worlds collide! a mario comic!

[reg teh yoshi]

my retry at a comic.

i knoow the past year i've been lazy,but i've decided that comics won't make themselves.

so this is my final promise at a series of comics.

the bad thing is i don't have internet at my house so updates will be extremely rare until i get it back.

COMICS
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intro
#1:bless the lord!
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the comic is more decent then kirby's life.it has backgrounds,and the F and S words are censored.

bios
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comin soon...or later.

plot
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bowser makes a magic transport portal that transports people into other worlds,but it goes out of control and starts spewing things everywhere,even kirby,sonic,pikachu,and the unexpected:beavis and butt-head.now mario,his friends,and the 2 adolescent idiots must stop bowser...and a few new enemies!

 

[Clockworkz]

The sprites are good. Except for Banzai Bill. It looks too flat and uninteresting when compared to the other graphics. I like the backgrounds, and what not. However, the jokes are not funny. At all. And religion shouldn't really get brought into sprite comics too much. It just detracts from the overall quallity, and is incredibly unnessecary. Not to mention the fact that it's flame fodder for the Intolerants (as I like to call them). Not bad, though. Improve the jokes, and it'll be a million times better.

 

[Magical Trevor]

sprites: good backround: very good plot: 6/10 I can't really see one comin' on yet. Over all: 8/10