Wty #1

[CzBacklash]

Before I go off making a whole comic I want you the people's consent on the very first epesode of Wisper Thy Name. Which is my Pokemon Comic I'v been writing scripts for and whatnot, and its going to conjoin with the other comics over at the Pixelated Empire. So references to Ace of Abra, Emerald Version, and Pokemon Challanged, will be abound in this comic.

So without further ado. The first page!

Whoa holy crap link!

 

[Haunt of the Vile]

Hmmm...
There's too much text, hardly any drawn is seen, and those lines that I see, I found them out complex It took a while to figure out what happened...
But it's funny, though x> I can't wait to see more.

Oh, and btw, I think this would go to Fan-Comics- section...

 

[Omega Pirate]

The storyline so far is good, the bit at the end is funny. The first panel is covered almost entirely by text so I have no idea what the picutre is of. Bigger panels will solve that text problem, or less text in more panels.