who likes my new pwning FireRed team!

[jordman]

here is my team for fireRed! i already gotten almost all of their evs on them and they have very good stats!
oh and also can you please rate my team out of 100 plz?
MY PWNING POKEMON TEAM IS AWSOME!

STILL WORKING ON IT THOUGH...

Dusclops@leftovers lvl 49
careful nature
-psychic, will-o-wisp, shadow punch, calm mind
alakazam@salac berry lvl 47
modest nature
-psychic, calm mind, reflect, light screen
houndoom@leichi berry lvl 47
lax nature
-fire blast, faint attack, bite, hyper beam
venasaur@(nothing yet) lvl 48
calm nature
-solar beam, sunny day, razor leaf, growth
heracross@petaya berry lvl 48
adamant nature
brick break, reversal, swords dance, horn attack
suicune@(trying to get another leftovers) lvl 51
calm nature
surf, rain dance, mist, aurora beam

well there it is so far! if there is anything i could change to make it better, please tell me!

 

[PhiJer]

its not good, its really bad...

 

[SneazzL.com]

your team out of 100 = 60/100

 

[jordman]

well i haven't even finished the moveset for all of them yet since some of them are lvl-up moves

 

[xPokerusx]

It has good potential.Check pokemon of the week for some good movesets.

 

[jordman]

ok i will, thanks! see i am going to teach swords dance and megahorn to heracross so that will be a good moveset. i will change some more of the movesets around but i need a higher lvl since some of them are lvl-up moves

 

[*$hinydragonite*]

You might consider teaching Suicune Ice Beam if it can learn it, and teach heracross Megahorn, E-Quake, Rock slide, and Swords dance. Teach Houndoom Flamethrower, Crunch, Roar, and some other filler. Those are about all of the corrections i can make, seeing as I've used only Houndoom and Heracross before, and I don't know a whole lot about suicune. Your team shows some skill, but it could do with a little work.

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

Ooh, very nice, I like it!

 

[Fallen Guardian]

First of all this should go here: In-Game Team Rate and second should use this format: IGTR Posting Format

*changes in bold*

here is my team for fireRed! i already gotten almost all of their evs on them and they have very good stats!
oh and also can you please rate my team out of 100 plz?
MY PWNING POKEMON TEAM IS AWSOME!

STILL WORKING ON IT THOUGH...

Dusclops @ leftovers
Nature: Calm/Careful
-Will-o-Whisp
-Calm Mind/Pain Split
-Ice Beam/Shadow Ball
-Seismic Toss

alakazam @ Salac Berry
Nature: Modest
-psychic
-calm mind
-Recover/Fire Punch
-Thunder Punch

houndoom @ Liechi Berry
Nature: Timid
-Flamethrower
-Crunch
-Will-o-Whisp/Solarbeam
-Endure/Sunny Day

venasaur @ Leftovers
Nature: Calm
-Substitute
-Leech Seed
-Razor Leaf
-Sleep Powder

heracross Petaya Berry
Nature: Adamant
-brick break
-Megahorn
-Swords Dance
-Earthquake

suicune Leftovers
Nature: Calm
-surf
-Calm Mind
-Ice Beam
-Rest

well there it is so far! if there is anything i could change to make it better, please tell me!

No, it was not awesome.

 

[Nightcat]

this should be in in-game RMT, but:

Hearacross@salac berry
adamamant nature
- endure
- reversal
- rock slide
- swords dance/mega horn

EndurrevCross pwns stuff.

Houndoom@lefties
modest nature
- beat up
- w-o-w
- flamethrower
- crunch

Alakazam@lefties
modest nature
- ice punch
- psychic
- reflect/light screen/filler
- calm mind

Suicune@lefties
modest nature!!!
- surf
- ice beam
- calm mind
- sub

Venusaur@lefties
modest nature (again)
- sub
- leech seed
- sludge bomb
- solarbeam?/filler

Dusclops@lefties
adamant/lonely nature?
- pain split
- shadow ball
- w-o-w
- filler

That needs A LOT of work.

~nightcat ;197;

 

[Theneedleman]

Ummm just out of curiosity how did you get a Dusclops on FireRed?


Well based on types you have 5 Specials and 3 Physicals
No overlapping types
You have 3 dual types and 3 single types
Your good pokemon: Suicune, Alakazam, Heracross
Okay Pokemon: Dusclops
Bad ones: Venasaur, Houndoom
Houndoom has terribly low defense/sp. defense, Venasaur has 4 weaknesses so that's why they're "bad"
Movesets: Okay, you don't need to have a pokemon learn more than one type of attack, ex: Houndoom dosen't need Bite and Faint Attack

All and all I'd say they aren't "pwning" material yet, but they're pretty good:

Score out of 100: 70/100, 70%, .7, C-

 

[Nightcat]

uh, houndoom ain't bad. He's a great special sweeper.

~nightcat ;197;

 

[Blazichu]

The team isn't that good and you need to change about 2 moves on Suicune

 

[Theneedleman]

uh, houndoom ain't bad. He's a great special sweeper.

~nightcat ;197;

I'm not saying he's that bad and yeah he does make a pretty good special sweeper, but his defenses are pitifully low, an earthquake could easily 1KO him.

 

[jordman]

ok guys stop saying "teach that guy that!" do this to bla bla bla" cause the moves in your movesets are all lvl-up moves! and i haven't gotten them to that lvl yet!

here are the movesets i want them to learn: (the ones in bold are the ones i "want but haven't gotten" yet)

Dusclops lvl 49
-psychic, will-o-wisp, shadow punch, calm mind
alakazam lvl 45
-psychic, calm mind, reflect, light screen
houndoom lvl 45
-fire blast, crunch, sunny day, flamethrower
venasaur lvl 48
-solar beam, sunny day, razor leaf, growth
heracross lvl 45
brick break, reversal, swords dance, megahorn
suicune lvl 51
surf, rain dance, calm mind, ice beam

oh, and theneedleman, i got my dusclops from my pokemon ruby...

 

[TheTurquoiseTauros!]

i think there all right but i usually just go all out offensive.......

 

[EmbersBackUpSinger]

try training more.....but ok

 

[Nightcat]

fire blast and flamethrower on houndoom?
The sets I and other people gave are what you're supposed to have some time, not what you have to have NOW. Just take our suggestions when you can have them learn them.

~nightcat ;197;

 

[jordman]

oh, and theneedleman, about the low defenses. i am trying to put 255 EVs on each defense so that will help, as his special attack is very high! well, i'm not really sure if i should do that since i could just mabye give it some iron, etc.

 

[Fallen Guardian]

ok guys stop saying "teach that guy that!" do this to bla bla bla" cause the moves in your movesets are all lvl-up moves! and i haven't gotten them to that lvl yet!

here are the movesets i want them to learn: (the ones in bold are the ones i "want but haven't gotten" yet)

Dusclops lvl 49
-psychic, will-o-wisp, shadow punch, calm mind
alakazam lvl 45
-psychic, calm mind, reflect, light screen
houndoom lvl 45
-fire blast, crunch, sunny day, flamethrower
venasaur lvl 48
-solar beam, sunny day, razor leaf, growth
heracross lvl 45
brick break, reversal, swords dance, megahorn
suicune lvl 51
surf, rain dance, calm mind, ice beam

oh, and theneedleman, i got my dusclops from my pokemon ruby...

You're the one that posted your self proclaimed "PWNing pokemon team". If you can't take advice then don't post when you get advice.

And most of the moves that we've mentioned are not moves that are learned but are TMs so I'm not sure why you keep saying that. Another things is that you can easily breed pokemon, such as Heracross, so that they have Megahorn at lvl 5.

Either way, it still needs work even with your imporvements.