..~!Trainers in Tsuba!~..

[SnowStorm92]

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Welcome to my remake comic thingy….yeah. Consider this to be what will take over my comic “Pokemon Neo! Rise of Team Rocket!” or something like that. It will be based off my own region, Tsuba, which looks remarkably like New Zeeland in map terms =O. Anyways the eomic starts out fast a bit, but slows down a bit as well. There will be some humor, but not much as I try to be funny, but I’m not ^^. Anyways enjoy, as yes, rules of the thread.

-Don’t Flame
-Don’t Spam
-DO do every rule serebii has said

And we will all get around great! Any breaking rules, and I’ll report you >=)


Oh yes! I will be putting up a full version of one map you will see, and even one you weren’t supposed to see yet, like the Ice King’s Tomb, every thirty posts ^^.

Chapter List


Chapter 1

-Why hey now, this river is very cold!
-Reading "Kill myself books"
-Only real men wear capes
-Makin' a batch 'O Seel Soup!
-..and yet another Miraculous victory! ((This starts the "OMG!1! IT'S 2 T!MES THE AMOUNNT!!11!" part of the comic))
- Dewgong-in Things right! (corny, yes I know.)

Chapter 2

-Lost
-A meeting with the boss man....
-Three Virus's

Credits

Thanks to ALL of these people, without them, this comic wouldn’t exist and the world would be a happier place =D

-BiZ for: Kat and ??? over world
-Momiji: For rocking at Ages and giving me the idea
-Spriters resources and VG Maps: For getting a lot of me maps ^^
-Sora: For letting me let her be a character
-SnowStorm992: For making this comic, all of the trainer sprites, background sprites, Seth’s OW sprites, and pretty much all the maps your going to see. Why? Because I have no life at all.


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[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

It's a very good begining.Continue...

 

[Bu†cH]

The comic seems a little bit interesting. You got the visuals right.

I did give you permission for using my Ed (Used for Kat, the main character) and Roy (black-haired guy from Issue 3) sprites, but after your next issue, you are forbidden to use my Ed sprites for Kat. But I'll make you replacement sprites.

 

[SnowStorm92]

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That dude rocks, so hard. Anyways...

Pikamaster9- TY for R and R-ing, didn't think anyone would ^^
BiZ- KK, as you say. PM'd ya about a little kink though.


And a new suprise: New episode out!

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/998/67te.png

It has also been updated on the index. Also, you can view it by looking at the "latest comic" section now =D. I am also moving soon, therefor expect updates to be VERY scarce. I will have no sprites at all, but I promise to get back to work soon ^^.

 

[Matt`]

The text is cut off by the speech bubbles many times.
It seems like an original comic, but it still has the "go to the lab and get a pokemon" journey comic, which is not original.
The sprites look pretty good, but, then again, they're not your overworld or map sprites.

Edit- Also you have some spelling mistakes when you used "Latter" instead of "Later" days.

 

[SnowStorm92]

kk, editing......only two of the sprite sets don't belong to me. The way you say it make me sound like I stole the stuff, well I didn't. All areas you will see I MADE, most other OW (besides those people own and that I do NOT claim credit for) I MADE. and so on and so forth.

Also yes I know, the speech bubble is a problem I will be fixing in the upcomign episodes.


EDIT: !!!TY MATT, you just reminded me of something. If you would liek to have you character in the comic, please PM me with the sprites and info like what they are (trainer, coordinator, breeder, ect.) and age and name and ect.

 

[Momiji]

Its good so far. Nothing really big but its good. I think its too early to judge "heavily" on your comic

So far, I give it a 5.5/10. Nothing big but its not horrible or bad.

PS: Interesting starting town Snow, never really though about it but I like the idea.

 

[SnowStorm92]

Hey guys...welll um...don't know how to sya this but.........mycomputerwaspackedawaybysataneticmoverpeoplez......uh yeah that pretty much sums everything up ^^. I have part 6 in chapter 1 done, which ends that chapter as well as part 1 in chapter 2, also known as "Operation: Scrage." Chapter 2 is all about the caped person as well as the evil people...so um yeah, look for it in about 3 weeks, mabye less, but yeah. I need to psot em up and my computer will be the last thing to be set up at my new house =(

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Well, I like it by now, just some points:
1)Kat´s back sprite doesn´t seems to be a Beauty. More like a Lass
2)You put "cna" instead of "can" in the last comic.