~*"We Will be Spriters!"*~

[gtab x3]

The sprite, i think portrays the criteria for the contest. i like the fact that you added nice detail the grass on it, but you sould try the same detail on the other parts like the shell.

 

[Alder]

I do like your WSC entry, however I didn't see the little tendrils until you added the glow at teh top, maybe the lines could be darker or a little more pronounced up there?

 

[jshperz]

I think it's because of the SPPF background.. Its colors are nearly the same.. Oh well, my entry is with the glow.

What shell? I think that's the mushroom top. I like the grass to be only on top so I just put them. Thanks for the comments!

 

[jshperz]

One thing I've never done before, I present to you, my scratched tileset! Scratched it all by myself. Well, with a reference. Don't use it! (Who'll use it anyway? >.>)

Before you guys say it's too bright, it should be because it's a tropical region..

 

[Timerabi:3]

very good *gives thumps up*espically the Torchic

 

[jshperz]

Thanks! Torchic? Didn't know that was good.

Some more Palettes:

Danger Sea Palette, Mutant Swamp Palette, Girlfriend's Palette, Plasm Palette

EDIT: My entry for WSC 22:

Alternate entry for WSC 22:

 

[Insidious_Dreamer]

tbh, if you had submitted the alternate entry, I would have been thinking "what the?" the first is much better

 

[jshperz]

Lolz, I hate fusing snakes with non-snakes (the body). I really aim to be in the champion poll, if not the winner. *thinks about the pro spriters* Never mind.

EDIT: Someone voted Horrible without telling why. Lol, guess im horrible.

I remade the trees and put a lake tileset and item ball. Please crit on them well. New example on bottom.

 

[Insidious_Dreamer]

I think the trunk of the trees here give it too much of a 2D look, an if you were to make the trees have more leaves so you cant see the trunk, then it would perhaps look a lot more realistic

 

[Zivhayr]

Nice work, Josh.
You're definitely improving, keep up the hard work
I especially love the fusions

 

[gtab x3]

I like the, map, but it looks odd to me, mostly because it is different. but still good job

 

[Alder]

I enjoy fusing snakes with non-snakes, actually, and for not liking it I think you did very well. However, the Rayquaza pattern is a little off on the body, and the white stomach bulges at the bottom. I actually prefer it to Bubble-Gon you have there, just a preference

 

[jshperz]

*reports pokeman for not giving me comments/crits but a dare instead.*

@I_D: Yeah, guess the trunk is my problem. I'll try to work on that.

@Zivhayr: Thanks!

@gtab x3: I'm guessing the different one is the tree. Lol. Glad you liked it though!

@Alder: Guess different people have different likes. I think Bubble-gon's quality is better than Raybratina. But Raybratina took more creativity and skill than bubble-gon. I'm sticking with bubble-gon. xD

 

[Pokeman3180]

Sorry for dare

cool sprites the sprites are really good backbones for other splice ideas

p.s. how do u post the splices?

 

[TPJerematic]

I really liked the region maps, are they for anything in particular?

 

[jshperz]

You make them on paint, save as PNG, then upload on imageshack/photobucket.

Glad you liked the region maps! No, I just did them for fun. They are randomly sketched.

 

[Pokeman3180]

do you now a thread that i could put up a challenge like making a red lightning?