What He Doesn't Know

[~!Mudkip Kitteh!~]

Meh. A non-Pokemon Poem by Kitteh.. XD Oh wait, that's me! XD -dies- Anyhoo, here's the poem, please read! Meh, I know it sucks. This poem is about me and my crush, so, uh, yeah.
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What He Doesn't Know
Staring in his eyes,
Everything else disappears.
He understands me,
He dissolves my fears.
I can't wait to tell him,
Exactly how I feel.
What he doesn't know,
Is that my feelings are real.
What he doesn't know,
Won't hurt him.
So I guess I'll hide away,
And not tell him anything.
What he doesn't know,
Is that everytime the phone rings,
I pray it's him.
So I guess that now,
With my feelings laying wide open,
He'll know without a doubt,
That what he doesn't know,
Won't hurt him-
For now.
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What did you think??? Too long? Too short? Mistakes??? -hyperventilates- gasp gasp gasp -dies-

WEllz, peace and crackers,

~Kitteh ;258;

 

[Masumi]

*chuckles* It reminds me of myself when I was still drooling over my yet-to-be-boyfriend. It was written nicely!

 

[~!Mudkip Kitteh!~]

*chuckles* It reminds me of myself when I was still drooling over my yet-to-be-boyfriend. It was written nicely!

Thanks. I wasn't so sure about this one... *cough* it sucks *cough* lol, I'm criticizing my own poem... XD

 

[Stephy]

Nice Poem, Kitteh! I rarely hang around the Non-Pokemon Fics section...so...This is the first fic I ever reviewed in my whole life that is in the Non-Pokemon Fics Section xD Anyhow, I like the poem! ^^