Wolfhunters [PG-14 for Violence and Language]

[Bu†cH]

Wolfhunters

This is the first thread of this comic. I only updated the first post here so I could save it in my document and paste in a new thread.
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Last updated in 6/15/2006
This may be my first comic, but this is its second thread. I got the mods to close the first one.
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Synopsis:
An evil Pokemon is on the loose, causing havok in the planet Deridia, a planet where Pokemon could live without fear of humans. Ten warriors will unite and stop the situation from getting worse.
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Two Important Rules:
1) I may be a beginner, but do not be afraid to hit me with constructive criticism, after you read this. http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=91182
2) Flaming or Bashing = Immediate Reportage.
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DISCLAIMER: Deoxys Ribonuke, Zora, Chaos_Control, Hitokiri Bottosai, Pokefan26, or I don't own Pokemon, any of the Pokemon, or any company affiliated with Pokemon.

Commandment number eight: Thou shalt not steal!
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Notification List:
If you're in here, I"ll send you a PM every time I post a new issue.
Deoxys Ribonuke ; Hitokiri Bottosai ; Zora ; Pokefan26 ; Chaos_Control

Beta Testers:
[Cano] ; Deoxys Ribonuke ; Zora
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Terminology:
TBC-To be continued
Gold text box-Narration
Silver text box-Firstly Introduced Move
Blue bubble-Good Guy/Unknown Side Speech Bubble-Discontinued in Issue 7.
Brown bubble-Bad Guy Speech Bubble-Discontinued in Issue 7.
Black text in speech bubbles-Male/Unknown Gender Speech
Pink text in speech bubbles-Female Speech
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Comic Status Orbs inspired by Kroko:

New Comic

Normal Comic

Soon 2B Updated Comic

Updated Comic
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Here are what critics are saying about Wolfhunters so far:

"This is quite good. The sprites are very well." -Iron Picachu
"A good start." -Pokefan26
"VERY good sprites." -~HåçKe®~
"I like it visually." -Blueguy, creator of Pokechow, Everstone, and Netted Bliss
"Great Sprites, Backgrounds, etc. I like it." -Bashaamo
"You do very good sprite work, and your backgrounds have a nice style." -Mastercougar, creator of Reporterz
"Good job. The sprites are well done." -RJ Fighter
"Nice history, action mixed with humor, very Full Metal Alchemist-ish, almost like a tribute." -Omega X
"Issue 4's good." -Bashaamo (again)
"The backgrounds for these comics are outstanding!" -Bagonclaw
"You put quite a bit of effort into it (I can tell), unlike a lot of other comics here. The plot is interesting, and your overall layout is very nice." -blueguy (again)
"Better than most comics on here. Alright, I'll let you in the Academy." -Infinity, creator of Listen Here.
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Part One: Darkness Riding Like The Light

Issue 1: Remake of Battle at Midnight Meadow - 1/3/06 - PM me to see the original version.

Issue 2: The Diver and the Hyper - 11/19/05

Issue 3: The Satanic Jokers - 11/22/05 - Some of your questions will be answered in this issue.

Issue 4: More Than One Of The Same Thing - 12/18/05 - Finally, a battle issue with lack of chat.
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Part Two: Pieces of A Puzzle

Issue 5: The Umbreon With The Mechanical Leg - 1/31/06 - Another side, another reason to like this comic, besides the smoothed graphics.

Issue 6: A Lost Ally: Part One - 3/3/06 - Due to problems with Photobucket, I've divided this oversized comic in half.

Issue 6.5: A Lost Ally: Part Two - 3/3/06
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Off-Topic Quick Comics:

Al, Gay? - 11/22/05 - A quick and offensive comedy Fullmetal Alchemist fan comic with the first Pokemon overworld sprites of FMA ever used in a comic EVER!

Never Bring A Pokemon In Heat To Find Females - 12/31/05 - The quickest comic you'll ever read and one with the (maybe) lamest title.

Never Wear A White Hood On Your Head - 1/23/06 - A quick 8-Bit Final Fantasy comic. No race is offended during the making of this comic.
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FAPAAYQACs:

Q: What does FAPAAYQACs mean?
A: Frequently and Predicted Asked and Yelled Questions and Cmplaints.

Q: Why did you start a new comic thread?
A: Popularity strategy reasons.

C: The comic is too big.
A: If you don't like the size of my comic, you won't like Beco's comics'. They are like 1.5x the size of mine.

C: Cancel your comic while you got the chance!
A: No! I'll keep going until I get to the end and you can't stop me! Deoxys Ribonuke gave me this job.

If you don't like this comic, then I'm sorry to have wasted your time. But, please comment anyway.
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Fan Art by the viewers who liked my comic:
None. Y_Y
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Credit (Issues 1-7):

Deoxys Ribonuke-Original creator of Wolfhunters. Written original storylines of Issues 1, 3, 4, 6, 7. Made Echelon, Venus, and Delta sprites, Grinning Venus pic, Echelon back sprite. Owns Echelon, Gordon, and Delta.
Zora-Written original storylines of Issues 2, 3, 4. Owns Zora and Link.
Sharigan-Revamped Crystal Intro Suicune leaping sprite.
Chaos_Control-Written original storyline of Issue 7. Owns Steele and Blaze.
Coronis-Snowlax sprite.
The Spriters Resource.com-Pokemon sprites, speech bubbles and text, Sonic Advance 3 Route 99 City Backgrounds, Sonic Advance Sky Sprites.
The Monster Rancher Series-Inspiring Deoxys Ribonuke to use the series' Jokers to make her own series.
BiZ (Me)-Written original storyline of Issue 5. Created and edited everything else. Owns Apollo, Europa, and Randy.

 

[Forgotten Chain]

Yeah. 1, It's very hard to see it, and 2, I can't understand what's going on.

 

[pink picachu]

I egt it this is quite good I like the sprites the are very well made I rate 7/10

ps:dont take long to make another comic my bro keeps doing that and everyone hates his comics

 

[Pokefan26]

Its a good start, Butch but its hard to see.

 

[Bu†cH]

Okay, I've added a new feature to the comic. If ya don't know what's happening here, read Long Story Short in the end. It'll explain everything.

Anyone who thought my comic is too hard to see, did ya try zooming in?

Otherwise, I'll fix it.

 

[Forgotten Chain]

Do you think I'm that stupid? I've zoomed in and everything's still too hard to see.

 

[Bu†cH]

EDIT: I made a copy of the first issue and expanded it 200% for the least keen of eyes to see. Come check it out.

The second issue will be coming by the next new FMA episode (Saturday, 10pm or Sunday, 1am Midwestern Time, the encore of the new episode)

 

[.:Tremolo:.]

I still cannot read or understand it. To me things are happening too fast. Though I have to mention, VERY good sprites.

 

[Pikachu1125]

Too much words, try more pictures and better explanations.

 

[Eric]

Uh.. What the hell is going on? You got a tenticle monster fighting a suicine recolor for no reason. You comic is too busy, I don't know what's happening. Also, I think the reason for that is the lack of space in each panel. Instead of 200% it, why not just make the panels bigger? If the panels were bigger, then you could fit the story and effects. Speaking of Effects, you need to work on them, and the sprites and the backgrounds. Too many one colors in there. Here's a way to find out if your sprite fit the background, look at the comic and see if it looks weird. If it does, then it's not good.

 

[Bu†cH]

What the hell is going on?

The first post is now updated so things might start make a bit more sense.

You got a tenticle monster fighting a suicine recolor for no reason.

The tentacle monster is a Deoxys. Again, first post.

If the panels were bigger, then you could fit the story

Sorry. I might fix the panel problem.

Speaking of Effects, you need to work on them, and the sprites and the backgrounds.

The first issue is just a rough draft, a beta, another word that means a crappy example.

It took me about 2 weeks to work on that issue....and the material for the rest of the others!

Too many one colors in there.

What are one colors?

Here's a way to find out if your sprite fit the background, look at the comic and see if it looks weird. If it does, then it's not good.

At least it ain't the worst comic in the world.

Off-topic (Do not reply to this): Speaking of bigger than last, Kingdom Hearts 2 is going to be 2 times bigger than the original.

NO REVIEWS UNTIL I SAY SO!

 

[Zora]

For lot of you that are confused, this comic is based off a story (on SPPf [Story started by Deoxys Ribonuke]). Because it was based off a story that wasn't started by Butchimatic, he does not have control over the title or this intro. (That was the first post, if I remember correctly). Therefore this is an intro to long story,from the Pokemon RPG section. But after all the characters are together, and a few events, the story will start to make a lot more sense.

 

[Bu†cH]

Finally, after a month of laziness, updating the first post here, and making the second issue, I give you......uhhhhhh....the second issue.

Guarranted to be better than the first.

 

[blueguy]

The first issue was sort of confusing. :S I like the little map. It's very well done, graphically.*claps* Your titles (a.k.a. 'The Diver and the Hyper') are hard to read on that backdrop.

I love the name Geronimo Forest! Very cool! The first panel is pretty well done, and I'm assuming you made it yourself. I give you credit for using font like that. Do you have to drag the letters in individually? That'd be HELL! I like the name Zora. You're good with choosing names. There are a few spelling errors. >_<

Overall I'm kind of confused by the entire story... but I like it visually.

 

[Bu†cH]

Give credit to Greenlink for Link and Zora's names. He owns and named them.

Yes. The backgrounds were made by me.
Yes. The text moving thing was Hell indeed! LOL.

Like Greenlink said, as the new issues come, everything will start to make sense.
An addition to that, think of it like Fullmetal Alchemist. The first episode didn't make any sense either. As they advance, they start to make a lot more sense.

Sorry about the spelling errors, wherever they are.

Thank you for liking my comic.

 

[Bashaamo]

I like the layout and everything, but the weird thing is you put the EXACT time in some of the frames. But I like it- Great Sprites, Backgrounds, etcetera.
But the First Comic is confusing, like some people said. But I don't even know who's Venus, the Deoxys or the Suicune... >_>
~;257;

 

[Kroko]

... Try not to add TOO much special effects and stuff.. Also it's very huge O_O it blinds mee.. >_<

It's nice.. I guess.. But my rocks o_o! *Sobs* *Dies*

Good job... I like the sprites..

 

[Bu†cH]

But the First Comic is confusing, like some people said. But I don't even know who's Venus, the Deoxys or the Suicune... >_>
~;257;

Venus is the Suicune like mentioned in the first issue when Echelon, the Deoxys, called up Gordon with her cell phone and said, "Venus sure is a fast one."

The first comic is confusing. I know.
But the first episode of FMA was a bit confusing, too.

 

[Bu†cH]

Sorry to double-post, but two new issues just came out.
Questions will be answered, especially one in a bonus Fullmetal Alchemist parody comic.

 

[Gutsman]

nice comics is that red stuff on them blood? im stupid for asking that