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It really wasnt too much of flashback, but more of audible thought. Like Ash is giving voice to his thoughts. Anywayz, thanks for the review!
Sapphire Milotic said:This is really good and I would like to see more of it. I finally got the time to read this awesome fic.
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Er, so I can recognize her if I do face off against her tomorrow
“Hi, I’m sir Ash… ...” Our hero promoted himself to knighthood, and waved his hands around in a desperate call for attention, eroding his newfound status away.
In a move that can only be described as a turning to the lesser of two evils
“Victorious?? That is what your name is?? That is real corny, even going by your standards. Let me introduce myself as well. My name is Sue Perr. Guess what the phonetics are??”
“Let… Me… Introduce… You… To… THIS!!!” Misty’s words came out in staccato growls, cutting off Victor E. Reyes in mid-sentence, and reached behind her to pull out her preferred tool of destruction. The following scene must be done anime-style, and the screen must be darkened even then, for it was an example of pure gratuitous violence, but which had an important part of the story to fill out and thus could not be cut out entirely; out of element, but certainly not out of place.
“I mean, you made fun of my cap!!! Do you know how many postcards I had to send in?? I practically went to hell and back for this cap, and you guys call the cap too stuffy??”
“Do NOT get sexist with me, Mr. Ketchum, and spill your guts now, before I spill them for you.” Our heroine growled, waving a fist for a threatening effect.
“Ash, I called reception just now and asked about the itenary
…blow, before landing with all the subliminal skill it possessed.
The worst part was that he did not know what the something was; he only knew he had to find a solution, a stop-gap measure to allay the growing fears in his heart.
Misty felt a tad guilty over what had just conspired over the past few minutes and tried to make it up to her friend.
the happy demeanour reminiscent of a diabetic patient on dialysis for too long.
Ah! Should be “itinerary”.
Subliminal? Like sublime skill? ‘Cause Subliminal means something else entirely. Oh wait, or do you mean like skill that the pokemon itself wasn’t even conscious of (that’s some deep running skill)? ‘Cause if you meant it that way, it makes sense.
One thing, though; would skill swap really allow Gengar to be able to use hyper beam?
Eh, you used a LOT of metaphorical language while describing attacks and Pokemon’s moods and things.
Our never-say-die hero embodied the stuff that dreams are made of, coupled with the happy demeanour reminiscent of a diabetic patient on dialysis for too long.
The following scene must be done anime-style, and the screen must be darkened even then, for it was an example of pure gratuitous violence, but which had an important part of the story to fill out and thus could not be cut out entirely; out of element, but certainly not out of place.
A straw-coloured entity flashed by from directly behind Dusclops, sending chunks of ice skywards for all of a few seconds, with the yellow tail glowing white and slamming into the exposed back of Dusclops, even as our hero stood still with mouth hitting the ice anime style, scarcely believing what had just occurred, remnants of the battle against Sabrina flooding back to haunt him.
Victor E. Reyes, for all his emphasized and highlighted abilities, clearly missed that which was occurring right beneath his nose, as he failed to notice that our heroine’s tan had given way to a deep shade of magenta, with veins bulging till she looked as though she would sooner pop every blood vessel in her face and die of hemorrhage than open her mouth to speak. Somehow, the latter was achieved, without the prophesied vessel popping.
Ash Ketchum does has the rare ability to remain competitive even with basic Pokemon
Brings new meaning to the word speed, being extremely quick and dexterous in the air.
…, and his none-to-pleased reaction itself was enough
know that eating ice cream with the spoons
…would not be able to easily differentiate truth from falsity easily.
Obeying the command instantly, Dusclops did an about turn
“Gengar, avoid the attack and use hypnosis”