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[DiamondMaster]

Hey people

This is my team!! At a glance:

~DRAGONITE~MANTINE~ZAPDOS~LUCARIO~TOGEKISS~STARMIE

I'm going to display my team this way:

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NickName @ Item
EV Spread
Nature | Ability
- Move 1
- Move 2
- Move 3
- Move 4
DISCRIPTION
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Draco Knight @ Choise Specs
6 Hp / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid | Inner Focus
- Thunderbolt
- Ice Beam
- Flamethrower
- Draco meteor
Covering all types, most Super effective. Has BoltBeam combo, Flamethrower is for type coverage. I Think STAB+ Choise Specs Draco Meteor kills everything that gets hit, but maybe Dragon Pulse is more usefull in the long run.
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Sea Master @ Damp Rock
124 HP / 40 Def / 212 SpA / 132 Spe
Modest | Swift Swim
- Surf
- Rain Dance
- Ice Beam
- Confuse Ray
Only job: Rain Dance. Ice Beam and Surf are for attacking, my speed boost makes me a littles better. Confuse ray is mostly the 2nd attack, getting counters mad of hurting themselves... This guy is only going to switch a lot.
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Zappy @ Leftovers
252 HP / 220 Def / 36 Spe
Modest | Pressure
- Thunderbolt/ Thunder
- Thunder Wave
- Roost
- Extrasensory
Zapdos, ruler of electricity. Biggest job is countering psychical treads, however his rock weakness isn't going to help me. The 1st move is for offensive, maybe I pick Thunder over T- Bolt becouse i've got rain up. T- Wave for crippling speed, Roost for healing and losing my fly type, hoping no one expects me to do that and EQ me... Last move = Filler!!!
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Luke @ Life Orb/ Focus Sash
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly | Steadfast
- Sword Dance
- Extreme Speed
- Earthquake/ Crunch
- Close Combat
SDCario. Great offensive tread against a lot of teams. Offensive combo makes him really strong, while is able to get At least 1 SD In, mostly a 2nd one is easy to becouse the opponent switches to a counter. Lucario is my late game sweep.
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Toge-Toc @ Leftovers
252 HP / 46 Def / 60 SpA / 152 SpD
Timid | Serene Grace
- Body Slam
- Air Slash
- Aura Sphere
- Roost
Standard ParaFlinching Togekiss. Serene Grace is the best ability ever, Body Slam has 60% Paralys chance, while Air Slash has 60% Flinch Chance. Roost To heal of damage, Aura Sphere for more type coverage.
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Star- Lord @ Leftovers
212 HP/ 60 Def / 20 SpD / 216 Spe
Calm | Natural Cure
- Recover
- Rapid Spin
- Surf
- Thunderbolt
Rapid Spinner. Also a good counter IMO, it's very defensive typing makes it a reliable Mixape counter. Surf ans T- Bolt are for offensive joking ^^

Rate Away Please

 

[Hitsugaya]

Pretty Weavile weak, TBH. Get a Foretress possibly over Zapdos since it can give you some Spin support which you pretty much need.

 

[MetagrossMasta]

anything with an Ice / electric move is going to go throug this team like butter on that comes to mind is agiligross (the ones that carry Thunder Punch), Electrive, or weavile will really rip this team apart

 

[Blue_Harvest]

MASSIVE Stealth Rock weakness.

Skarmory and Blissey easily wall your whole team except Lucario who Skarmory can just Whirlwind out.

If Mantine is only Rain Dancing for you, you might as well use Kingdra. It can run the same moveset minus Confuse Ray, but he can actually hit hard instead. Also it would help your rediculous SR weakness.

 

[DiamondMaster]

Donphan @ Leftovers
??? / ??? / ???
Jooly/ Adament | Sturdy
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Ice Shard
- Stealth Rock

How about this????

 

[Sardaukar]

This team is way too centered on special sweepers. You have only one physical attacker and one wall (which you are using, ironically, as a special sweeper). If they whip out a special wall like Blissey, you're screwed as soon as the very fragile Lucario dies. You need to mix it up a bit more. Why not make the Dragonite a DDnite? It would give you a physical attacker, and takes advantage of Dragonite's higher offensive stat.

This team is VERY Stealth Rock weak. I know you have a spinner, but that won't stop the SR from potentially causing major damage to your team. BoltBeamers can also rape almost your entire team, with the huge amount of Flying types you have. As has been said, replacing Mantine with Kingdra will help a bit with this, but not a lot.

Body Slam on Togekiss is a no-no. Give it Thunder Wave. It's attack is too low to use Body Slam, and even 60% chance of paralysis isn't a guarantee. Go for the sure thing. It's better in the long term.