AwesomeMudkip14
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This story is about the journey of Tyler as he attempts to become a top trainer in Johto and is aided by the people he meets throughout his adventure. Please write reviews about it and hopefully, i'll be able to improve anything that you think is poor in quality for future chapters. Rating-PG
This is the intro to my story: Intro 1
Chapter 1: Is That All
Chapter 2: Meet and Greet
Chapter 3: A New Friend Indeed
Chapter 4: The Masked Aurora (Part 1) (Coming Soon)
Chapter 1 - Is That All?
Finally, he had received his first Pokémon. The delightful looking creature was encapsulated in blue fur with an oversized head that gave it an awkward stance however; Tyler felt that his glistening eyes held many secrets. Almost automatically, this young trainer felt a connection with his brand new partner and even though, this might not be reciprocated by Piplup, he didn’t care. Piplup’s eyes were shining brightly with innocence and as the baby Pokémon squeaked, the fire of determination inside of his body was beginning to erupt by the fact that it had just dawned on him that his journey had officially begun.
He was so over involved with Piplup that he had completely forgotten that Professor Rowan was witnessing this event and had to shake himself out of his dreams of success and accomplishment. The stern expression on Rowan’s face showed his disapproval that Tyler hadn’t fully been concentrating on his elaborate speech and was fishing for an apology.
“This marks the beginning of your quest throughout the Sinnoh region but I must say I’m not entirely confident that you’re acting seriously about the current situation” said Professor Rowan sternly.
“Trust me, I may seem like I’m on a different planet but actually, I’m fully concentrating…on planning my route to success. With my new friend by my side, we will be able to overcome any problems that we face” replied Tyler, in a matter of fact tone.
“One last thing before you vacate my laboratory, would you like to nickname your Piplup?” questioned Rowan.
“Um…I need a name that will sum up all of its great qualities like it’s cuteness and bubbly personality for example. How about…Pippy?” said Tyler, unsure about his first suggestion. Then, Tyler gazed into Pippy’s eyes, waiting to witness his reaction to his new name.
“Pip, Piplup” squawked Pippy, his response displaying the desired result, a mixture of positivity and excitement. It continued to leap around the impeccably clean floor before slipping into a corner and smashing his head onto the metallic skirting board that ran parallel to the concrete wall. Pippy suddenly started to well up with tears and began to wail and screech, spraying the floor with glistening droplets of pain.
A twang of guilt hit Tyler as he experienced the little creature’s first moment of hurt and unfortunately, this created a segment of doubt in the back of Tyler’s mind about his skills as a trainer. Like a tumour, it would continue to grow and eventually, Tyler would succumb to this incapacitating disease.
Tyler exited the dim laboratory into the welcoming arms of the sunlight of Sandgem Town and unaware of his impending doom, he allowed this new warmth into his body as it infiltrated into his mind. It gave him a sense of hope. This was the commencing of Tyler’s adventure. A feeling of fear and excitement flooded around his bloodstream as he faced uncertainty in his future encounters.
“Pippy, finish Yanma off by pecking him” shouted Tyler. This was his first actual chance at capturing a Pokémon but he was so distracted by this opportunity that he had completely forgotten how to complete his task. A white spark appeared around Piplup’s mouth before the beak fully morphed into a blinding area of glorious light. Once the move had collided with Yanma’s facial area, Tyler knew he had won the battle but as the wings on the fainted Yanma’s back started to stutter, his mind went completely blank. He froze and as he stared at the fainted insect, his hand became sweaty and clenched.
“Throw a Pokeball” screamed Ash, his mentor who was helping him achieve his first capture. He and his friends had given him advice on how to deal with everyday life within the wilderness of the Pokémon world which would greatly advance his skills for future ordeals. Also, he had regained some of the confidence which had been lost for so long.
Thankfully, this acted as a well needed wake up call. Tyler grabbed his pristine, blue backpack and attempted to retrieve the capturing device. The cool and smooth texture of the ball created an aura of hope and with this new found confidence, he chucked the Pokeball in the direction of the lifeless Yanma. A rush of adrenalin circled around his bloodstream as he anticipated the moment of capture or failure.
Success! The ball sprung open as it hit the defenceless Pokémon and the entirety of the device was displayed. A metallic look with modern and clean designs that fully catered for the inhabiting creature but these details weren’t important in Tyler’s mind. They were just part of a much bigger picture that depicted his first capture in all of its beauty and might and this finally marked the turning where Tyler would become a truly powerful trainer.
The spherical trap had caught its prey as the enemy morphed into a mountain of white light and was trapped inside its cage. It glistened as it descended to the solid earth and after a brief moment of uncertainty while the device rattled from side to side, displaying the desperate attempts of escape, the centre circle glowed to indicate capture.
Finally, the first positive sign that Tyler was one step closer to obtaining his life long goal at becoming the ultimate trainer in Sinnoh. He grabbed the ball and clenched his fingers around it to allow the triumphant feeling absorb into his body. Thanks to the people around him to support his efforts, he had now been able to overcome his reservations about the problems that he would face in his future endeavours and hopefully allow this shy and intrepid hero to further explore into the Sinnoh region.
Tyler arose from his unconscious state of sleep and as he fumbled around for the light switch, he accidentally caught his Pokeballs lying on the side of the wooden dresser. They slowly rotated as they glistened in the eerie moonlight before succumbing to the eventual clash with the tiling covering a large proportion of the floor and revealing their bountiful contents.
Crying with all of its might, Yanma screeched but fortunately, hadn’t disturbed the neighbours sleeping in the room next to his and after a stern warning from his trainer, the cuddly creature reluctantly returned to its dwelling. However, Piplup wouldn’t be so easy to deal with and ended up running onto the balcony adjoined to his bedroom and tried to force its pudgy face through the frosty railings.
After prizing the Pokémon from between the bars, Tyler gazed onto the local area. It was stunning. The first few trickles of light began to pour over the horizon and started to illuminate the massive lake that was positioned behind the house. A few ripples on the water indicated that its inhabitants were stirring and beginning to wriggle free from the dark depths beneath the glistening surface. A group of stringy trees rustled as the night breathed its last breaths before falling into submission and relinquishing its title to day.
It felt like another beautiful winter’s day and he completely ignored the fact that the horizon was besmirched with a red outline, dismissing it as an old wives tale and not believing that this omen would have any relevance to him or his life.
After he had swiftly packed all of the necessary items including clothes, food and Pokeballs into a blue backpack, he vacated his room and started to run his fingers down the smooth finish of the wall so he could note where he was. Tyler finally grasped the handle on the door and pressed down to allow him to access the bathroom.
The click of the switch signalled the commencing of the flood of light that entered into the room, temporarily blinding him and as he struggled to find his footing, he stumbled and knocked over a vase in the left corner of the pristinely cleaned room. Nervously, he anticipated a flurry of movement from his parents’ room and as the sound continuously echoed throughout the hallowed rooms of the house, he froze.
Thankfully, he was safe from his parents’ wrath. Tyler opened up the window to let a cool breath of fresh air fly over his body and returned to the mirror where he saw his bristly chestnut hair waving around in the light dawn breeze. The young adventurer found this sign to be comforting and welcoming to the start of his brand new career as a trainer.
However, his preparation time was cut short by a sharp ringing sound that was cutting through the silence within the once peaceful household. Eventually, he registered the fact that this harsh sound was that of the phone downstairs and Tyler, taking two steps at a time, rushed swiftly down the carpeted staircase.
A few moments later he was facing a screen filled with the welcoming face of a nurse from the hospital in New Bark Town in the Johto region. The news that had just hit him felt like he had been left to starve in the desert, a feeling of desperation and loneliness. Separation mixed with anger. How could someone do his? WHY would someone do this?
His mother who had suddenly appeared behind Tyler asked “Are you alright, dear?”
“It’s…it’s Jimmy, he’s in hospital with a concussion to the head.” Answered Tyler, all of his emotional distraught echoed in his response.
A flood of hurt swept through Tyler’s mother as the fear for her son’s wellbeing suddenly floated to the surface of her face and a small tear was building in her right eye.
The next few minutes were a blur as he constantly pictured the image of his incapacitated sibling, lying there pathetically. His mother had ordered everyone to enter the car, shouting demands at Tyler’s father who was still in his pyjamas when he switched on the engine of the jeep-like vehicle.
The tyre screech roared around the surrounding environment, disrupting the Pokémon in the neighbouring trees and causing mayhem as they sped along the muddy track, heading towards their final destination.
His brother had stayed in Johto after Tyler’s family relocated to Sinnoh and continued his adventure, attempting to gain the title of Champion. Jimmy was known for his powerful Pokémon and unlimited capabilities when coping with difficult situations which made this incident so much more shocking. He loved his brother and know he was in a terrible amount of pain.
To the east, the sun was peaking over the skyline, still ruby red…blood red. Today was meant to mark the beginning of his Sinnoh journey as he attempted to emulate the efforts of his brother in Johto but this had been halted already. If his brother couldn’t deal with the Pokemon world then how would he?
The phrase “The more beautiful it is, the more dangerous” circulated around his head along with the other thoughts and images. The shadows of trees leapt past the window as they sped across the countryside and it was as if they were trying to hunt someone down, a criminal that was in a car in front.
Was his journey over already?
This is the intro to my story: Intro 1
Chapter 1: Is That All
Chapter 2: Meet and Greet
Chapter 3: A New Friend Indeed
Chapter 4: The Masked Aurora (Part 1) (Coming Soon)
Chapter 1 - Is That All?
Finally, he had received his first Pokémon. The delightful looking creature was encapsulated in blue fur with an oversized head that gave it an awkward stance however; Tyler felt that his glistening eyes held many secrets. Almost automatically, this young trainer felt a connection with his brand new partner and even though, this might not be reciprocated by Piplup, he didn’t care. Piplup’s eyes were shining brightly with innocence and as the baby Pokémon squeaked, the fire of determination inside of his body was beginning to erupt by the fact that it had just dawned on him that his journey had officially begun.
He was so over involved with Piplup that he had completely forgotten that Professor Rowan was witnessing this event and had to shake himself out of his dreams of success and accomplishment. The stern expression on Rowan’s face showed his disapproval that Tyler hadn’t fully been concentrating on his elaborate speech and was fishing for an apology.
“This marks the beginning of your quest throughout the Sinnoh region but I must say I’m not entirely confident that you’re acting seriously about the current situation” said Professor Rowan sternly.
“Trust me, I may seem like I’m on a different planet but actually, I’m fully concentrating…on planning my route to success. With my new friend by my side, we will be able to overcome any problems that we face” replied Tyler, in a matter of fact tone.
“One last thing before you vacate my laboratory, would you like to nickname your Piplup?” questioned Rowan.
“Um…I need a name that will sum up all of its great qualities like it’s cuteness and bubbly personality for example. How about…Pippy?” said Tyler, unsure about his first suggestion. Then, Tyler gazed into Pippy’s eyes, waiting to witness his reaction to his new name.
“Pip, Piplup” squawked Pippy, his response displaying the desired result, a mixture of positivity and excitement. It continued to leap around the impeccably clean floor before slipping into a corner and smashing his head onto the metallic skirting board that ran parallel to the concrete wall. Pippy suddenly started to well up with tears and began to wail and screech, spraying the floor with glistening droplets of pain.
A twang of guilt hit Tyler as he experienced the little creature’s first moment of hurt and unfortunately, this created a segment of doubt in the back of Tyler’s mind about his skills as a trainer. Like a tumour, it would continue to grow and eventually, Tyler would succumb to this incapacitating disease.
Tyler exited the dim laboratory into the welcoming arms of the sunlight of Sandgem Town and unaware of his impending doom, he allowed this new warmth into his body as it infiltrated into his mind. It gave him a sense of hope. This was the commencing of Tyler’s adventure. A feeling of fear and excitement flooded around his bloodstream as he faced uncertainty in his future encounters.
***
“Pippy, finish Yanma off by pecking him” shouted Tyler. This was his first actual chance at capturing a Pokémon but he was so distracted by this opportunity that he had completely forgotten how to complete his task. A white spark appeared around Piplup’s mouth before the beak fully morphed into a blinding area of glorious light. Once the move had collided with Yanma’s facial area, Tyler knew he had won the battle but as the wings on the fainted Yanma’s back started to stutter, his mind went completely blank. He froze and as he stared at the fainted insect, his hand became sweaty and clenched.
“Throw a Pokeball” screamed Ash, his mentor who was helping him achieve his first capture. He and his friends had given him advice on how to deal with everyday life within the wilderness of the Pokémon world which would greatly advance his skills for future ordeals. Also, he had regained some of the confidence which had been lost for so long.
Thankfully, this acted as a well needed wake up call. Tyler grabbed his pristine, blue backpack and attempted to retrieve the capturing device. The cool and smooth texture of the ball created an aura of hope and with this new found confidence, he chucked the Pokeball in the direction of the lifeless Yanma. A rush of adrenalin circled around his bloodstream as he anticipated the moment of capture or failure.
Success! The ball sprung open as it hit the defenceless Pokémon and the entirety of the device was displayed. A metallic look with modern and clean designs that fully catered for the inhabiting creature but these details weren’t important in Tyler’s mind. They were just part of a much bigger picture that depicted his first capture in all of its beauty and might and this finally marked the turning where Tyler would become a truly powerful trainer.
The spherical trap had caught its prey as the enemy morphed into a mountain of white light and was trapped inside its cage. It glistened as it descended to the solid earth and after a brief moment of uncertainty while the device rattled from side to side, displaying the desperate attempts of escape, the centre circle glowed to indicate capture.
Finally, the first positive sign that Tyler was one step closer to obtaining his life long goal at becoming the ultimate trainer in Sinnoh. He grabbed the ball and clenched his fingers around it to allow the triumphant feeling absorb into his body. Thanks to the people around him to support his efforts, he had now been able to overcome his reservations about the problems that he would face in his future endeavours and hopefully allow this shy and intrepid hero to further explore into the Sinnoh region.
***
Tyler arose from his unconscious state of sleep and as he fumbled around for the light switch, he accidentally caught his Pokeballs lying on the side of the wooden dresser. They slowly rotated as they glistened in the eerie moonlight before succumbing to the eventual clash with the tiling covering a large proportion of the floor and revealing their bountiful contents.
Crying with all of its might, Yanma screeched but fortunately, hadn’t disturbed the neighbours sleeping in the room next to his and after a stern warning from his trainer, the cuddly creature reluctantly returned to its dwelling. However, Piplup wouldn’t be so easy to deal with and ended up running onto the balcony adjoined to his bedroom and tried to force its pudgy face through the frosty railings.
After prizing the Pokémon from between the bars, Tyler gazed onto the local area. It was stunning. The first few trickles of light began to pour over the horizon and started to illuminate the massive lake that was positioned behind the house. A few ripples on the water indicated that its inhabitants were stirring and beginning to wriggle free from the dark depths beneath the glistening surface. A group of stringy trees rustled as the night breathed its last breaths before falling into submission and relinquishing its title to day.
It felt like another beautiful winter’s day and he completely ignored the fact that the horizon was besmirched with a red outline, dismissing it as an old wives tale and not believing that this omen would have any relevance to him or his life.
After he had swiftly packed all of the necessary items including clothes, food and Pokeballs into a blue backpack, he vacated his room and started to run his fingers down the smooth finish of the wall so he could note where he was. Tyler finally grasped the handle on the door and pressed down to allow him to access the bathroom.
The click of the switch signalled the commencing of the flood of light that entered into the room, temporarily blinding him and as he struggled to find his footing, he stumbled and knocked over a vase in the left corner of the pristinely cleaned room. Nervously, he anticipated a flurry of movement from his parents’ room and as the sound continuously echoed throughout the hallowed rooms of the house, he froze.
Thankfully, he was safe from his parents’ wrath. Tyler opened up the window to let a cool breath of fresh air fly over his body and returned to the mirror where he saw his bristly chestnut hair waving around in the light dawn breeze. The young adventurer found this sign to be comforting and welcoming to the start of his brand new career as a trainer.
However, his preparation time was cut short by a sharp ringing sound that was cutting through the silence within the once peaceful household. Eventually, he registered the fact that this harsh sound was that of the phone downstairs and Tyler, taking two steps at a time, rushed swiftly down the carpeted staircase.
A few moments later he was facing a screen filled with the welcoming face of a nurse from the hospital in New Bark Town in the Johto region. The news that had just hit him felt like he had been left to starve in the desert, a feeling of desperation and loneliness. Separation mixed with anger. How could someone do his? WHY would someone do this?
His mother who had suddenly appeared behind Tyler asked “Are you alright, dear?”
“It’s…it’s Jimmy, he’s in hospital with a concussion to the head.” Answered Tyler, all of his emotional distraught echoed in his response.
A flood of hurt swept through Tyler’s mother as the fear for her son’s wellbeing suddenly floated to the surface of her face and a small tear was building in her right eye.
The next few minutes were a blur as he constantly pictured the image of his incapacitated sibling, lying there pathetically. His mother had ordered everyone to enter the car, shouting demands at Tyler’s father who was still in his pyjamas when he switched on the engine of the jeep-like vehicle.
The tyre screech roared around the surrounding environment, disrupting the Pokémon in the neighbouring trees and causing mayhem as they sped along the muddy track, heading towards their final destination.
His brother had stayed in Johto after Tyler’s family relocated to Sinnoh and continued his adventure, attempting to gain the title of Champion. Jimmy was known for his powerful Pokémon and unlimited capabilities when coping with difficult situations which made this incident so much more shocking. He loved his brother and know he was in a terrible amount of pain.
To the east, the sun was peaking over the skyline, still ruby red…blood red. Today was meant to mark the beginning of his Sinnoh journey as he attempted to emulate the efforts of his brother in Johto but this had been halted already. If his brother couldn’t deal with the Pokemon world then how would he?
The phrase “The more beautiful it is, the more dangerous” circulated around his head along with the other thoughts and images. The shadows of trees leapt past the window as they sped across the countryside and it was as if they were trying to hunt someone down, a criminal that was in a car in front.
Was his journey over already?
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