Yet You I Have Forgiven (Poem)

[Saya]

Hey. I don't think I've posted a non-Pokemon poem here before, but I've written tons and I liked this one a lot. I wrote it today. It was almost a spur of the moment kind of thing when I sat down and just began to write. I really like it and I hope you will too!
Please give me some feed back.
Enjoy!

~Saya~

Yet You I have Forgiven
A Poem by Saya
Lies and lies,
Endless lies.
The trust we had is shattered and gone,
And you were in the absolute wrong,
But you don’t see it as I do,
And you don’t care as I do.

When I knew what you were doing
I turned from what we were doing

And you began to hate me;
still now you hate me.

Lie and lies,
Endless lies,
I tried to tell you, you were wrong,
But you wouldn’t listen all along
So I turned my face away from you;
You didn’t care what I was telling you.

So they caught you in the act.
Your life was just an act.

And you began to hate me;
Still now you hate me.

Lies and lies,
Endless lies.
You blamed me for all your trouble,
When I did not want the rubble.
You wanted me to feel your pain,
But I already did feel your pain.

Your life was ruined for what you chose;
My life was changed for what I chose.

And you began to hate me;
Still now you hate me.

Yet you I have forgiven.

 

[Hakura May]

Wow. I thought that was very good. ^-^

Although the "Lies and lies, Endless lies" sounded a little odd to me. Maybe it's just me. ^-^˚˚˚˚

In any way, I thought it was really good.

Keep up the good work!

 

[Saya]

Thanks. Hmmm...personally I liked the 'lies' part, but everyone has their preferences. Thanks for the review though. I don't get them much anymore. Maybe that's because I don't write pokemon fanfiction anymore so...bleh.
Well, thanks for the input!

~Saya~