Celery's Sprites.

[Celery]

Rather uncreative title, my apologies. xP
Heeah we go!

EDIT: GAAHHH, messed up the transparency on a couple of them..

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Messed up transparency, click here for sprite
Messed up transparency, click here for sprite
Messed up transparency, click here for sprite


Re-Elements

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Fakemon

 

[LoneStarAkira]

When setting out your sprites, try to set them next to each other for each group rather than have one per line. Makes for easier viewing. ;3

You can fix transparencies with iaza, most of the time. If you want to make sure you won't accidentally transparent a part of the sprite itself, make the background a very default-y colour that isn't on any part of your sprite. That always works.

I notice that you shade alot. It isn't always a downfall; it actually makes for a really unique style. Though they don't look very Pokemon-y (fakemons and some of the fusions), your shading seems quite nicely applied.

The only sprite of yours that I have a problem with the shading with, is the Ursaring/Ledian fusion, around the bottom of the stomach. Try making the shading more spaced out, rounder, and maybe give it a little bit of dithering.

Your rat-like fakrmon, though I'm a little unsure where the centre of the belly is, has very attractive shading. Adding markings that shading matches the rest of the body gives it such a stunning effect that always grabs attention.
I do recommend giving some more attention to the face, though, mainly with the eyes. Make their pupils and the white shine more obvious and it would make it look even better.

Also with fakemon, make sure they're literally based off of some form of creature or object. Your other two, I'm a little confused as to what they actually are. The botton one being a bit too small to notice any sort of form.

You have some nice creativity with your fusions. <: Just make sure to keep some black outlines in the darker areas of the sprite, where it's needed.

Hope this helps. Loving your start~ <33

 

[Celery]

When setting out your sprites, try to set them next to each other for each group rather than have one per line. Makes for easier viewing. ;3

I personally like it for the sprite lines, but I will fix it for the second section.

You can fix transparencies with iaza, most of the time. If you want to make sure you won't accidentally transparent a part of the sprite itself, make the background a very default-y colour that isn't on any part of your sprite. That always works.

I actually never had trouble until I switched to iaza :/ So I'm going back to what I was using before. D;

The only sprite of yours that I have a problem with the shading with, is the Ursaring/Ledian fusion, around the bottom of the stomach. Try making the shading more spaced out, rounder, and maybe give it a little bit of dithering.

Yeah, this one gave me a lot of trouble actually. I found when the shading was too round, it made him look too round, and when he's supposed to be a fighting type he kind of has to be at a good level of fitness. And unfortunately, I have to refuse to dither, I used to do it, and when I did I used it way too much.

Also with fakemon, make sure they're literally based off of some form of creature or object. Your other two, I'm a little confused as to what they actually are. The botton one being a bit too small to notice any sort of form.

Uh.. the second one was originally supposed to be a cross between an anteater and a snake, but it kind of morphed. The other one, which does have some transparency issues of its own was cygnet dressed as a singer I like XD

Hope this helps. Loving your start~ <33

It did help, thanks. It's not really my start though, i've been spriting for quite some time.. this is just what I felt like displaying. d;

 

[pikadude43]

these are good but i dont like the fakemon sorry