Hello SPPF, this is my first attempt at fanfiction period.
I've attempted fan fic before with mixed results, this is the only one I've ended up posting though.
Rating: Pg-Pg13 (might become more violent or something later on)
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Without further ado:
Prologue:
This is the tale of me and my master's journey to become the best battlers in all of Unova.
It all began for me on a warm spring day; it seemed innocent enough. Although I doubt anyone could have foreseen the events that were about to unfold. I had stretched myself out on the grass in the meadow in which I lived in. Tall, green grass swayed back and forth in the slight breeze that blew over the meadow.
In the distance I heard a loud rumbling noise emanating from the ground somewhere to my left. Rolling up onto my haunches and gazing outward I saw a small town there. The noise had stopped. Unsure of myself, I just stood there for a while peering into the direction where the rumbling had come from. Tentatively, I took a step towards the town. One step, then another step, suddenly the sound resonated louder. I approached the fence separating the town and the meadow in which I resided. Abruptly, the sound stopped once again then, a scream echoed from a house no more than 15 meters away from where I stood.
On an impulse, I rushed under the fence and towards the house. It was a small, yellow house. It seemed as if it had been built a long time ago. Cracks riddled the side of the house. Grey steps led up to what I assumed, was the front of the house. As I got closer, it became apparent that the house was more seriously damaged now that I had seen it from the front. There was a gaping hole in the front door or, where the front door was. I went up the steps. Jumping through the hole, the following scene lay before me. A boy, no older than 13 was huddling in a corner and, in the middle of the room there was what appeared to be an Excadrill.
“What do you think you’re doing?” I barked at it. As it turned around to face me I noticed this wasn’t a normal Excadrill, like the ones I had seen so many times in the meadow. Popping out of the grass occasionally lost or sometimes just coming up for fresh air. Its eyes glinted at me like none before.
“Crush… Destroy…” it moaned at me. I took a step back. Was it even a pokemon? I wondered in horror. It was at this point I knew I couldn’t socialize with it to sort out the problem. It lunged at me; I barely avoided it by sidestepping. As soon as it hit the ground the whole earth shook again. I felt the familiar sensation of thousands of volts of electricity lacing my fur as I launched myself at it. The blow connected. Taken aback by the impact, I staggered backwards.
On the spot where it had stood, lay a pile of metallic gears and an assortment of wires. So it wasn’t even real… Behind me, a voice spoke,
“Wha-What was that…?” It was the boy. I had forgotten about him.
I walked up to him and said, “I think you’re safe now…”
“I-I’m sorry but I don’t speak Jolteon language.” There it was again, the steel barrier that always seemed to stand between communications with humans. However, this one seemed… different somehow. I pulled up beside him and nuzzled him. First, he recoiled then; carefully began to pet me. His affection seemed much greater than any of the other people I had encountered, or the ones who had tried to capture me. I gazed at him and saw he had a pokeball clasped in his hand.
“My father said that I should begin my journey sooner or later. Would you like to be my first pokemon?” I looked at him for a while. Did I really want to fight other pokemon for a living? Then I thought of the excadrill and the thought that there might be other mechanic menaces out there that would certainly terrorize new trainers such as him, and I Nodded. Not sure of what lay ahead but excited for it I let myself be sucked into the pokeball. How can I even fit in this thing? No doubt this question would plague me for a long time. It’s interesting seeing the world through a tint of red. The boy who I had only just met was on the phone a minute later, still holding my ball in his hand.
“Mom, are you there? Guess what? I got a pokemon!” A burst of noise from the other end of the line led me to believe that she wasn’t quite convinced.
“... Given to me by the professor? No, it came to me and I had one of dad’s pokeballs…”Another squawk from the phone.
“Can you believe it? He actually liked me!” Something to the effect of “HOW DID IT GET IN THE HOUSE?” blared from the phone.
“How did it come in? Well, it kinda saved me from a mechanical monster that left a hole in the side of the house…” Suddenly, it sounded like there was a bypassing airstrike that had hit no more than two feet away from me.
“Mom! You’re breaking up! I’ll call you when I get a better connection. Bye!” My ears winced in pain. I gave him a look that said, “Please don’t let that happen ever again…” He seemed to understand me and said, “I know, I won’t, mothers can be annoying sometimes though. Why don’t we get some rest and head off to the nearest city tomorrow?” To me, that sounded like a really good idea. So, I closed my eyes and drifted into peaceful darkness.
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That's it for now. Chapter 1 will be out soon hopefully. Let me know if you liked it or, if you found any errors/comments/critiques.
~~~Saph
I've attempted fan fic before with mixed results, this is the only one I've ended up posting though.
Rating: Pg-Pg13 (might become more violent or something later on)
{insert possible pm list here}
{Chapter List}
Without further ado:
Prologue:
This is the tale of me and my master's journey to become the best battlers in all of Unova.
It all began for me on a warm spring day; it seemed innocent enough. Although I doubt anyone could have foreseen the events that were about to unfold. I had stretched myself out on the grass in the meadow in which I lived in. Tall, green grass swayed back and forth in the slight breeze that blew over the meadow.
In the distance I heard a loud rumbling noise emanating from the ground somewhere to my left. Rolling up onto my haunches and gazing outward I saw a small town there. The noise had stopped. Unsure of myself, I just stood there for a while peering into the direction where the rumbling had come from. Tentatively, I took a step towards the town. One step, then another step, suddenly the sound resonated louder. I approached the fence separating the town and the meadow in which I resided. Abruptly, the sound stopped once again then, a scream echoed from a house no more than 15 meters away from where I stood.
On an impulse, I rushed under the fence and towards the house. It was a small, yellow house. It seemed as if it had been built a long time ago. Cracks riddled the side of the house. Grey steps led up to what I assumed, was the front of the house. As I got closer, it became apparent that the house was more seriously damaged now that I had seen it from the front. There was a gaping hole in the front door or, where the front door was. I went up the steps. Jumping through the hole, the following scene lay before me. A boy, no older than 13 was huddling in a corner and, in the middle of the room there was what appeared to be an Excadrill.
“What do you think you’re doing?” I barked at it. As it turned around to face me I noticed this wasn’t a normal Excadrill, like the ones I had seen so many times in the meadow. Popping out of the grass occasionally lost or sometimes just coming up for fresh air. Its eyes glinted at me like none before.
“Crush… Destroy…” it moaned at me. I took a step back. Was it even a pokemon? I wondered in horror. It was at this point I knew I couldn’t socialize with it to sort out the problem. It lunged at me; I barely avoided it by sidestepping. As soon as it hit the ground the whole earth shook again. I felt the familiar sensation of thousands of volts of electricity lacing my fur as I launched myself at it. The blow connected. Taken aback by the impact, I staggered backwards.
On the spot where it had stood, lay a pile of metallic gears and an assortment of wires. So it wasn’t even real… Behind me, a voice spoke,
“Wha-What was that…?” It was the boy. I had forgotten about him.
I walked up to him and said, “I think you’re safe now…”
“I-I’m sorry but I don’t speak Jolteon language.” There it was again, the steel barrier that always seemed to stand between communications with humans. However, this one seemed… different somehow. I pulled up beside him and nuzzled him. First, he recoiled then; carefully began to pet me. His affection seemed much greater than any of the other people I had encountered, or the ones who had tried to capture me. I gazed at him and saw he had a pokeball clasped in his hand.
“My father said that I should begin my journey sooner or later. Would you like to be my first pokemon?” I looked at him for a while. Did I really want to fight other pokemon for a living? Then I thought of the excadrill and the thought that there might be other mechanic menaces out there that would certainly terrorize new trainers such as him, and I Nodded. Not sure of what lay ahead but excited for it I let myself be sucked into the pokeball. How can I even fit in this thing? No doubt this question would plague me for a long time. It’s interesting seeing the world through a tint of red. The boy who I had only just met was on the phone a minute later, still holding my ball in his hand.
“Mom, are you there? Guess what? I got a pokemon!” A burst of noise from the other end of the line led me to believe that she wasn’t quite convinced.
“... Given to me by the professor? No, it came to me and I had one of dad’s pokeballs…”Another squawk from the phone.
“Can you believe it? He actually liked me!” Something to the effect of “HOW DID IT GET IN THE HOUSE?” blared from the phone.
“How did it come in? Well, it kinda saved me from a mechanical monster that left a hole in the side of the house…” Suddenly, it sounded like there was a bypassing airstrike that had hit no more than two feet away from me.
“Mom! You’re breaking up! I’ll call you when I get a better connection. Bye!” My ears winced in pain. I gave him a look that said, “Please don’t let that happen ever again…” He seemed to understand me and said, “I know, I won’t, mothers can be annoying sometimes though. Why don’t we get some rest and head off to the nearest city tomorrow?” To me, that sounded like a really good idea. So, I closed my eyes and drifted into peaceful darkness.
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That's it for now. Chapter 1 will be out soon hopefully. Let me know if you liked it or, if you found any errors/comments/critiques.
~~~Saph
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