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Treehouse Saga (Contestshipping)

Encyclopika

The Queen
I'm glad everyone loved my story...and...like all stories...it has an end, and here it is. Thank you all for reading! This is where is gets REALLY weird.
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Chap 9 – May

“Almost warm enough to go swimming!” May said cheerfully.

A small breeze brushed through her hair and made tiny ripples upon the stagnant pool ahead of her that branched off from the main river.

“Really?” Drew said, starting already, “I would have never noticed.”

May kicked his ankle. She was sitting up and he was lying down under a large willow tree. Its branches were in full bloom, all fluffy and white. It sent patterns of shadow across the two as they relaxed on the cool grass. The sun was bright and happy…though…it was deceiving. And it was so quiet. A breath could send echoes.
May looked at Drew. He was napping on his back under the thick shadow of their willow. To May’s right was the bridge that led to the ocean, in all its manmade glory. It sparkled under the sun’s white light, but still remained in its dark composure.

“You think the flowers are in bloom now?” May asked, keeping as cheerful as she could.

“Don’t see why not,” Drew answered, his eyes still closed.

The month was coming to a close. Soon spring would be on its way to summer and then it would be autumn all over again. And then the snow. Secretly, May hoped she wouldn’t have to see the snow again. Getting off the island and finding their Pokemon was the main priority for the two of them. But still, May would argue, the island had much to offer. Staying would be alright, and unlike Drew, she didn’t find the strange occurrences weird, she found them good.
The breeze rustled her hair again. Something about it seemed promising to her, but on the contrary, Drew didn’t notice it.

***

“How’s it going, dear?” Norman asked as he handed Caroline a bottle of water.

“’Sokay,” she said quietly.

“I know it’s been long, but, Dr. Spenser says any day now,” Norman tried to comfort her, and for a second, it seemed to work.

Caroline brightened a bit, which was all he wanted. May was not maimed nor brain dead. She was just sleeping, for lack of a better term and she would awake from her peaceful dream soon.
Miss Bates looked on. Her hands trembled at her sides. She brought them up to her chin and clasped them together to stop the shaking. Dr. Spenser had no idea when May and Drew would awake…she did. And she knew it would be that very day. Victims always awoke soon after the tingling in her bones began. She hoped for the best. Usually the outcome wasn’t the best and she prayed…yes, she prayed that no one would have to suffer.
In a few plastic chairs in the hallway, Max, Ash, Pikachu, Brock, and Misty sat, all looking at the white tile floor with the same faces full of agony. How many more days would this take? Max fiddled with his hands uncomfortably.
Suddenly, there was a loud gasp from inside the room.

***

May stirred in her sleep and opened her sapphire eyes. She stared at the wooden ceiling of the tree house and sighed the sleep away. The brown coveres fell by themselves as she sat up and yawned. It was bright outside – too bright to say the least; unusually bright. May didn’t notice though. What she did notice was that Drew was no where to be found. She looked to the bathroom, but the door wasn’t closed and it was vacant. She scanned the floor, but he wasn’t sitting anywhere. May cocked an eyebrow. Since when did he wake up before her? Especially after nights like last night? May found it weird, but then shrugged it off. Perhaps it was late in the day – she didn’t know. The island never gave them a clock.
May collected her clothes which were scattered across the floor. As she clipped on her bra, she noticed something black on the floor…as well as something aquamarine and purple. May lifted her red blouse off the black cloth and raised her eyebrows again. Her face turned red.

“Okay,” May breathed, “Why are Drew’s clothes here? You think you know a person…”

She put on the rest of her clothing and lifted his black turtleneck, just to make sure her eyes weren’t playing tricks on her. Indeed it did belong to Drew, and with lifting it, something fell from it. May followed the falling object down to the floor were it silently collided with the wood work.
It was a white flower with green rims on the petals and purple bleeding up those petals from where the stem was attached. Its stem was a mint color and littered with thorns. May dropped Drew’s shirt and picked the plant up. She frantically dropped it a second later, remembering how she could burn flowers on the island. As it fell to the floor, it didn’t burn and it didn’t shrivel. May tilted her head and lifted the flower once more for closer speculation. It wasn’t dying in her grasp and she smiled.

“Let’s go find Drew and show him what we can do,” May spoke to the flower, as if it would nod in agreement.

She lifted the floor door by its metal handle and jumped down to the ground. As soon as she hit the dirt, the sky became cloudy and dark, as if its clouds would burst with water. Thunder rumbled far away. May found it strange, but all in all, rain would be good. They hadn’t had any in a long while.
May walked on the path to the flower field, certain that’s where Drew would be, according to last night’s conversation before the action began.
The sky rumbled again, but May didn’t slow down. She was too excited to notice or care.
As she ran, it began to drizzle. Tiny drops of rain plopped on her head and wet her clothes. As she got closer to the field, the rain came down harder and harder, as if trying to stop her.
The forest began to darken, and, if May knew she was seeing clearly, losing all of its color. The sienna browns of the barked trees started to fade and their leaves began to turn gray, as if it were a photograph growing older. She crossed the brook, which was now dried up, despite the torrential rain coming down at that point.
May gasped as she felt herself almost slip on the log bridge. She regained her posture, and then continued onward. The wind blew and whistled loudly, like a warning of some sort, but May refused to listen.
May bursted through the great hedge the separated the field from the world, almost. It used to be a lush green…but now it was a dark, vapid gray that seemed endlessly tall.
She stopped her running. She looked ahead and her eyes grew wide. Drew was there all right, but he was a ghost of his former self. Ridden of all his pigment, he sat at the top of the field’s hill with his knees brought up to his chin. He didn’t seem to notice her presence. A small, colored flame raged upon his bare skin, and he did nothing to put it out. He didn’t seem hurt by it, although it attempted to engulf him.
May looked down at the flower she had brought. Like herself, it was still in color, but now it too was burning. May’s eyes welt up in tears.

“I don’t understand,” her voice cracked.

She dropped the flower, but it didn’t help anything. The fires still raged and now the entire island was engulfed in them. Trees burned, but they didn’t fall down. The rain poured and the wind howled. Thunder cackled like laugher.
There was a roaring in the distance, like giant waves crashing upon a beach. May looked in that direction just in time to witness the black ocean rise in a tidal wave. It came down hard on the island, like a hand slapping a face, washing away everything. May was caught in the riptide and went under the water.
She opened her eyes. Below her was dark and murky. Around and above her though, was white and clear. Bubbles rose up form the black depths, rising her to the surface.
Something in the darkness below caught her eye, though. It was Drew, not struggling, though, to make it to the surface. May swam against the bubbles and toward him. She couldn't understand what he was doing, but she would do anything to help him. She grabbed his hand and began to pull him toward the surface.
The more she kicked and struggled to make it to the top, the darker it became, and the light above slowly disappeared. She felt as though she were going backward; sinking into the bottomless black.
She stopped for a moment, and looked down. Drew was struggling now to get out of her grasp. He twisted his wrist quickly and her hand opened, letting him go.
May gasped, letting a lung full of water in. She looked back at Drew and tried to reach him again. She tried to catch him again. But he wouldn't let her. He spread his arms open and paddled backward, sending bubbles up that pushed her to the surface.
May held her throat and looked away from him. She had to get to the surface; she had to get help. She choked on the water she had swallowed. She kicked and flailed to reach the top. It got brighter. She broke the surface.

***

May sat up straight in her hospital bed and with her head arched back, gasped loudly for air. She choked and wheezed, as if she had been drowning and held her throat.

“May! Oh my goodness!” Caroline smiled and rubbed her daughter’s back to help her, though she didn’t understand why May was choking.

“Get in here! May’s awake!” Norman called to the kids outside, and they all bustled in, happy as ever.

Miss Bates strolled in, though, with no expression of happiness. She was glad May was awake, but very angry with the island. It still refused to change its ways.

“Oh, May! We were all so worried!” Caroline said as she hugged her daughter.

“How long were we gone?” May asked, still taking in deep breaths, “And when are going to get the main land?”

“What?” Caroline raised her eyebrows, “You were out for nine days. And you’ve been on the main land the whole time.”

“Out for nine days? What are you talking about? Drew and I were stranded on a crazy island! Aren’t we on a boat?” May asked.

“Uhhh,” everyone said in unison as they turned to Miss Bates.

She just shook her head in an “I told ya so”. She actually couldn’t wait until Spenser got to the scene.

“I’m so glad you guys could find Drew,” May didn’t wait for a response, “Some really scary stuff went on…but I think it was all a dream now.”

May got out of her white sheets and leaned over Drew. He appeared to be sleeping.

“Right, Drew?” May asked cheerfully.

Caroline covered her mouth with her hands.

“Um, May will be right down,” Norman told Max and the others, and scooted them out of the room.

Miss Bates walked up beside Norman and Caroline, arms crossed. May continued to be oblivious to the other people in the room, and gently shook Drew. He wouldn’t stir, though.

“Drew?” May wasn’t cheerful anymore, “Please, wake up.”

She knew deep down what was going on, but she refused to believe it.

“This always happens in this room,” Miss Bates muttered quietly, “Two go to the island, only one comes back.”

“That’s nonsense!” May shouted as she whipped around, her eyes tearing.

The three adults stood dumbfounded by her sudden outburst.

“Drew’s gonna wake up!” May said, “He’s just -”

She dropped to her knees, “sleeping.”

Norman, Caroline, and Miss Bates watched May wimper. They didn't know what to do, nor did they know how to correctly break it to her.

Tear drops rolled down her cheeks and she spoke again, now in a voice of realization, “If only…
I didn’t
pick up
the flower.”
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Well...that's it. I know...I killed the Toast! I'm such a *****. But anyway, hope you liked the story. I know I did. ^^
And now you can all go "Ohhhhhhh! How come I didn't see it coming!?" 'Cause ya know what, if you read the story over again, you'll see I practically blew the ending for ya a million times. I bet the cover art makes sense now, huh? :D I'm fabulous.
Heehee...look what I made:
treehousesaga25ba.jpg
 
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Rider

. . S K Y L I G H T
...........am I slow, or is it just me? Was the flower some sort of like, representative for Shuu's life or something? 0_0;; pluz explain to this poor dimwitted girl...the chapter was kinda short as well...but it was still good. expected you to be the last person to kill him, but oh wellz.
 

Encyclopika

The Queen
*gives .:CobaltFlux:. cookies*
You got it right...the flower did represent Drew. Anyone else want to speculate?
And does anyone like the banner I made??? XP
 

Tiffany

Staff member
Super Mod
O.M.G. YOU KILLED HIM. WTF? [/kidding] :p

Aw ;_;. It made me sad. The Toast is now soggy in his dark ocean.. :(
Great fic Ama. *imagines a piece of toast in a bowl of soup, sinking to the bottom :( *
 

Brioche

Hippie-Liberal
*randomly crashes through a door*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Dreeeeeewwwwwwwwwww! ;_; He's dead... I can't believe it.. such a heartwrenching (at least for me) twist... Poor Toast.

That's horrible.. Did Drew see a black ocean because he was going to die? And that's why he didn't want to swim in it? And because the flower represented Drew's life.. Did May kill him or something? *continues crying* Drew's dead, May's heartbroken, and I'm terrible at speculating...

Okay... about the banner and cover-art. You draw really well! ^_^ And I love the banner... with the tree and everything... very detailed.

I'll have to think more about what things represented. I love this story, despite my dislike for porn-related items. This is the first sad Contestshipping fic I've read, by the way. Great job with the sex-scene too. And the emotions are expressed rather nicely and in-character, as well.

I have to tell you, if you were an author, I'd definitely be reading your books! And for the romance novels, replacing the two main characters with Drew and May. ^_^ Overall, you did an excellent job with this fic. I'll be back with more theories, count on it! *quietly exits door*
 

Encyclopika

The Queen
Broiche said:
That's horrible.. Did Drew see a black ocean because he was going to die? And that's why he didn't want to swim in it? And because the flower represented Drew's life.. Did May kill him or something? *continues crying* Drew's dead, May's heartbroken, and I'm terrible at speculating...
You're actually wonderful at speculateing. Everything you just said was true!
*hands out tissues*
Okay... about the banner and cover-art. You draw really well! ^_^ And I love the banner... with the tree and everything... very detailed.
I didn't draw it...I just found pictures and spent an hour doing it. ^^;;
 
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Alopec

Still Dreaming...
You.... you... you... *sobs*

I'm speechless...

Well, although I'm sad it's over, this was a wonderful fanfic. it all makes sense now. But... Drew... ;_;
 

Brioche

Hippie-Liberal
Thanks, Encyclopika. ^_^ But I've come back--with new theories! o_o (Hee, and it's only been a few minutes.. o_o;;

Okay, here's what I got.

White = Life
Black = Death
Island = May and Drew
White flower = Drew's life
Ocean = Life/Death

Okay, since May saw white, she was destined to live. Because Drew saw black, he would eventually die, which he most likely knew (not wanting to swim in black ocean). The flower represented Drew's life because it was white (representing life), and the added green and purple just matched Drew's attire (hair, overshirt, and pants?).

The island represented Drew and May themselves. It was stormy because of pain, and beautiful in times of joy.

When the ocean flooded, it represented the end, either life or death. The surface (white) represented consciousness (also life), and the bottom (black) represented death. May tried to save Drew from death, but because he knew it was to be, he struggled against May and life. In the end, May's alive, Drew's dead.

Okay, I'm probably wrong on a few points, but oh well. I still have a few questions though... What did the fire, flower field, and flowers burning every time May touched them mean? They were important though I haven't a clue what they symbolize. Also, why did Drew die and May live?

Aside from that I have to say you're excellent at providing clear examples that are still able fly over my head. Ah, I love symbolism.. I have a story full of representation myself. ^_^ Correct me!

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Encyclopika said:
I didn't draw it...I just found pictures and spent an hour doing it. ^^;;

I meant the cover-art thing. If you didn't draw that, then.. I'm stupid?
 
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Encyclopika

The Queen
Broiche said:
The island represented Drew and May themselves. It was stormy because of pain, and beautiful in times of joy.
Oooooo...so close, but no dice. ^^

Okay, since May saw white, she was destined to live. Because Drew saw black, he would eventually die, which he most likely knew (not wanting to swim in black ocean). The flower represented Drew's life because it was white (representing life), and the added green and purple just matched Drew's attire (hair, overshirt, and pants?).
Yep. ^^
When the ocean flooded, it represented the end, either life or death. The surface (white) represented consciousness (also life), and the bottom (black) represented death. May tried to save Drew from death, but because he knew it was to be, he struggled against May and life. In the end, May's alive, Drew's dead.
Gah! So close...but this one was a tough one. Drew was gone from when May woke up *in the treehouse* onward...that's why it said "he was a ghost of his former self". The island knew May would try to save him, and so since she couldn't she would "die trying". Gonna be fluffy now, but it represents the sort of love where you'd "die for your partner".
I meant the cover-art thing. If you didn't draw that, then.. I'm stupid?
Naw, I drew the cover art, put pics together in Paint Shop Pro for the banner. Sorry I was confusing you. ^^;;;
What did the fire, flower field, and flowers burning every time May touched them mean? They were important though I haven't a clue what they symbolize.
Jo-Jo tried to figure it out a long time ago. I'm not gonna answer and see if she or anyone else can get it.
This is fun. ^^
Alopec said:
You.... you... you... *sobs*

I'm speechless...

Well, although I'm sad it's over, this was a wonderful fanfic. it all makes sense now. But... Drew... ;_;
For your first sentence...I'll finish it. "***". Yeah. I'm goin to hell. ^^
I know all of you are in shock that I killed Drew...despite the fact that I'm a Drew-*****. But that;s the beauty of writing fics for you guys. Remember...I choose to be unpredictable. ^_-
 

Brioche

Hippie-Liberal
Encyclopika said:
Me said:
The island represented Drew and May themselves. It was stormy because of pain, and beautiful in times of joy.

Oooooo...so close, but no dice. ^^

Darn!

Me said:
Okay, since May saw white, she was destined to live. Because Drew saw black, he would eventually die, which he most likely knew (not wanting to swim in black ocean). The flower represented Drew's life because it was white (representing life), and the added green and purple just matched Drew's attire (hair, overshirt, and pants?).

Yep. ^^

Yes!

Me said:
When the ocean flooded, it represented the end, either life or death. The surface (white) represented consciousness (also life), and the bottom (black) represented death. May tried to save Drew from death, but because he knew it was to be, he struggled against May and life. In the end, May's alive, Drew's dead.

Gah! So close...but this one was a tough one. Drew was gone from when May woke up *in the treehouse* onward...that's why it said "he was a ghost of his former self". The island knew May would try to save him, and so since she couldn't she would "die trying". Gonna be fluffy now, but it represents the sort of love where you'd "die for your partner".

Bah. Should've paid closer attention. I was going to say May/Drew were "willing to die for each other", but I thought that'd sound too sappy. :(

Me said:
What did the fire, flower field, and flowers burning every time May touched them mean? They were important though I haven't a clue what they symbolize.

Jo-Jo tried to figure it out a long time ago. I'm not gonna answer and see if she or anyone else can get it.
This is fun. ^^

Gah! You're so inexplicably eeevil! :p I (or someone else) WILL figure out what they mean, just you wait! >:3
 
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xsweet_peax

+kiss of an angel+
OMG! YOU KILLED OFF THE TOAST?!?! *hyperventilates*

WHY?!?! It's so sad!

The only thing I figured out is that the flower represented Drew and so since she burns flowers, she burned him, which means she caused his death. But ehh..

And the part where she was pulling him up but he struggled when they were being pulled down... Well, that part made me think that he was sacrificing himself for her. This is because as she was pulling him up, they were being pulled down by the ocean and then Drew pulled away and.......*sniff* DIES...! Therefore, the ocean would not let both come out alive and is willing to let them both die. SOOO, it forced them both down instead of letting both get to the surface. However, Drew wanted her to live so he sacrificed himself and pulled away so she could get to the surface....

.....

Ok, that might just be pure baloney but blah! I couldn't think of anything else.

The only thing I can think of is "HOW COULD YOU KILL TOAST?! HE'S THE MAN!" Lol XD
 

Encyclopika

The Queen
And the part where she was pulling him up but he struggled when they were being pulled down... Well, that part made me think that he was sacrificing himself for her. This is because as she was pulling him up, they were being pulled down by the ocean and then Drew pulled away and.......*sniff* DIES...! Therefore, the ocean would not let both come out alive and is willing to let them both die. SOOO, it forced them both down instead of letting both get to the surface. However, Drew wanted her to live so he sacrificed himself and pulled away so she could get to the surface....
Hmmmm...close...but Drew is already dead at that point. Drew is actually gone for quite a while. Ya know how when someone dies you have to "let go" and move on with your "life". I think you get it now. ^^
 

Alopec

Still Dreaming...
Great, now I'm going to be scared to read anything else you write... XD But I will anyway, it's just that these sort of things really affect me. I can't stop thinking about how horrible May must feel... and how she was so relieved when she woke up, but then she found out he hadn't made it... ;_;

Something funny/weird, though, I swear I just had this exact conversation with my mom:

Me: ;___; So sad...
Mom: What's wrong? Lemme guess, that Drew guy from Pokemon died? *rolls eyes*
Me: ... yes, actually. o_O;;
Mom: o_o;

She was only teasing me because I've been talking so much about him lately, but it's kinda scary how she was right... (well, in a way.)
 

xsweet_peax

+kiss of an angel+
Ooooohhh XD. Ok.

However, the thing I REALLY don't understand is how in one of the previous chapters, Drew would step on a flower and it would pop right back but when May steps on it, it burns up. It should be good for Drew since it doesn't die when he touches it and bad for May since she kills it everytime she touches it. However, he dies and May lives. Hmm...

I would have thought the flower represented life in a way, seeing as how they're so colorful, bright and lively. So, I would think Drew would be the one to be alive as he holds their life or something...and May would die as she brings death to them.....

......

Arrggg! That stupid flower field represents something but what....? So frustrating...LOL ^^.


EDIT: Oh! Just found something in Chapter 3...

“Don’t worry about it,” he said, “You’ll get out of here.” <--- said by Drew
I guess that was one hint that he was gonna stay behind while she leaves...
 
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Rider

. . S K Y L I G H T
Maybe it meant that each flower May held was another 'step' for the two, and the burning meant that that step meant they were one more step closer to getting off the island, but also having drew be killed?

And so Drew drowned? Before May woke up he drowned? That's a sucky way to die. -.-;;

The flower field might have represented Drew's life as well, because then there's the fact that at the very end, everything was dead? Unless my lack of reading previous chapters, and my lack of reading closely in general is making me look like a stupid a**hole who won't go away, then that's my theory....

he tried to catch him again

BING BING BING! ERROR ERROR ERROR! XD Unless that was intended, it makes no sense to me. Should it be 'She tried to catch him again'?
 
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Encyclopika

The Queen
Wow....thx?
Anyway, this is the third time I'm saying it...Drew was gone when May woke up in the treehouse...to make it clearer, the island projected his ghost to her...that ghost just symbolised her letting go and moving on with her life.
.:CobaltFlux:. said:
Maybe it meant that each flower May held was another 'step' for the two, and the burning meant that that step meant they were one more step closer to getting off the island, but also having drew be killed?
You're cold...the steps of their relationship was shown in the material things they got (EX: the bathroom, running water, heating system...blah blah)
 
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WaterTrainer243

Veteran Water Lover
NEIN!!! Oh my god! She killed Drew! *starts crying* It was good while it lasted.
 

Jo-Jo

blows stuff uhup
!!!

Whozuwhahuuhhhhhh??? I can't believe you did that! ;_; Seriously - you of all people! :p

That was a really effective ending. Depressing as hell, needless to say, but still. The one problem, as I'm guessing you know, is that it felt very abrupt, since the fic was originally going to be several chapters longer. If you ever feel like going back and rewriting it in a longer version, I won't turn my nose up. :p But yeah... I think more foreshadowing was needed that the end was almost upon them. Perhaps just a couple of moments where May has a feeling that all is not completely well... I dunno.

I still dig the symbolism, btw. Only..... I haven't figured out what it all means, either! XD I'm slow. The only thing I could come up with for the flower field is that the flowers represent Drew, and May burning them symbolises how she would eventually kill him. Which actually brings up another question - if Drew was already - *sniff* - dead before May woke up, then how could she have killed him? The final line implied it was touching the flower that did it, but he was gone before that happened. Unless I just misunderstood that bit.

Speaking of which, that was the thing that really broke my heart. May was asleep and unaware while Drew was dying. He must have been alone the whole time. :( I hope it was quick and he didn't spend ages suffering. Kinda makes me want to read a version of events in his POV - which is terribly morbid of me, I'm sure.

Not really sure how to round this off. Uh, congrats on finishing the fic... I loved it... and I'm glad canon!Drew is still alive? ;)
 

Encyclopika

The Queen
XD LMAO...alright...no one gets the flower field. I'm gonna explain everything I can remember right now.

The island is like a state of mind - ONE state of mind. That's why when one person goes, they can get out if they accept where they are. But when two people go, only one can make it out, and Miss Bates even told you that!
November said:
“It’s not like a regular island at all,” she continued, “It’s like a living thing that picks and chooses what it’s gonna do next.”
December said:
“Did you forget the Tish couple, already?” Miss Bates asked.

“Don’t bring that up,” he demanded.

“They were out for twenty days!” Miss Bates said, “In this very room. They had just gotten married and they had been in a terrible car accident, much like mine. And then, those twenty days later, the groom awoke to find his bride had died!”
*shakes head* I really blew the ending there and you all missed it. You shouldn've gotten the jive someone was gonna go. :p
Since the island is a state of mind, when one figures it out, that's the one that stays, and that explains Drew and the flowers.
November said:
Huh?” Drew turned to her, almost insulted, “Of course I care. But, if you wanna hear the truth, I don’t think this is an island.”

“You mean a main land?” May asked, finally getting the kind of answer she wanted.

“I don’t know,” he said, “It’s really strange. I mean, things pop up from no where. It’s just strange. To me, it seems like you’re too dense to realize that. Don’t you find it weird?”

“Well,” May started, a little angry at his remark, “I’m not complaining about that! I’m glad we have those things! How would we function without them? I just, at some point, would like to get back to my life, okay?”
Bolded the important stuff. Acceptance is the key to surviving. If you've noticed throughout the story, May accepts all of the things the island gives while Drew is...cautious about it. Good example the Black Ocean...but by then the island had already decided his fate. Drew's always pointing out what's weird with the island and May's always...well you read the quote right? :D This also shows I kept them both in-character. ^^ Now you see why I didn't really have a choice when killing poor Toast. ;_; I love unexpected endings. ^^
Anyway, how does this connect back to the flowers? The very first chapter practically sealed Drew's fate when he muttered how the island was weird(almost like insulting it XP after all it's done XP), and thus figuring it out somewhat, that it was suspicious. Obviously, one knows one best, so when Drew figured it out, he became a part of it - that's why he couldn't burn the flowers or hurt them - because he was a part of it. May burned them - destroyed them - because she didn't belong there. And eventually, May set the whole thing on fire, because she didn't belong. Fire is a good device to use when you want to symbolize destruction. Plus...I'm such a pyro. XB
The end is tricky, but a lot of you got it. The flower did represent Drew - a part of the island. Drew's ghost in the field would only decide May's fate - would she be selfless or selfish? The island would take both...it's not picky. In the end, May chose selfless, but the ghost still loved her so he made her let him go - he even helped her to the surface with the bubbles. She'd only be trying to save someone who was already gone...that moment symbolizes letting go of someone when they have passed and moving on with your life. And it's not a choice. Nothing good comes out of lingering on someone's death.
The white and black ocean was the easiest - black is a color that represents death and evil and white is for purity and good shtuff.
And the island is abrupt...Miss Bates spent 4 days(months) there and that couple spent 20 days(months). Whatever it feels like doing, as Miss Bates pointed out.
Oh, and another goodie that shoulds have gotten you thinking:
December said:
“Well, we didn’t until we had other unconscious patients in this room,” he said, dragging the other faculty into the conversation, “They all recalled an island, though none of them recalled a white ocean or a grass hut by a river. Still, it was an island nonetheless, and all recalled a giant flower field full of flower species alien to us all. They said each time they walked into that gorgeous field, the whole thing shot up into flames or withered away. They were frightened. Frankly, I still don’t believe it. I’m thankful for those dreams. It scares people into being more careful.”
Obviously if all the survivors say that and it happens to May and not Drew...you get it.
And about the actual happenings on the island...such as rain. Didn't you notice when someone cried in the real world it rained or snowed on the island? I even mentioned that as a hint for you all.
January said:
Ash and Brock nodded, and Ash went ahead to retrieve Drew’s Pokeballs. Out came Flygon, Roselia, and Masquerain. They had the same reactions as May’s Pokemon. Roselia cooed something softly, and all the other Pokemon listened in. She seemed to know what was going on, and tears fell from her face. It was almost like the rose girl knew something was going to happen and she buried her face in her roses. Beautifly said something as well, and the rest of the Pokemon began to whimper softly.
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There was no breeze at all, just the light falling of tiny snow flakes. Drew stuck out his tongue to catch one. A tiny snowflake came down quietly, almost attracted to him and landed on his top lip. He lapped it up.

“What’s it taste like?” May asked as she moved in on him.

Drew smirked and kissed her on the lips. He punctured her lips in with his tongue and for a while they stood, tasting the same snowflake. When they parted, May stood back to give an evaluation.

“Tastes like salt,” May said.
Bolded teh important stuff. Please tell me you all know that tears taste like salt...tis why the snow tasted like salt. The Pokemon were crying in the real world.
Though, things that happen on the island don't appear in the real world - April is a good example. XP
April said:
Caroline cried openly, yet silently, her face buried in Norman's chest.
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“Dammit!” Drew yelled as he and May ran through the torrential rain.
Anything I missed? Please tell me. ^^
 
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