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sockyskarmie

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If you like stupid, pointless pokemon comics then please click here.
A thanks to #1 manga fan!(the exclamation point is part of the name) for some technical help.
rated PG for little violence and alcoholic beverages.

Chapter One:http://i21.*******.com/2qd3f6a.jpg
Chapter Two:http://i37.*******.com/2crmw3p.jpg
Chapter Three:http://i35.*******.com/2akfygo.jpg
 
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MaplePhanpy

Anywayz...
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Err...
How will I say it?...
Well, this sucks.

Pannle are hugh and diffrent sizes, the text boxs are all over the place, You used a G/S/C sprite for crying out loud!

Don't be offended though, From what I could understand its funny, and it's sort-of original, just read some guides, and insted of making one huge strip, make two or three smaller ones, so Its easier to read.
 
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MaplePhanpy

Anywayz...
...
Err...
How will I say it?...
Well, this sucks.

Pannle are hugh and diffrent sizes, the text boxs are all over the place, You used a G/S/C sprite for crying out loud!

Don't be offended though, From what I could understand its funny, and it's sort-of original, just read some guides, and insted of making one huge strip, make two or three smaller ones, so Its easier to read.
 
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sockyskarmie

Well-Known Member
Um, I couldn't find a r/s/e/fr/lg policeman sprite, so I used a crystal one.

thank you for the critical attitude, and stating the truth.

However, I do not need to hear the same message twice!
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Please read some tutorials on speech bubbles and comic making, and also keep your panels from showing what isn't needed.
 
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Tadashi

kiss my greens
I've got to go with what other people have said. Your panel sizes are all different, the sprites need work... and oh god, please don't get me started on how much I did not understand anything of what was said or done in your comic.

Would be ten times better if you got an actual plot going... or at least have character interactions that are sensible and understandable. I'm not saying everything needs to be "OMG!SERIOUS", but the amount of humor used in here needs to be toned down a smidge.
 
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redx125

Apples are Delicious
lol birds birds!!!
 
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