True's Sprite show V 2.0

[Mangekyo Sharingan]

i put this in the wrong thread last time so here

Welcome to true’s sprite show. This is were you rate my sprites and give me constructive criticism, these are all my best sprites that I have done

So what do you think?
(If you like. click on my banner to go to a request shop were I work at)
Credit: id like to give credit to coronis for Wilt,and Red's,Lance,and Bruno's body's (but i edited/added/recolred them please dont call it theft im giving credit )

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

hey, these are pretty good! I like the way ya redid Brendan, also like how ya redid Lance.

the little kid in the left hand bottom corner is a little weird... n' the one that looks like Goku, the hair is a little funny. but ya did good! ^^

 

[POKErUsAm]

goku is a little odd...
but the rest is fine

 

[Mangekyo Sharingan]

thanx anything i need to work on...

 

[Ultimate]

no offense.. most of these are cut and pasted and recoloured.. like what you did to ashbrawly.. you cutted brawly's head off and paste it on coronis's ash... just need to inprove a little thats all... and you maybe wanna give some cred it coronis...

 

[OmegaDragon]

Most of these sprites are just cut and paste. You need to blend them so that they look more natural. You also need to give credit to Coronis for his Red sprite

 

[Shadow_Fox]

Most of these sprites are just cut and paste. You need to blend them so that they look more natural. You also need to give credit to Coronis for his Red sprite

I agree with him, you also might want not want to use that bright green that are on half of them. Some of the outlines don't look like they fit with the colors used, either. My advice, slowdown making these. Request shops arent the best way to learn how to make high quality sprites.

You need to credit Coronis for his Will sprite, as well.
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[Mangekyo Sharingan]

thanx for the advice ill try to make it blend more...and not only just cut in pace... (im sorry Coronis (i look up to him in secretcy i LLLLUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV his sprites he is like my idol.....i want to be just like him..)

o0o and the kid in left bottom corner is a request that a person made in the shop he said it came out for the most part how he wanted..and lime green is one of my fav colors sorry...

 

[Mangekyo Sharingan]

sorry to dp but i just made 2 mores sprites one is a remake of the kid not my best but....o0o0 well...

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

they're pretty good... though the 2nd one's head looks like it was chopped off... then put back on... but oh, well! ^^

 

[Mangekyo Sharingan]

^lol^ so what should i do...here are some more

 

[Silon]

Unfortunately, I can't use those ones either. D: They look too much like the original sprite.
A) Ranger
B) Norman
C) Cool Trainer