water trainers fakemons

[water trainer]

These are my water starters for my fan games Opal & Topaz I'll post more when they are done

Names: Parapid - Surfip - Riphishot
Type:Water/Steel

 

[Luke the Almighty]

Great for a beginner.
Semi-Normal for an expert.
Bad for a... I don't know what you would call a really really really really really really really really good spriter, but that's who it's bad for.

No idea which you are though...

Work on the outlines. That's all else I can say.

 

[Lord of the pants]

Neat... I give them
Beginner: 9.5/10
mediocre: 9/10
Expert: 8/10

 

[BlazikenGurl]

They are really great. Outlines have to be a little better, that's all I can say.

 

[mo_money]

the shading's great, it's just the outline that's bad, they're crooked and need to be a little less black, but i'd give you a 7.9/10.

 

[Celeste]

I think they are pretty good awesome shading but as stated before outline is odd but they are really cute hope to see more.

 

[POKErUsAm]

The shadeing is amazeing. The outline only on the first evolution seems to be the only thing that is your weak point. I can't wait to see more.

 

[pepsa]

these fakemon are pretty good, like others have said work on the outlines a little more and... BAM you have a really awesome fakemon!
8/10 for these hope to see the fire, and water starters of your fangames

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

Erm, I'm not sure if these are sprites. They have too many shades for a human to posibly make in a sprite. I kinda like them though.

 

[kuro mizu]

i totaly love Riphishot it totally pwns all water starters...its better than the squirtle line, totodile line, and mudkip line combined. Yeah, it doesn't have the best outlines, but it is still a really good idea. I love its little flipper things ^-^... but I think Parapid's left eye is messed up...

Overall, 9/10