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Wolf- an attack (short story)

Jawz

Advanced Trainer
The wolf came in, its shadow casted by moonlight. The young boy lay there sleeping in bed. A sudden pounce was felt upon the matress. All that could be seen was the void of the night, the glow of the moon, and stars that blanketed the midnight sky. A growl was heard. The boy's blood went cold as ice. His original pale skin color turned more whiter than its orignal tone. His heart rate shot up, pounding hard in his chest; the vibration only to be felt in his throat. He gagged, then let out a blood curdling scream.

The parents rushed in as quickly as they could, foot by foot, stumbling in the darkness... to only reach his door. The wolf's eyes flared a bright blue aura. The door slammed shut. From the door the boy could hear his parents begging for mercy, then one ran to grab the phone. In the room, the wolf snarled. The boy was about to let out another scream when a sudden jolt of pain whipped through his neck. The blood came in thin layers, starting out watery, until it thickened into darker, more runnier blood.

The wolf bit down harder. Its teeth sunk into his skin layers. Blood veins popped like pulp in an orange, as the wolf bit down harder. Little blood vessels stuck onto the teeth. The wolf sunk into fat. Those fangs went through it like it was a flan being stuck with a fork at a fiesta. The teeth finally got to the muscle tissiue. Before the boy passed out, he could here his muscles rip. The muscles then started to contract. The airpassed tightened. The mother, slamming frantically into the door, then heard the sound that filled the whole house with horror. It was a bone crunch.

The wolf liked the taste of the soft, creamy, delighting bone marrow. Pieces of bone that shattered, stabbed into the muscle tissue. The boy was dead. A sound of sirens alarmed the wolf. Police surrounded the whole house, and red/blue flashing lights lit up the room that the corpse was in. The wolf jumped upon the window-seal and flew into the air. Blood on the wolf's snout trickled upon the police cars' windows. When they arrived in the room, the sight was horrific. The mother's cry of terror echoed in the dark depths of hearts, hearts that heard her scream. The boy's neck muscle was ripped out. Blood was dripping off of the bedside into a big puddle.....and the wolf escaped to find its next prey.
 
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Hyper Tails

Power of Seven Chaos
The wolf came in, its shadow casted by moonlight. The young boy lay there sleeping in bed. A sudden pounce was felt upon the matress. All that could be seen was the void of the night, the glow of the moon, and stars that blanketed the midnight sky. A growl was heard. The boy's blood went cold as ice. His original pale skin color turned more whiter than its orignal tone. His heart rate shot up, pounding hard in his chest; the vibration only to be felt in his throat. He gagged, then let out a blood curdling scream.

The parents rushed in as quickly as they could, foot by foot, stumbling in the darkness... to only reach his door. The wolf's eyes flared a bright blue aura. The door slammed shut. From the door the boy could hear his parents begging for mercy, then one ran to grab the phone. In the room, the wolf snarled. The boy was about to let out another scream when a sudden jolt of pain whipped through his neck. The blood came in thin layers, starting out watery, until it thickened into darker, more runnier blood.

The wolf bit down harder. Its teeth sunk into his skin layers. Blood veins popped like pulp in an orange, as the wolf bit down harder. Little blood vessels stuck onto the teeth. The wolf sunk into fat. Those fangs went through it like it was a flan being stuck with a fork at a fiesta. The teeth finally got to the muscle tissiue. Before the boy passed out, he could here his muscles rip. The muscles then started to contract. The air pass tightened. The mother, slamming frantically into the door, then heard the sound that filled the whole house with horror. It was a bone crunch.

The wolf liked the taste of the soft, creamy, delighting bone marrow. Pieces of bone that shattered, stabbed into the muscle tissue. The boy was dead. A sound of sirens alarmed the wolf. Police surrounded the whole house, and red/blue flashing lights lit up the room that the corpse was in. The wolf jumped upon the window-seal and flew into the air. Blood on the wolf's snout trickled upon the police cars' windows. When they arrived in the room, the sight was horrific. The mother's cry of terror echoed in the dark depths of hearts, hearts that heard her scream. The boy's neck muscle was ripped out. Blood was dripping off of the bedside into a big puddle.....and the wolf escaped to find its next prey.

I bolded a few of your typos.
 
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MalionX

<Is Ash gay or what?
Nice... a little dark for my tastes... but nice overall.
I'd probably like it more if it was part of a larger story though... from this wolf's perspective.
 

Jawz

Advanced Trainer
Nice... a little dark for my tastes... but nice overall.
I'd probably like it more if it was part of a larger story though... from this wolf's perspective.

I can make it into a whole book series if I felt like it. Do you want more stories of the mysterious wolf?
 
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