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Yu-gi-oh: Tribal force attack.

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medichampion

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This is my first RPG so it may not turn out right and be closed early but i'll try anyway. It's a Yu-gi-oh RPG

Their world in chaos the monsters were rioting and only few could stop the fighting. These are the Elemental Heros but they are captured by Andro Sphinx and Sphinx Telia. Few monsters who aren't helping towards the destruction are a group of monsters led by the Sorceror of dark magic. At his sides are the Dark Magician and Dark magician girl. Their plan to stop the fighting is to get help and find the Elemental heros. One has been found already but is being unleashed.

"Sir we need a plan before we're found down here."

"Dark Magician. We need a plan i agree but what plan though?"

"I have an idea. I may only be a girl but i've had access to the human realm before so maybe we can get help from them. Combining our magic we can turn them to monster forms temperarily."

"I'm liking that idea. Both of you get to work transporting them here."

"Yes sir." Both secondary magicians said bowing to the stronger of the three. Then they walked off. They needed as many people as possible and they had a feeling that it could take a long time.

Within the first couple of hours they had found a few and had data on them in the form of.

Name:________
Age: ____
Gender:_____
Personallity/Apperance/History:_______________
Favourite card:_____________
Location of pick-up:_________



That's the plot so all you need to do is use that form. The favourite card is the one you'll turn into so don't have any massive ones ar really small ones.

Mine's.
Name: Raz
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personallity/Apperance/History: Long green dyed hair underneath a dark blue hooded top. Wears grass stained light-blue jeans. He wears a turquise-blue braclet that was a gift of his old friend. He is extremaly lazy but when he's preparing for a big fight he'll prepare himself to win at all cost. He is always striving to be the best and self-proclaims himself as 'the best at everything'. He is new to the hole duel monsters theory.
Favourite card: Ryu Senshi
Location of pick-up: In his house just waking up.


I'm hoping this goes well and doesn't get closed but with my luck it will.
 

Nylf

Well-Known Member
Okay, point 1, you're too pessimistic.
Point 2, this sounds TOO much like my RP, Yu-Gi-Oh: Fiend's Rising, purely coincidence? I hope so.
Point 3, plot's too short. Why has Andros and Telia captured the E-Heroes? What do the E-Heroes look like? WHAT DOES ANYONE LOOK LIKE?
Point 4, why is their chaos?
Point 5: Combining Personality, History and Description is foolish. Those are the three most detailed sections of the sign up, recommended at four sentences minimum. Your sign up itself was too short, with the combined section just reaching over four sentences, where 12 would be about right.
Point 6: Why do we need to know the favourite monster?
Pont 7: What if people don't know anything about the favourite monster of other RPers? Guess?

That's all I can help you with.
 
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