Viridian Forest [One-Shot]

[SamsGFX]

First of all, howdy, I'm new xD
This is my first Fan-Comic. As the title says, it's a One-Shot, so there isn't gonna be a series of them unless I decide to do one xD

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1322/viridianforestshowdown1bv.png

Credits:
I got the Ash, Pikachu and the Snorlax Sprites from here:
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=109428&highlight=Pokemon+Overworld
And the background from:
www.vgmaps.com

Tell me what you think xD

 

[Abraace]

You're gonna hate me for this, but I can't judge it on this one comic alone...I'd have to see more, before passing a judgement. The layout looks good, and since the comic is basically the same picture copy and pasted three times with Ash looking forwards in the first and behind in the next two, there's not an awful lot to judge it by.

Sorry. Do a follow up comic and give people a little more to judge it on.

 

[Divine_Light]

Whats it about, the first comic should give an idea of what the hole sereis is about god ash sprites though

 

[zuloon]

I like how one panel is so large. [/sarcasm]

Seriously, make the panels smaller. And you joke wasn't even funny, didn't tell me anything about the comic (its storyline). You might want to remake the first episode. Badly. Add more content. I like the text bubbles, though.

 

[Neopolis]

If it's a one-shot, it's not very interesting. And the panels are waaaaaaay too big. The style and sprites are OK. But there was no need for that *turns around* thing, it was obivous that he was turning around.