I am kind of new to this and if it is bad, please tell me. EDIT: This fic is rated PG with 1-2 chapters to be between PG and PG-13 for violence.
Chapters:
Chapter 1
“Why me?!” Thought Zachary Padern. “Why must I be chosen?” No one would tell him where he was or anyone of his many whys. It all started not to long ago…
As any other 13 year old boy, Zachary (Zach as he liked to be called) loved to play videogames. Xbox, Playstation, Nintendo and Atari; he had them all.
“All boys who want some ice cream come and get it!” Ever since his parents split up, Zach’s mother, Veronica, was kind of crazy. She still treated him as a little kid!
“Mom, can you just call me to get my ice cream like regular people do?” Zach really didn’t like how his mother treated him. She was approaching 40 and didn’t look it as much as she should.
“Zach, you used to love our little ways of talking,” Zach’s mother replied. “And get your hair out of your eyes.
“Mom, this is the cool way to wear it!” Zach persisted. “How will I ever become popular if you keep on pestering me about it? And you know I got tired of these talks 2 years ago.”
“Oh fine.” Mrs. Padern was getting tired of this. “Wear it how you want to if it pleases you.”
“Thanks Mom, love you.” Zach was glad to get out of that kitchen. He brought his ice cream up to his room. It was his favorite, chocolate. Maybe his mom could actually do what he wanted once in a while. “A great while,” Zach thought to himself.
Once reaching his room, the first thing that Zach did was to get out his Gamecube.
“Time to partay!” Zach was just about ready to play his favorite game, The Legend of Zelda. He had received his first Zelda game, The Ocarina of Time, at the age of 6 with his Nintendo 64. He did love the games and looks quite like Link. He was just a little bit younger.
He placed his bowl of ice cream on the shelf next to his Gamecube and began to play. Each time the Gamecube rumbled, the ice cream got nearer to falling. Eventually, Zach reached his save point.
“And, presto, savo.” Zach was pleased with the progress he had made in the game. He noticed one thing. The ice cream had fallen on the Gamecube. An error reached the screen.
“Please remove the item from the inside of the system.” Zach read off of the screen.
As Zach tried to do as the screen read, the ice cream melted into the green and wire filled programming card. “Uh-Oh,” thought Zach. “This can’t be good.”
The next thing he knew, Zach was surrounded by the same material found in that programming card. It kept going and going on for miles.
“Where am I?” Zach said aloud. Much to his amazement, his voice echoed. He must have heard it echo 6 or 7 times.
“You are in cyberspace, chosen one.” A disembodied voice answered. It seemed to be coming from nowhere and everywhere at the same time.
“Chosen one?” Zach pondered on what the voice meant. “Chosen for what? Who are you? Why am I here?”
“All of your questions will be answered in due time.” The voice answered back. “For now, you need to be off.”
“Off to where?” Zach wondered what the voice was trying to tell him. Whatever it was, Zach had no idea where he could go in this desolate place. Cyberspace as the voice called it.
“You are going to …” The voice had no time to tell the young man. Just as his questions were going to be answered, Zach was swept away from the voice and the green material.
“Where am I?” Zach was wondering what was going on.
“You’re here-a with me-a, Mario…”
As I said, I'm a first timer. It is short, yes I know. Please comment on and give advice.
Edit: The next chapters will be longer and better.
Chapters:
Chapter 1
Prolouge: Why me?
“Why me?!” Thought Zachary Padern. “Why must I be chosen?” No one would tell him where he was or anyone of his many whys. It all started not to long ago…
As any other 13 year old boy, Zachary (Zach as he liked to be called) loved to play videogames. Xbox, Playstation, Nintendo and Atari; he had them all.
“All boys who want some ice cream come and get it!” Ever since his parents split up, Zach’s mother, Veronica, was kind of crazy. She still treated him as a little kid!
“Mom, can you just call me to get my ice cream like regular people do?” Zach really didn’t like how his mother treated him. She was approaching 40 and didn’t look it as much as she should.
“Zach, you used to love our little ways of talking,” Zach’s mother replied. “And get your hair out of your eyes.
“Mom, this is the cool way to wear it!” Zach persisted. “How will I ever become popular if you keep on pestering me about it? And you know I got tired of these talks 2 years ago.”
“Oh fine.” Mrs. Padern was getting tired of this. “Wear it how you want to if it pleases you.”
“Thanks Mom, love you.” Zach was glad to get out of that kitchen. He brought his ice cream up to his room. It was his favorite, chocolate. Maybe his mom could actually do what he wanted once in a while. “A great while,” Zach thought to himself.
Once reaching his room, the first thing that Zach did was to get out his Gamecube.
“Time to partay!” Zach was just about ready to play his favorite game, The Legend of Zelda. He had received his first Zelda game, The Ocarina of Time, at the age of 6 with his Nintendo 64. He did love the games and looks quite like Link. He was just a little bit younger.
He placed his bowl of ice cream on the shelf next to his Gamecube and began to play. Each time the Gamecube rumbled, the ice cream got nearer to falling. Eventually, Zach reached his save point.
“And, presto, savo.” Zach was pleased with the progress he had made in the game. He noticed one thing. The ice cream had fallen on the Gamecube. An error reached the screen.
“Please remove the item from the inside of the system.” Zach read off of the screen.
As Zach tried to do as the screen read, the ice cream melted into the green and wire filled programming card. “Uh-Oh,” thought Zach. “This can’t be good.”
The next thing he knew, Zach was surrounded by the same material found in that programming card. It kept going and going on for miles.
“Where am I?” Zach said aloud. Much to his amazement, his voice echoed. He must have heard it echo 6 or 7 times.
“You are in cyberspace, chosen one.” A disembodied voice answered. It seemed to be coming from nowhere and everywhere at the same time.
“Chosen one?” Zach pondered on what the voice meant. “Chosen for what? Who are you? Why am I here?”
“All of your questions will be answered in due time.” The voice answered back. “For now, you need to be off.”
“Off to where?” Zach wondered what the voice was trying to tell him. Whatever it was, Zach had no idea where he could go in this desolate place. Cyberspace as the voice called it.
“You are going to …” The voice had no time to tell the young man. Just as his questions were going to be answered, Zach was swept away from the voice and the green material.
“Where am I?” Zach was wondering what was going on.
“You’re here-a with me-a, Mario…”
As I said, I'm a first timer. It is short, yes I know. Please comment on and give advice.
Edit: The next chapters will be longer and better.
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