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Wonderful Tonight (AAMayL One-Shot Valentine’s Day Special)

Brian Random

I WAS FROZEN TODAY!!
Wonderful Tonight (AAMayL One-Shot Valentine’s Day Special)

Wonderful Tonight (AAMayL One-Shot Valentine’s Day Special) Rated: U

A/N: Inspired by the song ‘Wonderful Tonight’ by Eric Clapton

It was night time, 14th of February, Valentine’s Day.

There was supposed to be an evening event for Valentine’s Day in Lilycove City of the Hoenn Region but it got cancelled due to bad weather, which was raining. Ash and May were inside their borrowed room of the pokemon centre for the night while their friends, Max and Pikachu were getting some food for the night’s dinner while their other friend, Brock was in another location of the centre, probably sulking because of the cancellation.

The room had four separate beds, one for each of the group, on one side of the room and a number of entertainment systems such as a hi-fi. Ash and May were looking outside of the window, watching the downpour of the rain.

They wanted to go to that party but for different reasons. Ash wanted to be there for the food while May wanted to go there to find someone special to be with for the night.

Ash knew that May wanted someone to dance with and thought that no stupid weather would stop a special day like this one. He walked over to the hi-fi system and searched for a CD with some good songs that could make May happy.

He found a good CD and placed it in the hi-fi. A slow love song started playing, catching May’s attention. “Hey,” she said with a small smile on her face. “I love this song.”

“You, er… wanna dance?” Ash asked nervously, bowing to her politely.

“Oh… thank you,” May said blushing slightly, also bowing back.

They both clasped hands and moved in close for their slow dancing position as a famous singer started to sing the following lyrics.

It's late in the evening; she's wondering what clothes to wear
She puts on her makeup and brushes her long blonde hair
And then she asks me, “Do I look all right?”
And I say, “Yes, you look wonderful tonight.”


As they held on closely to each other while slow dancing to the music, May closed her eyes and pictured herself going to the party that was cancelled that night. In her mind, she was wearing a red dress with red high heeled shoes, along with long gloves on each hand. She then pictured herself slowly dancing with random people, one by one, until she thought about the one person that was dancing with her at that very moment.

We go to a party and everyone turns to see
This beautiful lady that's walking around with me
And then she asks me, “Do you feel all right?”
And I say, “Yes, I feel wonderful tonight.”


Still holding closely onto Ash, she felt a wonderful feeling of warmth and pleasure coming from him as they continued to dance slowly. She was still picturing herself dancing with him, who was wearing a tuxedo, until they looked in each other’s eyes as their faces slowly moved in until their lips pressed.

I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you


In reality, the Valentine’s Day event party was cancelled because of the rain, she wasn’t wearing the beautiful dress, no one was there to see them dance and no kisses were made. Despite all that, she felt just as happy because she was dancing with the teen that she held closely to her heart.

She remembered all the great things that he had done for her in the past and all the great and bad moments they had since they first met. He supported her throughout many adventures; many times when she participated in pokemon contests as pokemon coordinator and that meant a lot to her.

It's time to go home now and I've got an aching head
So I give her the car keys and she helps me to bed
And then I tell her, as I turn out the light
I say, “My darling, you were wonderful tonight.”


Along with the song, she wanted the dance with him to never end.

But as the song did, they both looked at each other’s eyes. “You okay, May?” Ash asked with curiosity in his eyes, looking at May’s blushing face.

“Yeah… I’m feeling wonderful tonight,” May replied, letting out a small relaxing sigh.

Oh my darling, you were wonderful tonight.


END! Happy Valentine’s Day, people!
 

Sika

Transcendence
It was right in terms of description and story -cute, by the way-, but the length was very short in comparison with your other one-shots. So: 7.5/10
 
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Ember

Guest
I liked it. It was short, but also very sweet. ^^ Anyways, keep up the great work!
 

crisiscore

ZAP CANNON
This one-shot was so sweet. I didn't think i saw any gramtical or spelling mistakes. It was kind of short though, but still good. Good luck next time.
 

Brian Random

I WAS FROZEN TODAY!!
Shatoshi: Yep, spotted you in the other one-shot, I'll respond to that. Thanks for reviewing.

Sikamikanico: I admit it was short but then again so was the song so there wasn't much for me to write about, plus I was thinking more about the scene. I should make the next one a little longer. 7.5/10? It's a little less than I was expecting but meh.

Ember: Again, I admit that it was short but so was the song. I noticed that your review is short too! Haha! ^^

elementalmightyena: Thanks.

Criscore: You people know sweetness when you see one. I double checked on MS Word a couple of times so there shouldn't be any. I know it was short but I should make the next one a little bit longer.
 

CyberCubed

Yeah, ok!
It was pretty sweet, but it seems like your Pokeshipping and Contestshipping ones were much better. This one kinda paled in comparison, it just didn't seem as endearing as the others. Your other Valentine one-shots were much better than this one. Still it was pretty romantic and the song fit, it was short but enjoyable.
 
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charizard trainer #1

Ready to lose???
This was sweet but i preferred the other one about Brock. True it was short... but hey, length is no indicator for quality.
 

Brian Random

I WAS FROZEN TODAY!!
Cybercubed: Well, for each one-shot I tried to make them as sweet as I can with the help of those songs. I’ll try to improve on the next one.

Charizard Trainer #1: I was feeling rather cheeky when I was writing that Brockshipping fic… does that that I’m turning evil? Anyway, thanks for reviewing this one and I’ll try to make the next one longer.

Jemi Rose: Thanks.
 
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