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Furuba90

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This is a story I'm making. It's dedicated to the games I play and love.

Prolouge
"Eddie, watch out!" Stephanie shouted his name.

They were in a tight battle between a devil. Eddie got badly injured from the dark attack.

"Steph, outta the way!" Jenny commanded.

Stephanie jumped out of her way and then summoned her attack. The devil took alot of damage and died.

"Whew. . ." Jenny sighed, "At least he won't come back again."

Then she saw Stephanie kneeling down where Eddie got injured.

"J-J-Jenny. . ." she started weeping, "Eddie saved my life, but it's all my fault for not giving back the favor!"

Chapter 1 - The Very Beginning

On a cold night, about a milenium ago, two female warriors flew high to find survivors. The war has started and there were alot of people hurt or killed.

"Any sign of survivors, Red?" Yellow Warrior asked.

"Uh-uh" Red Warrior shook her head, "At this rate, Sycryl can rule S-Worl and we'll be his slaves.

"Oh!" Yellow Warrior suddenly snapped, "Why in the world isn't Blue with us?! He's one of us and we need to defeat him together."

"I know, Yellow." Red Warrior said, "But we can trust him that he'll be there once we found everyone that has survived."

Then they heard war cries from below them and saw that they're chasing a girl.

"That girl's in trouble." Red Warrior gasped.

"Then let's destroy them to not mess anyone that isn't in the war." Yellow Warrior said and summoned her attack, "Light, Heart, Strike."

A light ball went towards the group and killed them all. They landed and recovered the girl.

"Are you alright?" Red Warrior asked and finished healing her.

The girl woke up and looked at both of them.

"Red Warrior!" she said shocked, "I'm really sorry that I wasn't quick enough, but Blue Warrior wanted me to give this to you."

She handed them a scroll and Red Warrior took it from her. She started reading the scroll and got shocked.

"I'm really sorry, Miss Red," the girl panted heavily, "I tried my best to run all the way here to give that scroll to you from Mister Blue."

She slowly closed her eyes and died peacefully.

"She's gone." Yellow Warrior said sorrowly, "Red, what did Blue say in that scroll?"

Red Warrior didn't respond.

"Uh. . . Red?" Yellow asked again.

Then she noticed Red Warrior crying.

"Yellow. . ." Red Warrior cried, "Blue doesn't want us to fight Sycryl. He want to fight him himself and no one else to help."

Yellow got surprised he didn't want their help.

"He's trying to save me again!" Red cried harder.

Then it started raining hard
 

Jonouchi

Chibi-cario
There's barely any description. What attacks did they use? What do the characters look like? Describe, describe, DESCRIBE!!!

Also, it looks too short, put things in paragraphs next time.

Try again and read the Advice for Aspiring Authors too
 
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