Umbreon Idea...

[azhura]

Well, this is just the idea (kind of) for the Umbreon pic.
Suggestions to improve it?
(I didn't liked it. Really)

www.deviantart.com/deviation/28177500

 

[Torchic23]

I love your art style [referrs to Flygon] Umm, if it's ok, can I put this on my site too? I'm so desperate for fan art!

-Torchic23

 

[azhura]

I love your art style [referrs to Flygon] Umm, if it's ok, can I put this on my site too? I'm so desperate for fan art!

-Torchic23

I love your site! It's very cool and nice.
Yes, you can put this in your website, with the same conditions of the flygon wallpaper.
But, won't you prefer a smaller version of the flygon? It's just to keep it in the same proportions of the other pictures in your fan-art section.
Hey, check your guestbook.

 

[Seel Dingo]

oh wooaah....that's relaly awesome looking o.o
you don't like it? YOU'RE CRAZY!
i think it's awesome ^___^

 

[Angelic Elf Ivy]

oh wooaah....that's relaly awesome looking o.o
you don't like it? YOU'RE CRAZY!
i think it's awesome ^___^

I think the same thing! It's great! It's the kindda art that makes you think it's real. (or at least it is in my opinion, and by real I mean from the show) I'd love to see more of your art, it's wonderful!

 

[Kirby]

o_o;

Why did you put it in scraps D:

I really like the style. The clouds are well done, and you did an excellent job on the moon reflecting off the fur. The eyes are what really catches me, because you really took time to make them look real. I love the look of how Umbreon is walking out of the fog, very nice.

Keep up the good work, and I honestly think you should move this into your gallery on DA.

 

[Who Said Pikachu?]

Pretty like the Flygon.
Maybe more fog through higher up in the picture? I love the fog, the fog is gorgeous. The picture looks like it's cut in half with the background though, like where the fog ends it becomes something else. It needs to blend in together more and become one. Maybe more clouds in the sky or something?
Also the yellow on the Umbreon's right side ear isn't as thick as the one on the leftwhich makes it seem a lil lopsided.
Those eyes creep me out, I don't know which one does it more though. Aside from that fact they do look really good.
Maybe if you could see more of the umbreon including it's legs? He overall seems a little lopsided and that might help.
Also with the rings on tail/ears you could jagger the line some to give it a more realistic appearance? That's a choice thing though as it's not really how the proper pokemon is but eh.
Anyways, hope I'm not being too picky.

Happy hunting!
~Pika!

 

[azhura]

oh wooaah....that's relaly awesome looking o.o
you don't like it? YOU'RE CRAZY!
i think it's awesome ^___^

I didn't liked it initially for the same reasons that Who Said Pikachu listed somewhere in this thread. And you are also right, i'm pretty insane when it comes to my artwork. If something doesn't satisfy me in the pic, i usually erase the file and start again. But i didn't do it with this one cuz' i wanted to post it so i could see (or hear, or read, or whatever) another opinion, less subjective, and focused mainly to the overall look of the image.

And , i'm glad you liked it.

 

[azhura]

I think the same thing! It's great! It's the kindda art that makes you think it's real. (or at least it is in my opinion, and by real I mean from the show) I'd love to see more of your art, it's wonderful!

Honestly, thanks a lot for your kind comments.
If you wanna see more of my art, please check out my Deviation gallery.
Or instead you could just wait a little and see new artwork made for Torchic23 in her cool website.
Again, thanks a lot.

 

[azhura]

o_o;

Why did you put it in scraps D:

I really like the style. The clouds are well done, and you did an excellent job on the moon reflecting off the fur. The eyes are what really catches me, because you really took time to make them look real. I love the look of how Umbreon is walking out of the fog, very nice.

Keep up the good work, and I honestly think you should move this into your gallery on DA.

Hey, are you too in DA? Please send me your gallery's direction so i can see your work (and increment your daily visits)!

About the comments, thanx, but i think this one it's just an idea. Nothing finished. In comparation with my another Poke Art (Flygon), it's far worser (it's "worser" correct?). That one was the main reason i wanted to put it in Scraps. When i finish this thing, i will move it to Deviations.

Thanx again! This kind of retroactive alimentation keeps me going and trying to improve my art!

 

[azhura]

Pretty like the Flygon.
Maybe more fog through higher up in the picture? I love the fog, the fog is gorgeous. The picture looks like it's cut in half with the background though, like where the fog ends it becomes something else. It needs to blend in together more and become one. Maybe more clouds in the sky or something?
Also the yellow on the Umbreon's right side ear isn't as thick as the one on the leftwhich makes it seem a lil lopsided.
Those eyes creep me out, I don't know which one does it more though. Aside from that fact they do look really good.
Maybe if you could see more of the umbreon including it's legs? He overall seems a little lopsided and that might help.
Also with the rings on tail/ears you could jagger the line some to give it a more realistic appearance? That's a choice thing though as it's not really how the proper pokemon is but eh.
Anyways, hope I'm not being too picky.

Happy hunting!
~Pika!

This is exactly what i think. Yes, you're right in everything except I don't like the fog that much, and you're not being too picky. Your comments help me a lot (really) to improve my drawing and painting skills. Thanx!

P. D. What's the exact meaning for lopsided? I didn't find it in my dictionaire. Sorry.

 

[Who Said Pikachu?]

That's ok.
Lopsided; one-sided. Like one side is heavier than the other.
Well that's how I ment it anyway. That's not actually a dictionary definition or anything but I hope it explains.

Well I'm glad you think that, I tend to worry if I come across picky.

Happy hunting!
~Pika!

 

[azhura]

I love your art style [referrs to Flygon] Umm, if it's ok, can I put this on my site too? I'm so desperate for fan art!

-Torchic23

Hey, what about the link to my website!? I didn't see it.
Please put the link somewhere in your page as soon as you can.

 

[azhura]

That's ok.
Lopsided; one-sided. Like one side is heavier than the other.
Well that's how I ment it anyway. That's not actually a dictionary definition or anything but I hope it explains.

Well I'm glad you think that, I tend to worry if I come across picky.

Happy hunting!
~Pika!

Thankz for the acclaration. Again.
(This is becoming an habit, i think)