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amazon forest?

deadlyrose

how shocking
how do you describe the amazon forest? do i just say it and let people know, or do i desribe bits my character goes to or do i describe the whole thing? please help.

from deadlyrose ;100;
 
I SWEAR there was a thread on this, one of those rant threads, oneof those threads where people argue and crap. Over petty little things, too...

Anyway, why?

Ok, heres my opinion anyway.

The fact that you're calling it a forest in the first place already gives everyone who reads it a basic idea of what the whole thing looks like, an abundance of tall, verdant trees. Thats a forest. What you need to do in the description is portray the interesting parts.

So seeing as the whole thing has already been described with one word, it gets the reader more involved with the story and the character if you begin to describe it from his point of view, as they enter the forest. So describe the little area around him, and then we have the idea of what the forest is like, its characteristics. Then thats all we need - so long as you continue to describe parts in relevence to the plot throughout.

Just describe it, nobody can tell you how to describe, its writing, its an art, basically. You can't tell soemone how to put feel into their work, you can't tell them how they can personalise it, because its their work and only they know. Try it, and see what people think, then learn from your reviews. Don't ask how to describe an area.
 
okay, so u think it'll be okay if i just write amazon forest and only describe the interesting bits?

from deadlyrose ;100;
 
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Well yeah, I mean, we all know what a forest is. But this doesn't mean only tell us when theres a red tree instead of a green tree - what I mean is describe the charicteristics of the forest.

So like, vines hang from just about every tree within sight, or moss is growing in abundance at the bases of the trees. Perhaps there are many trees that have been cut down, or burned. Describe that, and thats the description, thats all you really need.

I mean theres no point in saying, 'the amazon forest, a huge area spanning for miles and filled with lots and lots of trees.' Thats telling us what a forest is. We all know what a forest is.

So yeah, just the bits that make the amazin forest, like the wildlife, or the humidity, or whatever. And I think this can be more easily and more efficiently done if it were from your character's point of view.

Thats my opinion, at least.
 
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