainer Picture

Hmmm?.... no, I think I was fairly clear. Just for the record, I am NOT trying to be mean or rude in this reply or in my original message. Why then are you advising me to, as you put it, "go advertise it somewhere else." What is this all about??? I am sorry, but I was just trying to share my work with other like-minded Pokemon fans, maybe make a few new friends and it's that one of many reasons of these types of forums? My intention was to share my artwork which was created for my RPG. I only offered to share my RPG if anyone's interest was sparked by the artwork. I was not advertising anything so I guess I don't understand your comment.

I welcome any other comments anyone has about the artwork I posted? :surfpika:

 

[Samayowa]

It's pretty good. The arms are kinda weird but other than that, it's very well done.

 

[H.M]

Let's see the topic thread was: Serebii.Net Forums > Other Forums > Fan Art > Trainer Picture

Hmmm?.... no, I think I was fairly clear. Just for the record, I am NOT trying to be mean or rude in this reply or in my original message. Why then are you advising me to, as you put it, "go advertise it somewhere else." What is this all about??? I am sorry, but I was just trying to share my work with other like-minded Pokemon fans, maybe make a few new friends and it's that one of many reasons of these types of forums? My intention was to share my artwork which was created for my RPG. I only offered to share my RPG if anyone's interest was sparked by the artwork. I was not advertising anything so I guess I don't understand your comment.

It's called making you're own thread. While the drawings are nice, no one appreciates someone else bargeing in and posting their own work, it's considered....oh, pretty rude.