Webcomic Front Cover Final Design

[Clockworkz]

It's a big picture. I know.
Things I know: Kevin's face lacks a bit of shading, Francine has a patch of white underneath some of her hair, and Kevin's legs are missing (which will probably not be fixed unless I find time to be patient and meticulous)...
Yeah.
Leave a comment. Please?

 

[Spookz]

Aside from the things you're already pointed out, I see nothing wrong.

Then again, I could be overlooking something, as I'm pretty tired. ;;

 

[Infinity]

Well the way you do hair... it looks flat... Other than that though it looks good.

 

[/Exiled/]

well, really really good, though the guy on the top..... His arm muscles look odd....

 

[-aocom v2-]

The top guy's forearm looks wayy too thick 0-o;; And yeh, the hair does look pretty flat (except on the girl)

 

[Uber peanut]

The wrist on the guy in the brown coat is messed up. It's too thick.
And yah. The other guy's forearms are way too big to look right. It makes him look really weird.

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

Nice picture. All I say is Kevin's (that's the top guy's name, right?) left fore arm is bigger than his right arm... Most of the flaws you have pointed out, so that's all I'll say...

 

[Samayowa]

This is good. (besides the things that you've pointed out yourself I don't see anything wrong with it.)

 

[EmberGryphon]

I don't really see anything wrong with it that hasn't been pointed out by other people. D: Just that the lower portion of the guy-with-gun's arm (the bit attatched to the wrist and not the shoulder) is much too thick. The chick's head looks a little flat, but that might just be me. :3 (I might also advise making the shading a little more dramatic- darker shadows and such- since the background is so dark, just to get the characters to flow with it. But I don't know that you were going for the traditional 'characters against a backdrop' type of thing, and the contrast does make the foreground images pop out really well, so it's all good.)

I really like their faces, and the coloring on the gun is really convincing. ^_^ All around really good, and I hope you get the comic running soon, 'cause I'd really like to see it! :3

 

[blueguy]

Something about the entire cover screams "Photoshop effects", and I don't think you utilized them in an aesthetically pleasing manner. It seems sort of inconsistent, if that makes sense in that some parts, such as the man on the bottom's jacket, look as if they were made with a marker, and others, like the woman's hair, look highly stylized. The background too seems mismatched with your characters and the lightning is odd and too realistic to go hand in hand with your drawings. The girl is the best part of this. She looks cool and sexy, but try to downplay her breasts a little. They look oddly clumped together... What I mean to say is seperate them while still keeping the shape, because it now looks as if her shirt is tucked beneath them. The pose of the girl is genius, though that of the other characters is lacking innovation in a way. They seem tired, bored and contrived...