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[Lamington Luffy]

I don't like ****** but Breeder requested it. So here ya go XD

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[pokeinuyasha]

Well, it's pretty good! I don't really know why, but there's something wrong with it...

 

[Lamington Luffy]

Yeah, maybe the legs.....and the hands.

But thanks for your comment anyway ^^

 

[pokeinuyasha]

You're welcome ^^

 

[Infinity]

Ok I need to go to class, but I'll give you a quick crit anyway. Not too bad...

The arms are not of a consistant width, you need to remember that gravity is your friend when drawing folds and stuff too. The eyes are spread out way too far remember they should be about the length of the width of a nose apart. His jacket is too wide above his waist too. The hands look a bit funny and his legs look spread apart a bit too much.

 

[AV_ROcK-Dark-TB]

hmm,It's more of a cartoon style then Anime..Well as for the cartoon style It's good I even like It..^.^

 

[Demise]

The hand that had the thumbs-up, is too deformed. The wrist sticks out from the wrist collar.

The ear is hanging low.

The size of the sleeve on his right hadn is smaller than the one on his left. A huge lump of material on his left and very skinny and tight-looking sleeve on his right.

Also the wrist, from the right hand and trace it down to his wrist. The wrist curves outwards, but the wristsleeve curves inwards, and it doesn't look right.

He looks fat, no offense. The huge glob-like material makes him look fat.

I don't think that a spike of hair sticks out under the headband.

The neck collar, where it looks all woolly, it is supposed to be sticking up, not flattened. The orange part between the collar and above the blue part, is a bit pushed off to the side to look connected to the rest of the clothes.

I respect that you tried hard on it, even though you didn't like it. Good job though.

P.S: Is this suppose to be a chibi form? Because his headband is too large.

Eevee says: Tasch! ;133;

 

[Comis Patronus]

Hey I think it's great inbetween abstract and cartoon. It's fantastic and creative!

 

[Lamington Luffy]

The hand that had the thumbs-up, is too deformed. The wrist sticks out from the wrist collar.

The ear is hanging low.

The size of the sleeve on his right hadn is smaller than the one on his left. A huge lump of material on his left and very skinny and tight-looking sleeve on his right.

Also the wrist, from the right hand and trace it down to his wrist. The wrist curves outwards, but the wristsleeve curves inwards, and it doesn't look right.

He looks fat, no offense. The huge glob-like material makes him look fat.

I don't think that a spike of hair sticks out under the headband.

The neck collar, where it looks all woolly, it is supposed to be sticking up, not flattened. The orange part between the collar and above the blue part, is a bit pushed off to the side to look connected to the rest of the clothes.

I respect that you tried hard on it, even though you didn't like it. Good job though.

P.S: Is this suppose to be a chibi form? Because his headband is too large.

Eevee says: Tasch! ;133;

=/ I guess. I was never good at drawing humans. More of an animal artist.

 

[Tip The Waitress]

He looks like one of the characters out of that stupid old show "Doug"

 

[Demise]

It's hard to draw people...well to me not really...just the hands are hard. XD

I can't seem to draw adults.

Hope we can see one of your animal drawings.

Eevee says; Tasch! ;133;

 

[Breeders]

nice effort, yet somewhat telling me that she put a lot of effort into this, so i can't really criticize the bad points, but i still give credit for the effort. in short, NICE JOB!

 

[Lamington Luffy]

nice effort, yet somewhat telling me that she put a lot of effort into this, so i can't really criticize the bad points, but i still give credit for the effort. in short, NICE JOB!

^_^ thanks *hug*

 

[Fool's Hope]

Never watched ****** in my life, but I'll still comment. ^_~

I think he's cute. The style is sorta semi-chibi. And I like! I like the eye color, too. It's pretty.
His one arm looks kinda wobbly. Almost like he doesn't have a bone.... which would be weird.... XP
Good job!