bLASTOIse_MAsTer
Banned
hello. this is one of my REAL fanfics about when Ash- well no, u should just read the storie urself. well, here is the prologue. sorry if it is a bit short, it's my first. i read advice for aspiring authors and took advice from that.
Prologue!
“Pikachu! Use Thunderbolt!” Ash yelled over the roar of the crowd. Pikachu glowed a bright yellow and unleashed a white bolt of electricity right at Ricardo's Milotic. Milotic started glowing a bright white, and fell to the ground then retreated to its Pokeball.
“Ash Ketchum is this years Hoenn Championship winner!” The scoreboard showed an enlarged picture of Ash revealing his jet-black hair, his white and red vest, shirt, and pants and his huge overflowed backpack which seemed to be ripping at the straps. Ash had won the Hoenn Championship! He hugged his Pikachu so hard he had to let out a bolt of electricity to get Ash off him.
“Sorry Pikachu but we won! We did it!” Ash yelled in excitement. He shook hands with Ricardo, who looked miserable about losing but congratulated Ash. Ricardo looked a bit Hispanic with black hair, tan skin, and a five inch scar on his arm. As he walked out of the stadium with Misty and Brock, who were among the hundreds who were carrying Ash out of the stadium, there was an explosion. The scoreboard exploded into a thousand pieces.
“Duck!” Ash bellowed. Everybody crouched down to avoid the shards of glass as they flew over the spectators’ heads.
“What the heck was that?” Ash questioned to Misty and Brock.
“Whatever it was, it wasn’t an accident,” Brock replied. A loud voice over a loudspeaker echoed over the stadium.
“Everyone remain calm. This is just- this is just- a drill to ensure our safety. If everyone will please- Eldes, now!” the voice yelled. There was an eerie whirring as everyone’s Pokemon were being sucked into the air towards the helicopter! Pikachu was dragged out of Ash’s arms and started flying towards the helicopter.
“Pikachu! No! C’mon Brock help me!” Ash screamed. They lunged after Pikachu but they tripped hard on the smooth stadium floor because they were running too fast.
“Pikachu… noooooooooooo!” Ash half screamed and sobbed. “We’re gonna find Pikachu if it’s the last thing we do!”
“Shut up kid. I know where your Pikachu went,” a voice behind them said.
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so... it was a page in microsoft word... it seems a bit short... o well it is just a prologue not a chapter. how is it?
Prologue!
“Pikachu! Use Thunderbolt!” Ash yelled over the roar of the crowd. Pikachu glowed a bright yellow and unleashed a white bolt of electricity right at Ricardo's Milotic. Milotic started glowing a bright white, and fell to the ground then retreated to its Pokeball.
“Ash Ketchum is this years Hoenn Championship winner!” The scoreboard showed an enlarged picture of Ash revealing his jet-black hair, his white and red vest, shirt, and pants and his huge overflowed backpack which seemed to be ripping at the straps. Ash had won the Hoenn Championship! He hugged his Pikachu so hard he had to let out a bolt of electricity to get Ash off him.
“Sorry Pikachu but we won! We did it!” Ash yelled in excitement. He shook hands with Ricardo, who looked miserable about losing but congratulated Ash. Ricardo looked a bit Hispanic with black hair, tan skin, and a five inch scar on his arm. As he walked out of the stadium with Misty and Brock, who were among the hundreds who were carrying Ash out of the stadium, there was an explosion. The scoreboard exploded into a thousand pieces.
“Duck!” Ash bellowed. Everybody crouched down to avoid the shards of glass as they flew over the spectators’ heads.
“What the heck was that?” Ash questioned to Misty and Brock.
“Whatever it was, it wasn’t an accident,” Brock replied. A loud voice over a loudspeaker echoed over the stadium.
“Everyone remain calm. This is just- this is just- a drill to ensure our safety. If everyone will please- Eldes, now!” the voice yelled. There was an eerie whirring as everyone’s Pokemon were being sucked into the air towards the helicopter! Pikachu was dragged out of Ash’s arms and started flying towards the helicopter.
“Pikachu! No! C’mon Brock help me!” Ash screamed. They lunged after Pikachu but they tripped hard on the smooth stadium floor because they were running too fast.
“Pikachu… noooooooooooo!” Ash half screamed and sobbed. “We’re gonna find Pikachu if it’s the last thing we do!”
“Shut up kid. I know where your Pikachu went,” a voice behind them said.
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so... it was a page in microsoft word... it seems a bit short... o well it is just a prologue not a chapter. how is it?
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