Dairy

[Dreamingflower]

Wel I just got a great idea thanks to my sister I'm going to write a fan ficton in dairy form each time it's the dairy of a diferent person from the pokemon ***** special and here comes the greatest part if you want to write an diary here you can do it. You can choose every genre you want. if you want to make a comedy or a shipping fics suit yourself o and don't forget to put the genre and the owner of the diary. For example red's diary
genre horror.

Platinum's Diary
genre: comedy

Dear diary,

I woke up with the most strange dream I had. I was walking with Dia and pearl near Snowpoint and it was very cold. Pearl suggested to have some training so we went to a place near lake Acuity. Some hours later Dia wanted a break because he was hungry and he wanted some hot tea.

Sorry i'll finnish tomorrow my mother want's me to go to bed.

 

[Treeconator11]

Yeah, this ain't cutting it here. It's way, way to short.

Two pages on word, at least please. That's how long it needs to be. You should have finished this before you posted it. I noticed a huge lack of descripition in this thing, along with some very strangly worded parts, like "Some hours later" or, "I woke up with the most strange dream I had."

Finally, you missed some capitalization, and your grammer and spelling could use work.

Also, don't complain about me being harsh, you just wait until Yami Ryu shows up.

 

[Zephyr Flare]

Sorry i'll finnish tomorrow my mother want's me to go to bed.

Please do not use the reply box to create your works. All Operating Systems like xp and whatnot have some form of word program in built where you can save for when not in use. Windows has Word (If paid for), Wordpad and Notepad as a randome xample. then can just hit save and continue working at a later time.

Sandra