Werewolf-girl Francine: Art Thread

[Clockworkz]

This is going to be the depository for my collective works of wolf girl Francine Ullric, the pretty lycanthrope from my webcomic, Innocence Gone.
Anywho, on to the art.
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I like how the eyes and lips turned out, but I feel as thogh I may have made the eyes a bit too big. This is a new hairstyle for her, as opposed to a much more rushed, slopped up previous version. Needless to say, I like this a LOT more than my older pics of her.
^_^

 

[Hoenir]

like you said, the eyes and the shoulders are overall VERy well done. The neck and stuff is fine, NEEDS SHADING, or at least some highlights. Same with the hair

 

[Clockworkz]

Forgot to specify. This is a base color pic. I'll CG it later @_@ My bad.

 

[Hoenir]

Forgot to specify. This is a base color pic. I'll CG it later @_@ My bad.

oh shnap, I should have guessed that >.<;; anyway, for a base color pic it's fantastic, especially teh eyes

 

[Clockworkz]

CGed version! Take 1!

 

[Angel Paladin]

Very nice Clockz. It's your drawin' style, that's for sure. Hm..you did wonderful on the skin. Nice and shiny. Her eyes are gorgeus. *_* You need to work on the hair detail though. It looks a bit flat. Hey, practice makes perfect.

 

[SeanLuigi]

Aww cool!^^!Do another one!^^

 

[Clockworkz]

I did.
Experimented with hair CGing and Eye detailing. I like both more than my other pic of her that I posted =^_^=

 

[Shadow_Fox]

Aw she looks so inocent here. I really love how you shaded her. Only suggestion is that with females, the less lines the better. Even if she is muscular you want to show females bodys with as few lines as possible. And her chest seems a bit small imo, though not in a peverted way. Oh the lips look fantastic as well.

 

[Clockworkz]

Final Copy
"Francine contemplates about Kevin, her lover, as she sits in the Break Room of the 369's main Headquarters."
**Note: In the webcomic, the 369 is an organization fighting the Government. Link can be found Here, in the "Story" sidebar.

 

[Infinity]

Kwiturbeliachin on AIM, I'm commenting, ghez. Since you asked me I'll be nitpicky.

@ Second pic: At CGing clock, I do say that you've got a handle on the pen tool, but the lines could be cleaned up a bit better in the second one, that's when those vectoring programs come in handy. The lines are a bit thick for the dress and that one hair sticking out on the top looks pretty awkward. Not too much else to nictpick here.

@ First pic: I actually like this one a bit better than the second one, perhaps I like the cartoony anime feel. Anyway, her hair looks a little too poofy to be natural and her eyes are eye catching, but they seem rather big for her face. Other than that I have no complaints, looks good.

 

[Clockworkz]

A little more fine tuning.
Something tells me I'll be fine tuning this one for a while.
Now to scale down that head...

 

[IGP: Net Wanderer]

Cool, it's getting better each time in your style : )

The latest one looks amazing ^^ I like the shading and line type mix of her. I think you're going for abit more realism of the Anime style, so try and work on the eye a little.

It's going well : )

Keep it up ^^

 

[Clockworkz]

Thanks.
Alright, before I commit to it, I gotta know if that is actually too big. I'd like a few responses in agreement or disagreement before I make a decision.