Clockworkz
SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Her name is Nebula.
Out of all my morphs, I like her the most. Comments/critique, as usual, are welcomed.
Out of all my morphs, I like her the most. Comments/critique, as usual, are welcomed.
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Umbreon Morph
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Who Said Pikachu?
Pikachu Spotter
Ooo.. pretty.
Gotta say I love the gloves, gotta love shiny black gloves.
Then onwards!
Not exactly the ideal pose, I like the expression and I get the feeling but the body's pose isn't so great. She looks like she's stiff as a board, the arm at her side doesn't help as it blocks showing the curve of her back making her seem more board like than if the arm were elsewhere or the view was more angled. Also her tail's a bit too solid right through for my liking, it should thin somewhere at the base, puff out then thin again at the tip.
Her arm pointing out is also too long which I think is mostly in the forarm as apposed to the lower arm if I'm judging the elbow right. Also she's got a bit of the case of spaghetti arm in that one, needs just a lil more shape to it.
The gloves are maybe too big but that could be a style thing so I can't really fault on that otherwise I rather like your hands, they're well done.
The colouring job's ok too, practice is about the only thing there and learning different things to do for more effect.
Overall I think it's a rather good picture, you've got the mood and feeling down pat so woo!
Happy hunting!
~Pika!
Gotta say I love the gloves, gotta love shiny black gloves.
Then onwards!
Not exactly the ideal pose, I like the expression and I get the feeling but the body's pose isn't so great. She looks like she's stiff as a board, the arm at her side doesn't help as it blocks showing the curve of her back making her seem more board like than if the arm were elsewhere or the view was more angled. Also her tail's a bit too solid right through for my liking, it should thin somewhere at the base, puff out then thin again at the tip.
Her arm pointing out is also too long which I think is mostly in the forarm as apposed to the lower arm if I'm judging the elbow right. Also she's got a bit of the case of spaghetti arm in that one, needs just a lil more shape to it.
The gloves are maybe too big but that could be a style thing so I can't really fault on that otherwise I rather like your hands, they're well done.
The colouring job's ok too, practice is about the only thing there and learning different things to do for more effect.
Overall I think it's a rather good picture, you've got the mood and feeling down pat so woo!
Happy hunting!
~Pika!
Clockworkz
SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
I made a few changes. Fixed the tail, the length of the right arm. Can't do the back because, I love it too mcuh, and she's supposed to be static. She's emo. The kind of girl that listens to My Immortal, or varios Linkin Park songs. XD
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Who Said Pikachu?
Pikachu Spotter
Woo, improved!
The tail looks better though I would of made it so it curves more into the spine but that's just me. Her arm is bette but it's still rather spaghetti like, it's the part between her shoulder and elbow that needs to be shrunk really and the whole arm needs the same kind of definition that the one at her side does.
And yeah that works by personality for that pose.
Still I think it's a nice job overall, I don't get why no one else has commented.
Happy hunting!
~Pika!
The tail looks better though I would of made it so it curves more into the spine but that's just me. Her arm is bette but it's still rather spaghetti like, it's the part between her shoulder and elbow that needs to be shrunk really and the whole arm needs the same kind of definition that the one at her side does.
And yeah that works by personality for that pose.
Still I think it's a nice job overall, I don't get why no one else has commented.
Happy hunting!
~Pika!
Clockworkz
SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
It's because I'm a new artist around here, and no one really takes intrest in the newbie ;_; Maybe this wasn't the right place for me to start posting right off the bat v.v
katiekitten
The Compromise
Well done Clockworkz!
I love her facial expression and the way you did her hair. Very nice, very nice... I like the gloves, and the little moth eaten butterfly. Well done!
Yeah, I had the same problem. (except with writing instead) I just reviewed others work, commented on univeral threads and got around, people gradually began to get to know me, and more people looked at my work. *shrugs*
I love her facial expression and the way you did her hair. Very nice, very nice... I like the gloves, and the little moth eaten butterfly. Well done!
Yeah, I had the same problem. (except with writing instead) I just reviewed others work, commented on univeral threads and got around, people gradually began to get to know me, and more people looked at my work. *shrugs*
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Ember
Guest
Very nice, as katiekitten said, I love the facial expression! The eyes are nice as well. The tail bugs me a little though, maybe if you pointed it more downwards... *shrugs* Anyways, I like it, keep up the great work!
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~*Ratiosu*~
Guest
Very good ^_^ I love the butterfly effect (Hey wasn't that a movie?). Works.
Overall it's a good piece, but there are a few parts I don't like:
1. The photo for a background
2. How the tail is shaped
3. How it's doing the same standing pose as most of your morphs
5. How it's not with all your other art. You can look through the pages of the art section and find the old ones to repost in.
1. The photo for a background
2. How the tail is shaped
3. How it's doing the same standing pose as most of your morphs
5. How it's not with all your other art. You can look through the pages of the art section and find the old ones to repost in.
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Seel Dingo
Guest
it's a decent picture by itself, but i am not much one for combining art with photographic backgrounds ^^; they seldom come out looking nice.
anyway, the only thing that bugs me about this pic is the raised hand. the hand seems....rather large, and a bit alien-ish. the pose is pretty static, but for some pictures that works...so no big deal.
other than that, nice job :3 and i can't wait to see more!
and, like some other people have said....why not make one thread to show all of your art? i know some have certain names....but why not make one just about your art, and not "umbreon morph"? that way it takes up less room :>
anyway, the only thing that bugs me about this pic is the raised hand. the hand seems....rather large, and a bit alien-ish. the pose is pretty static, but for some pictures that works...so no big deal.
other than that, nice job :3 and i can't wait to see more!
and, like some other people have said....why not make one thread to show all of your art? i know some have certain names....but why not make one just about your art, and not "umbreon morph"? that way it takes up less room :>
Clockworkz
SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Because I didn't think I'd make more than my Jolteon morph, interestingly enough >.o
Now, it just seems idiotic to make one thread, when there are several floating about. Unless a moderator can conolidate them all in one new thread, but that's doubtful.
I've tryed dynamic poses. Not good. They all sucked. Besides; I can get a pretty good feel for the art as it is. Why go through the angst of a heavily dynamic pose, when it'll look just as good as a static pose?
All of these are character concepts. Again; sorry for not putting them in one thread. And I like the photographic backgrounds. It gives it a sense of realism (I especailly think that Nebula's BG was stunning, especially for the whole feel of the pic). Espeon is coming up next.
Now, it just seems idiotic to make one thread, when there are several floating about. Unless a moderator can conolidate them all in one new thread, but that's doubtful.
I've tryed dynamic poses. Not good. They all sucked. Besides; I can get a pretty good feel for the art as it is. Why go through the angst of a heavily dynamic pose, when it'll look just as good as a static pose?
All of these are character concepts. Again; sorry for not putting them in one thread. And I like the photographic backgrounds. It gives it a sense of realism (I especailly think that Nebula's BG was stunning, especially for the whole feel of the pic). Espeon is coming up next.