Chapter 1: Mistaken
CHAPTERS 1 AND 2 ARE BEING REVISED, GO STRAIGHT TO 3
PLOT SUMMARIES
Chapter 1:
A scientific researcher named Jack Tallihan is given the job to scout out a new dimension that scientists at the D.R.L. have discovered. He takes with him a robotic guardian, R.A.A., and some recording equipment. He arrives in this new dimension at Virmilion Forest and is arrested by Officer Jenny because he fits the description of a poacher she's after.
Chapter 2:
Jack shares a prison cell with James and Meowth of Team Rocket, and, after a dream sequence which reveals aspects of his past, he escapes with them after Jessie comes to rescue them.
Chapter 3:
Jack escapes from Team Rocket with his robotic guardian and finds himself in another forest. Deciding that this is the opportune time to study this strange environment, he pulls out his recording device and surveys the area. Soon, though, Team Rocket is after him because they wish to capture his robot which they think is a new specie of Pokemon. Ash, Misty, and Brock see him descending from the sky and are also looking for his landing sight. Officer Jenny is searching for him so that she might take him back to prison, and all three of these parties end up confronting Jack and the robot at the same time.
Chapter 4:
A battle between Jack's robot, R.A.A., and Starmie, Onyx, Growlithe, and Pikachu ensues. Pikachu is stolen by Team Rocket after the battle is over, and Jack offers to help get it back.
The plot takes so many twists and turns and unveils itself as something much more than the beginning chapters would have you believe. Stick around for a fic with non-stop action and a most unexpected and shocking ending (chapter 16). Enjoy!
Chapter 1:
After years of research and countless experiments, scientists at the Dimensional Research Laboratory have confirmed the existence of multiple dimensions. Having tested the waters with monkeys and other animals, they were finally ready to send a man to another dimension. His quest into the unknown would be broadcast on television around the world and everyone would watch in awe as Jack Tallihan wandered through the various distortions of this world.
Equipped with a protective suit to guard him against any possible threat present during the dimensional transfer and a robotic companion who would serve as a protection against any thing that he might face in the strange lands, Jack was already being strapped into the vortex generator. The robotic guardian was fashioned in the shape of a back pack and could unravel itself to become a six-foot tall, walking humanoid. Some assistants placed his helmet on and then stood back as operators began to activate the vortex. Encased in a white metal sphere, no one could see the look of horror on Jack’s face as he started to hear all manner of humming noises and began to feel as if he was being pulled in all directions at once. The white orb that he was inside of continued to gain power and the lights in the lab began to flicker. Moments later volts of electricity shot from all around the orb into the center creating a glowing mass of light.
“Step into the light, Jack,” urged a scientist.
“I always imagined hearing that at a different time but, here goes.” Jack took a step forward and then disintegrated and disappeared. The world was watching as this happened and everywhere people were anxious to hear what would happen next. Then, one of the head scientists at the D.R.L. stepped up to the camera.
“Our mission seems to have been a success. Jack Tallihan, the brave volunteer that you just saw disappear should be on his way to a pre-determined landing point in a world far different from our own. This landing point has been scouted out by a trained monkey and is very secluded. He won’t draw attention to himself and we will be able to bring him back if he returns to that same spot at the right time. Don’t worry, we told him when to return. Um, now all we can do is wait. He won’t be back until next week and then he will give us a full report on this other world that we’ve sent him to. We’ve provided him with a video recording device with which he can document his days exploring the unknown. That is all.”
Jack was still between the worlds traveling towards the end of the tunnel created by that machine. His body was being pulled in different directions by the force of him passing through a rift to another world. His face contorted with pain as he struggled not to cry.
“I…can’t imagine…how…bad this would’ve been without…this…suit,” he struggled to say, talking to himself. Then it stopped and Jack began to appear in the middle of a forest near a stream. As his individual particles began to rush together, some forest Pokemon began to stare at him curiously. Something was wrong though and Jack couldn’t tell what. It was a Raichu. A Raichu had been taking a drink at the spring in the precise spot where Jack was set to appear. The Raichu struggled as Jack’s physical presence revealed itself more and more even though it was occupying the same space as this unwitting Raichu. It let out an extremely powerful electrical charge freeing itself in the process. When Jack’s translation was complete, he hollered out with pain and then collapsed face-down in the grass unconscious. The Raichu, exhausted, slowly crawled away.
“Excuse me sir, but this is no place to take a nap.” Officer Jenny had been patrolling the forest searching for poachers that night and happened to come upon a strange man lying unconscious in the grass. Jack slowly became conscious and opened his eyes. He lifted himself off of the ground promptly and stood face to face with a blue-haired, brown eyed woman with a sapphire hue officer’s uniform on.
“Um, I…I’m sorry miss,” Jack stammered now remembering what had just happened to him. He looked down at his watch. It had not survived his dimensional transition and was no longer an accurate time piece.
“I’m going to have to take you in to the station, sir,” Jenny said as she pulled out a pair of handcuffs and motioned for him to turn around.
“That’s really not necessary, I was just feeding the ducks here and, well, um, I got kinda drowsy and just passed out right here on the edge of this lake. Isn’t that a funny story? I can’t wait to tell my…friends back in the town or city, place,” Jack said nervously. Jenny could see that he was lying by the way that his hazel eyes darted from side to side as he told his tale.
“That s’posed to be funny, punk?” she said becoming more forceful. “What do you need this big metal back pack and all of this protective armor for if all you are doing is feeding the “ducks” as you call them? What are these ducks? Are they here now?” Jenny grasped her Growlithe’s Pokeball and threw it to the ground in front of Jack.
“What the heck is that? Are you throwing some kind of bomb at me?” Jack said as the ball hit the ground. Beginning to open, Jack shielded his face and instinctively moved back as a small orange dog-like creature with a bushy white beard and a bushy white tail appeared. It was unlike anything he had ever seen and Jack reached in his pocket for his mini video recording device (m.v.r.d.). Growlithe leaped towards him and locked his jaws around Jack’s arm. Jack cringed and let go of the camera as Jenny tackled him to the ground finally hand cuffing him.
“Try to pull a fast one, eh? Well, you’re going with me to the station.” Jenny finished cuffing him and led him to the police car that was parked at the edge of the forest. She had taken his m.v.r.d. and was now examining it as they walked along. “Is this a Pokemon egg that you stole?” She said not quite understanding such an odd little device. It was as small as the palm of her hand and had a metallic hue and sparkled brightly when sunlight struck it through the foliage of the forest. Its elliptical shape made it look similar to a very small Pokemon egg and this would be Jenny’s prime evidence against him. Having supposedly found one of the poachers she had been looking for, Jenny drove off towards Vermilion City. Jack sat in the back of the police car having been relieved of his robotic guardian back pack and metallic armor wondering where he be taken and how much trouble he was in.
That’s the end of chapter 1. How was it? Any feedback is welcome.
CHAPTERS 1 AND 2 ARE BEING REVISED, GO STRAIGHT TO 3
PLOT SUMMARIES
Chapter 1:
A scientific researcher named Jack Tallihan is given the job to scout out a new dimension that scientists at the D.R.L. have discovered. He takes with him a robotic guardian, R.A.A., and some recording equipment. He arrives in this new dimension at Virmilion Forest and is arrested by Officer Jenny because he fits the description of a poacher she's after.
Chapter 2:
Jack shares a prison cell with James and Meowth of Team Rocket, and, after a dream sequence which reveals aspects of his past, he escapes with them after Jessie comes to rescue them.
Chapter 3:
Jack escapes from Team Rocket with his robotic guardian and finds himself in another forest. Deciding that this is the opportune time to study this strange environment, he pulls out his recording device and surveys the area. Soon, though, Team Rocket is after him because they wish to capture his robot which they think is a new specie of Pokemon. Ash, Misty, and Brock see him descending from the sky and are also looking for his landing sight. Officer Jenny is searching for him so that she might take him back to prison, and all three of these parties end up confronting Jack and the robot at the same time.
Chapter 4:
A battle between Jack's robot, R.A.A., and Starmie, Onyx, Growlithe, and Pikachu ensues. Pikachu is stolen by Team Rocket after the battle is over, and Jack offers to help get it back.
The plot takes so many twists and turns and unveils itself as something much more than the beginning chapters would have you believe. Stick around for a fic with non-stop action and a most unexpected and shocking ending (chapter 16). Enjoy!
Chapter 1:
After years of research and countless experiments, scientists at the Dimensional Research Laboratory have confirmed the existence of multiple dimensions. Having tested the waters with monkeys and other animals, they were finally ready to send a man to another dimension. His quest into the unknown would be broadcast on television around the world and everyone would watch in awe as Jack Tallihan wandered through the various distortions of this world.
Equipped with a protective suit to guard him against any possible threat present during the dimensional transfer and a robotic companion who would serve as a protection against any thing that he might face in the strange lands, Jack was already being strapped into the vortex generator. The robotic guardian was fashioned in the shape of a back pack and could unravel itself to become a six-foot tall, walking humanoid. Some assistants placed his helmet on and then stood back as operators began to activate the vortex. Encased in a white metal sphere, no one could see the look of horror on Jack’s face as he started to hear all manner of humming noises and began to feel as if he was being pulled in all directions at once. The white orb that he was inside of continued to gain power and the lights in the lab began to flicker. Moments later volts of electricity shot from all around the orb into the center creating a glowing mass of light.
“Step into the light, Jack,” urged a scientist.
“I always imagined hearing that at a different time but, here goes.” Jack took a step forward and then disintegrated and disappeared. The world was watching as this happened and everywhere people were anxious to hear what would happen next. Then, one of the head scientists at the D.R.L. stepped up to the camera.
“Our mission seems to have been a success. Jack Tallihan, the brave volunteer that you just saw disappear should be on his way to a pre-determined landing point in a world far different from our own. This landing point has been scouted out by a trained monkey and is very secluded. He won’t draw attention to himself and we will be able to bring him back if he returns to that same spot at the right time. Don’t worry, we told him when to return. Um, now all we can do is wait. He won’t be back until next week and then he will give us a full report on this other world that we’ve sent him to. We’ve provided him with a video recording device with which he can document his days exploring the unknown. That is all.”
Jack was still between the worlds traveling towards the end of the tunnel created by that machine. His body was being pulled in different directions by the force of him passing through a rift to another world. His face contorted with pain as he struggled not to cry.
“I…can’t imagine…how…bad this would’ve been without…this…suit,” he struggled to say, talking to himself. Then it stopped and Jack began to appear in the middle of a forest near a stream. As his individual particles began to rush together, some forest Pokemon began to stare at him curiously. Something was wrong though and Jack couldn’t tell what. It was a Raichu. A Raichu had been taking a drink at the spring in the precise spot where Jack was set to appear. The Raichu struggled as Jack’s physical presence revealed itself more and more even though it was occupying the same space as this unwitting Raichu. It let out an extremely powerful electrical charge freeing itself in the process. When Jack’s translation was complete, he hollered out with pain and then collapsed face-down in the grass unconscious. The Raichu, exhausted, slowly crawled away.
“Excuse me sir, but this is no place to take a nap.” Officer Jenny had been patrolling the forest searching for poachers that night and happened to come upon a strange man lying unconscious in the grass. Jack slowly became conscious and opened his eyes. He lifted himself off of the ground promptly and stood face to face with a blue-haired, brown eyed woman with a sapphire hue officer’s uniform on.
“Um, I…I’m sorry miss,” Jack stammered now remembering what had just happened to him. He looked down at his watch. It had not survived his dimensional transition and was no longer an accurate time piece.
“I’m going to have to take you in to the station, sir,” Jenny said as she pulled out a pair of handcuffs and motioned for him to turn around.
“That’s really not necessary, I was just feeding the ducks here and, well, um, I got kinda drowsy and just passed out right here on the edge of this lake. Isn’t that a funny story? I can’t wait to tell my…friends back in the town or city, place,” Jack said nervously. Jenny could see that he was lying by the way that his hazel eyes darted from side to side as he told his tale.
“That s’posed to be funny, punk?” she said becoming more forceful. “What do you need this big metal back pack and all of this protective armor for if all you are doing is feeding the “ducks” as you call them? What are these ducks? Are they here now?” Jenny grasped her Growlithe’s Pokeball and threw it to the ground in front of Jack.
“What the heck is that? Are you throwing some kind of bomb at me?” Jack said as the ball hit the ground. Beginning to open, Jack shielded his face and instinctively moved back as a small orange dog-like creature with a bushy white beard and a bushy white tail appeared. It was unlike anything he had ever seen and Jack reached in his pocket for his mini video recording device (m.v.r.d.). Growlithe leaped towards him and locked his jaws around Jack’s arm. Jack cringed and let go of the camera as Jenny tackled him to the ground finally hand cuffing him.
“Try to pull a fast one, eh? Well, you’re going with me to the station.” Jenny finished cuffing him and led him to the police car that was parked at the edge of the forest. She had taken his m.v.r.d. and was now examining it as they walked along. “Is this a Pokemon egg that you stole?” She said not quite understanding such an odd little device. It was as small as the palm of her hand and had a metallic hue and sparkled brightly when sunlight struck it through the foliage of the forest. Its elliptical shape made it look similar to a very small Pokemon egg and this would be Jenny’s prime evidence against him. Having supposedly found one of the poachers she had been looking for, Jenny drove off towards Vermilion City. Jack sat in the back of the police car having been relieved of his robotic guardian back pack and metallic armor wondering where he be taken and how much trouble he was in.
That’s the end of chapter 1. How was it? Any feedback is welcome.
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I like it. Lets see how it progresses.