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Comic Sprites

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idc47

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Note: All these comic sprites were made and created by me, so no stealing my work. If you want a scene in your sig, PM me. Please Rate.
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Alphonse Elric

That's My Rule!!!
Eh, I've already seen this before. You should have asked a mod to move your other thread rather than make a new one with the same content... Oh well, I'll comment anyways.

Comments:

- Okay, in the first box, the map clearly shows that there is no space behind Professor Oak's Pokémon Laboratory. How come there is suddenly a large space that appears behind the Lab in Box 3?

- In the second box, it says that Isaiah was born in 1989. So that must mean he's 16 going on 17. Isn't that age a little too old for a Pokémon Trainer? I mean, they're usually 10-12 years old, aren't they?

- Same comment for Rusty.

- In Box 3, why is the Cycling Road building in there?

- And the way you made Rusty get the Charmander... Is it purposedly so that Isaiah could win against him by using Squirtle, or is it to imply that Rusty's Charmander will evolve into a Charizard and Rusty will be a noob?
 
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Alphonse Elric

That's My Rule!!!
Comments:

- Okay, the Character Bio said that "Isaiah was a friendly and easygoing person". How come he is suddenly telling Rusty, his "best friend since elementary school" that he sucks?

- After they bet the $10, Isaiah acts like... well, Gary. What happened? What the Character Bio says is VERY contradictory to how the characters actually act like in the comic.

- Okay, Professor Oak said someone was to recieve the Bulbasaur... But how come it's suddenly a battle-to-be scene with Team Rocket? It's confusing, if you asked me.
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Some people say "Comic Sprites" instead of "Sprite Comics", Forgotten Chain. I think he means he made the comics.

As for the comics, Phoenix Wright basically pointed out everything. Other then the fact that it's cliché and lacks speech bubbles.
 
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