Dash v3

[Dashiel]

Ok, so here is my sprite.

I can't remember who exactly made the back sprite but if it was you, please tell me I am desperate to know. The hair on the overworld is taken from Avatar's Park sprite (the fringe.)
This is Version 2 (Made like..Last year.)

Version one is long gone (Thank god.) It's only remains are on Adam_148's sprite comic on PC.

 

[Freundmon]

lol, It's DASH! I think your overworld is good and the front too, but the back sprite doesn't have stable shading. (come check out my thread in the fanart section)

 

[Dashiel]

Yeah, I agree about the back sprite. I didn't make it however. Rock Lee gave it to me without a name on who made it so..Yeah. I will probably Re-make it one day.

 

[Redeevee]

who's he? an original?

 

[Dashiel]

Well.. He is me pretty much lol.

 

[D-Man]

well, well isn't this dash who always complains about my grammar on PC (Pokemon Path) i agree, back sprite has bad shading on body/hair, but the rest is good on version 2

 

[~Iron-Vaati~]

*Vader voice* Your lack of black in the outline is most disturbing.

Well yeah, basically you need to work on contrast between the shades and put some black into the outline, that's the main crits I have.

 

[Dashiel]

Lol @ D-Man .
I know that the lack of the Black Line makes it VERY ugly but I can't really do outlines without making it look worse