Wildegde

[armaldo]

Hello pe0-ples, welcome to my first comic. It's about two brothers who live together in Slateport. Because it's not mentioned in the first comic thier names are Sean(The Fr/Lg one) & Stev-o(The R/S/E one) Wildedge. I hope you like it.

Credits:
Spritersreasource
Badassbill for the Slateport, Sotopolis, & underwater sprites
Becon for the objects sprites


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[umbro]

lol! That's quite good. Maybe take away those speed-line-things. But other than that. It's wicked.

 

[Bu†cH]

Here's what I think of this comic.
Forgive me if this offends you.

 

[/Exiled/]

Beautiful. That was rude and seemed more like a way to make fun of him.
Its his first comic give him some criticism. To go through all that when you could have just SAID it is pointless.

anyways.
For a first comic it was pretty good. Decent humor and sprites arent to bad.
But you must shrink the Bubble down because its a bit to large. And work on your grammer..

 

[kinglerking]

this isn't bad for a first comic. keep it up!

 

[PK]

Ok this is a desent comic but you need some improvements, 1 get some phone sprites and 2 why is the thought bubble in the 2nd panel under the bed, and why is that anoying blue thing (can't spell his name) flying around. ah well 5-7/10 is the nicest way to put it

 

[Neopolis]

It's average. But the characters look a bit small. And editing the characters would be welcome. Even it were crappy recolors, anything is better then using them straight from the game. And DO NOT use battle sprites unless it is for a battle or a close-up.

 

[armaldo]

Thanks guys I'm glad you like it. I'll give some color to Sean & Stev-o, the masquerain won't be there anymore, & the speech bubbles will be smaller.

Next one is coming up soon.

EDIT:here it is the next one.$$ sorry it wasn't as soon as it was intended to be.