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What's something in a story that strikes fear into your heart?

CHeSHiRe-CaT

A Curious Breed
Simply put in the title, I wanted to gather some phobias, fears, and the deepest, darkest, and goriest things you can imagine that terrify you, or torment you. It's one thing to think about the fear, but to read about it in a story is a completely different thing. If your imagination is powerful enough, you can summon an image in your head that can make you scream, cry, laugh, or smile just by reading. Fear, in this case, is one of the most powerful human emotions that we, horror writers, like to take advantage of.

Examples of entities that can be feared (unless you're gorephobic; everything applies :p):

• Sounds
• People
• Places
• Creatures
• Smells
• Textures
• Events
• Etc. (feel free to mention, and I'll keep adding)

If you want to get specific, all the more enlightening for me and others looking at the page, especially on description. For example, you could be afraid of dolls, or, you could be afraid of carnivorous bushes that smell like mint. I ask this question mainly because I am going ahead with my novel series instead of PDS, again switching onto the only track I've kept a constant on. It contains many things that many would literally find in their nightmares. It's a non-Pokemon fic and my own original creation, so I won't talk much about it since the majority of this audience is Pokemon-oriented. There'll be time to explain what it's about in an upcoming preview, but it is a fantasy/horror story of sorts. Anything can happen in it, really.

Also, if you have a nightmare, feel free to post it here, describe it, and how it frightened you :D

What sorts of things in writing make you tick?
 
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sure i am willing to help, but i just wanted to know first what kind of fanfic this is for?
 

PDL

disenchanted
Aliens (more speifically, the greys), zombies and evil clowns.

and anything from Silent Hill/Fatal Frame.
 

CrystalSaurTower

Well-Known Member
Ticks. Tiny little, pompus'ly huge bugs withe squeamish little legs flailing around constantly with an insane bulb of blood streatched to the max on its body..eeh..Very creepy for me
 

Orange_Flaaffy

Jello Pokéballs
Death by drowning (since I can't swim), heights, and rape. Also, just the *idea* of death scares me on a deep level. Not so much the action of dying, but maybe being young and not getting to do everything I wished I could in life. Morality is scary IMHO:(
 

CHeSHiRe-CaT

A Curious Breed
sure i am willing to help, but i just wanted to know first what kind of fanfic this is for?

Sorry; I think I should go put that in the first post; would make a lot more sense ^^;

Ash_Junior said:
The Flood.

'nough said.
Ah, of course :D I can't imagine many people who aren't scared of gigantic, vegetable-like hunks of processed and salvaged organisms with wiry limbs, bulbous proportions and parasitic tendencies.

PDL said:
Aliens (more speifically, the greys), zombies and evil clowns.

and anything from Silent Hill/Fatal Frame.
I had a nightmare last night about Pennywise the Clown from Stephen King's "It." Nearly scared the crap out of me, even though I hardly find the old miniseries adapted from it frightening.

Silent Hill has to be one of my main influences, particularly when it comes to the soundtracks. Numerous scraping noises, howling darkness, voices, bells, screeching, breathing, heart-pounding...Akira Yamaoka is a genius ^^ I think I'll make a list of some possible "entities" to be afraid of, such as sounds, buildings, people, or monsters, just to give people examples.

I haven't played Fatal Frame; how's that?
CrystalSaurTower said:
Ticks. Tiny little, pompus'ly huge bugs writhe squeamish little legs flailing around constantly with an insane bulb of blood streatched to the max on its body..eeh..Very creepy for me
Yes, things that are not immediately detectable such as insects can be frightening, merely because they're so small that they can leech/crawl onto us, unnoticed by our lazy eyes, and do some really nasty things until we realize they're there. More specifically, ticks are disgusting (but heh, we all are in our own special ways) because they feed off of blood (a tick's gotta eat), which is considered, to us, like sapping a plant's nutrients like a weed, or drilling a hole in the gas tank of someone's car.

Unfamiliar textures and motions, like multiple limbs crawling (not limited to insects or arachnids) and slime make us sick, mainly because it contrasts with our own experiences of everyday life. Taking something out of the ordinary and including it into our worlds makes us uncomfortable. Fear is a change ;)

Psychic Umbreon said:
Spiders, snakes, bees, wasps, ants.
Again, I get to toy with these ideas...

Spiders, like I mentioned before, are rather freakish because unlike most things around its family, it has eight legs, and therefore has .25 more times of scaring you than a six-legged insect ;) That, and their nature as capturing prey in their webs (another strange part of their biological functions), and slowly advancing to eat them makes it all the more unpleasant. Yet, with fear, there also comes a sort of poisoned elegance, such as the spider-web. My, what a pretty item to look at, but you most definitely would not want to go near one for fear of getting trapped and awaiting your imminent doom hovering above you on a string of silk.

Snakes have a serpentine movement; erratic patterns in which they move. This, coupled with the fact that they have no legs, makes them rather unpredictable. I mean, if other living beings had no legs and still managed to get around, I'd find it a bit unnatural myself. Bees, wasps, and ants, however, are also feared because they can cause harm, for what they think may be a natural form of self-defense. Another fear that can be attributed with bees, wasps, and ants is the feelers/antennae they possess, which are very much like extra limbs as I talked about before. The noise of bees and wasps personally get me, or even the buzzing of a fly, because they're rather annoying, but also tell me that danger may be near.

Add that with a rattlesnake...

Death by drowning (since I can't swim), heights, and rape. Also, just the *idea* of death scares me on a deep level. Not so much the action of dying, but maybe being young and not getting to do everything I wished I could in life. Morality is scary IMHO:(
Did you mean "mortality," or fear of taking responsibility? XD Either way, both have good reasons to be feared. I can't imagine drowning, especially in a foreign material/liquid; you're aware that you're dying, struggling to live, but you can't help but take it all in (quite literally). Heights is a big one for me, though I've gotten used to it on some occasions; being somewhere high above the ground brings the possibility that gravity could bring you crashing down and harming yourself. You never know how hard you're going to hit the ground either, and the image of bones jutting out of places they shouldn't be is a disturbing thought for sure.

Rape is touchy and is most definitely not going to be in any story I write (as far as I know), but I would never want to imagine being forced into a situation where I am obligated to have sexual activities with another person against my will, especially if they are grotesque, monstrous, or not even human at all. Rape renders you stripped, bare, and vulnerable to anything that wants to harm you for the sole purpose of gaining [sexual] pleasure. A nasty business, indeed...

I know what you mean, about dying young. That would be a most terrible thing, but only those around the young person who dies would realize what a loss and waste of a life it was, and how something could have been more. It's like a tree sapling growing amongst its elders, until a wildfire catches it up and brings it to its knees, where it could have risen to the sky just like the trees that grew around it. I make strange comparisons because the human examples I come up with would already make sense, such as a young person being murdered or getting into an accident, and wasting, what could have been, a fruitful life of accomplishments and happiness.

Good answers so far; I'm really getting some excellent ideas :D
 
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Dilasc

Boip!
I guess what scares me is being alone and feeling unwanted. I don't, well actually, I think I do know why it scares me, but as much as I don't like being alone, I always yearn for tat solitude when around others. I guess it's a rejection issue above all else.

I also fear those that are stupid. What dangers ignorance can bring to those around them is definitely not something fun.

The stars and all beyond the sky. As fascinating as they are, and as intergral as they tend to be to my stories, even stories that have yet to exist, I love and fear them. While most have mortal fears, I look deep, far beyond the sky, that which is NOT our limit, and looking at those ancient balls of gas, many of which may have died out long ago with only their light remaining, you feel kind of small and meaningless, do you not? It makes me want to push my way to the top or be the best of whatever I'm trying to get to the top of just because our time is truly short.
 

Kiyohime

Well-Known Member
Dolls that come alive and tell children to kill their parents. >_< Disembodied voices, too.

Oh, and human bodies that have been taken apart and reconfigured togetehr in grotesque new ways. Like those Silent Hill people. XD Though that's more creepy than scary.
 

Literate

black cat, black cat
Ditto all that Orange Flaffy said and add a creepy Dee-Dee looking doll with red broken button eyes, ragged feet and cloth, with a creepily stitched smile like it's gonna murder. o.o It was in a nightmare and I created it (o_O) and I tried to escape from it later, jumping around things, running, and ultimately driving away on a road. o_O

Other than that, fear of many things that CAN happen, not will in my lifetime, such as disastar (tsunami!!! ><), snakes (basically their bites, though where I live there are none >>), and some freaky dude that sneaks into my house and makes weird noises, creaking, knocking, etc.. >> Which is why I distract myself with my stories so as not to think about it too much.

...I'm a bit too paranoid.

-Lit
 

Psychic

Really and truly
Heights. I really have a problem with being up high and looking down and thinking that the glass floor of the CN Tower is going to break and you lie on it and you'll go plummeting to the ground, your body scraping on the concrete and metal of the building, dieing even before you make contact with the ground wherre you're smashed apart by the impact...

My mother made me jump on that god-damned glass floor. I was ready to die...


Heights, and greath depths. Mostly being under thounsands of miles of water, with the pressure building.
And storms. Especially when out on the sea. Or being lost at sea. @_@


Oh, the dark. I'm not quite as afraid of it, but as a little kid I always feared that some monster, a zombie, a SOMETHING would pop out of the shadows and drag me off or do who knows what to me. I love the night and also like the dark, but it also scares me. But I think that's part of the thrill.
@_@ I swear, some day I'm going to get kidnapped by some undead...THING. Zombies, especially, scare me the most.

And being mindless, emotionaless shells. That really creeps me out. Not being able to think or feel...maybe that's why being infested by Yeerks, being made into a Controller, haunted a good few of my dreams. Hm.


Personally, I love snakes. And bats. Two of m favourite animals right there. I don't HATE bugs and I won't go insane if I saw a spider or even a tarantula, but bees and wasps and the bugs that sting creep me out.

I think I have a fear of being impaled.

I fear torture. Having to endure great amounts pf pain over a long period of time. The idea totally scares me. And there's this movie, apperantly, about these rich guys who hire people to kidnap people and torture them, and it's really horrible because they cut this man's heel and said he could go free if he could walk, but his weight, on his heel...oh, good Lord, I don't want to talk about even the movie synopsis, the idea scares me that much...

And self-torture sorts of things. Scar Movie 4, making fun of Saw, despite the humor, it really scared me. And then I heard what the actual movie was about...god, people passed out in theatres watching Saw 3, did you know that? Fully passed out, it was just that horrible...




I don't like squalching sounds, unless it's like, Play Doh. I couldn't stay in the Biology Lab when we were discecting...whatever it was, I don't remember. A pig feteur or heart. The idea alone of discecting a, a cow eye, which my sister did (my year didn't, thankfully) makes me shiver. I don't like the idea of taking apart things...


Oh, noises I can't identify. Again, has to do with the dark. I like to know the sources for everything, so when I hear creaking in my house at night, I want to know WHAT is making that noise.
Else I just play music and hide under the covers.



Gaaaah, I can't really go on. I'm sure you all got to see a new side of Psychic, and you all know how to scare me if you were to see me some day.

THE POWER OF MEW COMPELLS YOU! *goes to bed*

~Psychic
 
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Orange_Flaaffy

Jello Pokéballs
Oh, about the dark...
I grew up in the middle of the woods..and the dark in the woods never scared me becuase I could see the stars and the moon and and find my way home by them...
But darkness in the city or even a small town and being alone..and not being able to see the stars. That darkness scares me :(..(and makes me sad to, poor nature:()
 

Zora

perpetually tired
Exaggerated _________________ to arose fear

Fill in _________________ and there you go.

I mean, someone could make a cute little rabbit fearful if they exaggerated on the bad side.
 

CHeSHiRe-CaT

A Curious Breed
Ooo, I smell fear in you all :D

Exaggerated _________________ to arose fear

Fill in _________________ and there you go.

I mean, someone could make a cute little rabbit fearful if they exaggerated on the bad side.
That may be so, but I'd like to know people's personal fears and exactly why they fear them, not how to use anything as an excuse for a fear. Simple as that :/ If you have support for your fear, then it's reasonable. If you don't, it's unreasonable; completely different for everyone.

Ah, the dark can be feared for the fact that it conceals things that can harm us/scare us; this can also be associated with fear of the unknown, or fear of something you can't see. Besides those, there are not many concrete reasons to support fear of the dark.

Oh! Kiyohime! If you want to read a good book about dismembered limbs and surgical reattachments, read "The Beasties" by William Sleator (I'd suggest the hardback copy simply for the wonderful cover). It's about a family that moves into a northern wilderness, where these ill creatures live, taking humans and amputating their body parts to replace their own failing organs. I especially loved the ending <3

*coughSilentHillWinscough* >>;

Never thought about torture >D I loved the first Saw movie. Need to still see the second and third... But Jigsaw, the serial killer and his motive for torturing these people were, by far, some of the most interesting things I've come across in horror. Psychotic, but brilliant; go get yourself scared!

Noises can also be associated with the fear of something you can't see, because obviously the noise is coming from a certain source, but you may not have the ability to grasp the thing that's causing the racket, which gives you awful thoughts about what could be scraping around the corner, or wheeling out of the shadows...

LIKE JIGSAW PUPPET RIDING ON A TRICYCLE! :O *shot*

Possessed dolls, puppets, etc. have a tendency to bring about fear, because there is some other force controlling them that is unknown to you. That, and tainted innocence (such as broken toys of youthful joy) adds to the fear that you may never be happy again (lolzDudleyReference).

Aaaaand of course, we have Dilasc and the fear of celestial magnitude. To think, that there are vessels that could crush/burn/destroy us in the blink of an eye, but are supported by the wonderful conditions of space. To think of the giant heavens and unknown above us is most frightening, because it is never-ending, and defies all human reasoning. Anything we can't explain will frighten us.

EDIT: Forgot to mention Literate's fear of natural disaster >< I think that's sort of like the being-trapped-in-a-spider-web one, because until you get the report or are hit by the disaster, you never see it coming, or if you do, it will be too late to retreat to safety.
 
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Luckmage

Boulder Trainer
Insects. D : And by that, I mean every single buggy creature. >.> From ants all the way to bees, I AM TERRIFIED OF THEM. e_e''' I just hate the way they move, their touch on my skin and... >.> I go crazy and start screaming and leaping like a mad woman, whenever I spot them near me. xDD;;;

Spiders too. And amusement parks. Thrill rides and stuff. Urgh. A trip out of the house, since I get homesick really easily. <--- I am not kidding. xD

Death. <--- Who isn't scared of death? And pain. And kitchen knives and other sharp, sharp appliances. It just gives me a shiver, cos' I keep thinking they'll hurt meeeee. >.>;;;
 

Sneaky

Well-Known Member
I am a bit afriad of the dark... Not being able to see anything around you, even if something terrible is happening, which, in the end, makes you feel helpless.

Huge bugs... I guess I've been watching tv too much... But those things really creep me out. And some of them are REAL...

Unexpected events. Obviously, something unexpected would scare/shock you. Like someone jumping out of a corner to scare you, even if it is silly...
 

Knightblazer

Memories in the Rain
I've always asked myself what I fear most, but usually nothing seems to come out of it. ><; But then if I think realllllllyyyyy hard, then I DO have a few things to fear... starting from Number Five.

5 - Blood.

I never know why, but even though I like red and crimson colors, the real sight of blood just seems to shake me up, much like when I see incets. While I don't fear them to an extent that I jump onto my bed/table/chair and scream like a some five year old, the mere sight of them just seems to send chills down my spine oddly. I can withstand seeing blood in comics, teles, everywhere basically... exepct reality. I seriously don't know why. Something in me just does that. ><;

4 - The Past.

Why this, you ask? Well, its because I was quite a rebellious kid in my younger days. My younger days wasn't very happy, actually. My folks divorced (that was long ago, but I really knew the truth only at that time), my Grandmother died, I got beaten hard by my elder brother until I was admitted to the hospital with a bruised rib and finally, I played traunt for a month at school before I got caught. And know what? It all happened when I was ten. So basically speaking, I hated my life at ten years old. It was the year when I started to forge my mom's signature, stole money from my relatives and indulged myself in the tiwsted sense of freedom. -.- I truly hated myself then.

3 - Girly Stuff.

Wierd, yes? Even though I well, a girl, I really detest things defined 'girly'. I hate skirts, dresses, pink, purple, make up and other things. I'd die before wearing a dress, and would rather stay at home and use my laptop rather than go shopping with the other girls in my class. I hang out with guys at the trading card shop downstairs, and once punched a guy right on the face when he taunted me, although I got punishment in the end. I still think he deserved it though. Anyway, to put it simply, I hate things considered 'cool' among girls. Heck, I don't even participate their sessions on which boy looks better. >.>

2 - Solitude.

Its not really a big hate, but I still detest it at times. Being Home Alone is very painful sometimes, as there's no one to talk to, nothing to do. It does get genuinely boring at times, and others quite good as I get to do what I want. But it really bugs me that I don't have much friends due to my rather violent nature, as well as not really being popluar. But I hardly care, actually. *shrugs*

1 - The Future & The Unknown.

Ironically, the future is my biggest fear. I've always found myself wondering what happens tomorrow? Next Week? Month? Year? Decade? And so on and so forth. It could be tomorrow where something major and dreadful happens across the world, or someone I cherish dies. Its not that I'm pessmistic or anything, but that's waht I really think about. Like what will happen to me in the future; will I even be able to live to see twenty? Lots of stuff, so I usually tend to live everyday to the best I can. But above the future, I fear the Unknown - the thing that happens after death. Does Heaven and Hell even exist? Do ghosts truly roam? What will happen after we die? All these question never answered until death comes knocking upon your door. I have never feared death, but what I am truly frightened of is the Unknown beyond.



Well, now that i got THAT outta my chest, I feel better. Somehow. Even though my answer is sorta outta point. ><; And whaaaaaaaa... I personally like the dark and creepy. And horror. And supernatural stuff. And Hellsing. XP

Knightblazer ;262;
 
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