Wizards of the light world

[OmegaDragon]

Hello, and welcome to my newest comic. This is much more serious than my other comic Chronicles of Koroh, but I will add some humour into this comic. Hope you enjoy!

000. Introduction

Season 1
001. Packed up
002. You're coming
003. The cheifs awake

Newest episode

Fanart
none

Credits
bghq for backgrounds

 

[XxGreivousxX]

wow, even for 2 diffrent frames this is an amazing comic
i'll be sure to make some fan art! xD

 

[OmegaDragon]

Wow, 5 minutes after I post I already earn a fan. Another record for guiness. XD
Now that Im done with that, here is a new episode

 

[Mutten jr]

I like the sprites but the problem is that it's sorta got the same plot as The Chronicals of Koroh. I like it but don't make it quite so like The Cronicals of Koroh

 

[OmegaDragon]

Actually, this comic is going to be nothing like Koroh. Demo isn't a chsen one like Billy, he is just some kid who wants to get out of hiding and save his people. It will also be easier to understand once I have another few episodes up.
I will try to have a new episode up later. right now I am very busy with himework, music, and art lessons

 

[XxGreivousxX]

d00d this is niiice

 

[OmegaDragon]

Thanks Grevious.
new eppy

 

[XxGreivousxX]

kewl! andrea has a swell personality!

 

[Mastercougar]

You've got great sprites, great backgrounds, and great plot here! Congratulations!

But the spelling seriously hinders people's ability to enjoy it. If you were to run everybody's lines through spellcheck, I think that would be pleasantly effective.

 

[OmegaDragon]

Ok, I will work on my spelling. I am usually good at it, but The last two days I have been busy so I am rushing my text a little. I will also fix some of the spelling mistakes later on.
I will have a new comic up later. Thank god that I have little homework again.

EDIT:Completed

 

[Magma Grunt Alex]

hmmmm...... I like this comic, Hope a new one comes soon. I'll keep an eye on this one.

 

[OmegaDragon]

Sorry about the delay guys. Ive been a little busy. In will have another episode up later today.

 

[Konion Champ]

Well, this is a very nice comic. Although it does lack various humor that most excellent comics deserve.

 

[OmegaDragon]

Thats because I want this comic to be a more aerious one. Not all comics are funny -.-
Anyway, sorry about the delay again. I had my grandmas b-day yesterday and some long-lost friends over the day before that

 

[Sola]

Cool! It's a bit odd, though. Is it hard to make serious comics?

 

[OmegaDragon]

Im actually better at comedy than serious, but it will get better as I get more eppys up. Sorry about the lack of updates, Ive been working on Chronicles of Billy.

 

[Sahaqiel]

Well, serious comics seem to take up time, and comic releif which in turn, creates a rather bland situation. I like the sprites and all, but when the blue guy is walking his foot is kinda distracting. I'm not a huge fan of cliches, but the "spoke too soon" and "dont-go-alone-im-coming-with-you-endangering-myself-and-making-you-reply-with-the-obvious" cliches are big ones. So reading the first three comic i have come to a conclusion that
1# a little cliched
2# sprites are good
3# the plot is somewhat neutral in interesting-ness
4# The cheif character seems like another cliche
5# the comic is good, but i have to pass it off as average for now.
Trying to create constructive critisism,
Sahaqiel