tactlessdarckcloud
2 sweet hell n beyon
I know it -_- ....I´ll want to post next chapters(I love 4),but I´m afraid I´ll have to post it without any correction on grammar...and it haven´t got title yet,so....
*edits*Well,here´s the nice version,now you can enjoy it properly ^_^
Chapter 3, The Encounter-
"Now I'm regreting that I left home..." complained Tactless. It had been weeks since he started his journey.
At the moment, he was walking heavily through route 110. And he didn't seem to be enjoying it, because
during the last three days the weather has been changing constantly.
"Damn weather," Tactless said, glaring at the rain above his head. Suddenly, as if the weather had heard the
boy's offense, the rain froze, and snow started falling from the sky.
"F***, what´s next?" the boy said bitterly. He hated the snow even more than the rain.
"I've got to look for shelter..." As he said this, he saw some guys with red capes trying to force an old man
to say something.
"WHERE IS IT?!" said one of the guys,grabbing the old man by the neck.
"It's none of your business, crap-geezer." the guy said as he threw the old man onto the ground.
When Tactless saw this, a feeling of pain pushed his heart. He walked towards the red caped people, and with
all of his bravery,he said, " Leave that poor man alone! "
As he said this, all of them turned around, and something shocked him. He recognized one of the girls as Sei,
his childhood friend.
"Sei?" he asked. He remembered clearly how they had met each other. Some years ago, he went to Johto to
visit his cousin in Azalea town. That day they played in the Ilex forest, which was a big mistake on their
part. When the night fell, they got lost, and couldn´t find they way back home.Just then, a girl was passing
by, nd after hearing their problem, decided to help them find the way out, since she was a more experienced
trainer. They quickly became friends, and when Tactless went back home to Hoenn, he and Sei started sending
letters to each other, back and forth.
"Numel, body slam!" he dodged the pokemon's attack just in time. Tactless then took out a Pokeball. Sei took
out one of her own as well.
"So, you've learned to do something else than suck?" she asked fiercely.
"You'll be amazed to see how much." answered Tactless with a grin, trying to intimidate her. He knew he
couldn't beat her, as most of his Pokemon's attacks were only for appealing...but he had to try, didn't he?
He couldn't give up. He had to show Sei just how much he had improved. So he sent out his best Pokemon.
"Go,Taily!" The bird, which had evolved into a Swellow since Tactless' last encounter with Sei, popped
gracefully out of her pokeball, then prepared to attack.
"Taily evolved?" she asked. "Anyway, let´s bring her some memories back...go, Anzu!" Sei released from her
Pokeball a Chikorita. Both Tactless and Taily remembered painfuly how that little thing had always beaten
them in the past.
"Taily, fly!" he commanded, kind of nervously. Just then, he gasped in shock, as the sun was shining bright.
"Anzu, use solar beam," Sei ordered, taking advantage with the sudden weather change. Tactless had lost all
his confidence, as the attack hit Taily directly, causing her to tremble in the air. However, she regained
control, as the boy sighed in relief.
"Keep on going, deary," the girl said, as her Chikorita continued firing light beams at the poor Swellow.
"Taily, try to dodge them!" Tactless advised his bird. The Swellow flying around in circles in the air, which
helped her to dodge the Chikorita's assaults.
"Taily, NOW!" the boy ordered. The bird obeyed, and swept down gracefuly, hiting Anzu and knocking her
down. Sei glared at him with some rage, and quickly retrieved her Pokemon. Just then, a voice came from
behind.
"We found it, let's go," called a tall man, with short and purple hair.
"Yes, commander Tabitha..." the girl answered "Don't get in our way, Tactless. It's for your own good," Sei
warned him as she followed the man.
"Oh my God," the boy said in shock. "This can't be true, not my best friend Sei..." Tactless just could not
believe a sweet girl like Sei was on Team Magma.
*****
now you can continue your lifes
*edits*Well,here´s the nice version,now you can enjoy it properly ^_^
Chapter 3, The Encounter-
"Now I'm regreting that I left home..." complained Tactless. It had been weeks since he started his journey.
At the moment, he was walking heavily through route 110. And he didn't seem to be enjoying it, because
during the last three days the weather has been changing constantly.
"Damn weather," Tactless said, glaring at the rain above his head. Suddenly, as if the weather had heard the
boy's offense, the rain froze, and snow started falling from the sky.
"F***, what´s next?" the boy said bitterly. He hated the snow even more than the rain.
"I've got to look for shelter..." As he said this, he saw some guys with red capes trying to force an old man
to say something.
"WHERE IS IT?!" said one of the guys,grabbing the old man by the neck.
"It's none of your business, crap-geezer." the guy said as he threw the old man onto the ground.
When Tactless saw this, a feeling of pain pushed his heart. He walked towards the red caped people, and with
all of his bravery,he said, " Leave that poor man alone! "
As he said this, all of them turned around, and something shocked him. He recognized one of the girls as Sei,
his childhood friend.
"Sei?" he asked. He remembered clearly how they had met each other. Some years ago, he went to Johto to
visit his cousin in Azalea town. That day they played in the Ilex forest, which was a big mistake on their
part. When the night fell, they got lost, and couldn´t find they way back home.Just then, a girl was passing
by, nd after hearing their problem, decided to help them find the way out, since she was a more experienced
trainer. They quickly became friends, and when Tactless went back home to Hoenn, he and Sei started sending
letters to each other, back and forth.
"Numel, body slam!" he dodged the pokemon's attack just in time. Tactless then took out a Pokeball. Sei took
out one of her own as well.
"So, you've learned to do something else than suck?" she asked fiercely.
"You'll be amazed to see how much." answered Tactless with a grin, trying to intimidate her. He knew he
couldn't beat her, as most of his Pokemon's attacks were only for appealing...but he had to try, didn't he?
He couldn't give up. He had to show Sei just how much he had improved. So he sent out his best Pokemon.
"Go,Taily!" The bird, which had evolved into a Swellow since Tactless' last encounter with Sei, popped
gracefully out of her pokeball, then prepared to attack.
"Taily evolved?" she asked. "Anyway, let´s bring her some memories back...go, Anzu!" Sei released from her
Pokeball a Chikorita. Both Tactless and Taily remembered painfuly how that little thing had always beaten
them in the past.
"Taily, fly!" he commanded, kind of nervously. Just then, he gasped in shock, as the sun was shining bright.
"Anzu, use solar beam," Sei ordered, taking advantage with the sudden weather change. Tactless had lost all
his confidence, as the attack hit Taily directly, causing her to tremble in the air. However, she regained
control, as the boy sighed in relief.
"Keep on going, deary," the girl said, as her Chikorita continued firing light beams at the poor Swellow.
"Taily, try to dodge them!" Tactless advised his bird. The Swellow flying around in circles in the air, which
helped her to dodge the Chikorita's assaults.
"Taily, NOW!" the boy ordered. The bird obeyed, and swept down gracefuly, hiting Anzu and knocking her
down. Sei glared at him with some rage, and quickly retrieved her Pokemon. Just then, a voice came from
behind.
"We found it, let's go," called a tall man, with short and purple hair.
"Yes, commander Tabitha..." the girl answered "Don't get in our way, Tactless. It's for your own good," Sei
warned him as she followed the man.
"Oh my God," the boy said in shock. "This can't be true, not my best friend Sei..." Tactless just could not
believe a sweet girl like Sei was on Team Magma.
*****
now you can continue your lifes
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