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Demon Hunter

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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Yo. While I'm killing time waiting for paychecks, I figured I might as well continue with my MSPaint Comic, Demon Hunter.
Alright. I'll update every so often, so just sit tight, I guess.
The first two are pretty old, so you may notice a style change between some of them, since I was only working on them sporadically.

Storyline: In the late 25th century, scientists happened upon an artifact known as the Satyriasis Rune. Upon examination, it seemed that "Beelzebub's chant shall awaken His power", an obscure inscription, was traced to an old Armenian scroll. When this chant was recited in front of the stone, the skies turned blood red, and cracks opened in the surface of the earth, and Hell's demons made their way onto the planet and decimated the human race. Only when or if the rune is found and destroyed, then the demons will return to hell, never again to plague the earth. The surviving humans wage their war against the demons as Demon Hunters, but one man in particular has shown an amazing amount of skill with his equally amazing gun. He is Kain Maxwell, and he is the best hunter alive.

ACT 1
1-1
1-2
1-3
1-4

Current Page:
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Nice.

Whilst it's not hugley important, the page can be given more impact by ensuring the edges of the panels line up. It sort of makes it more solid in appearance, IMO. However as I said you don't really need to, it's a matter of preference.

For MSpaint, that's some pretty amazing stuff. How long per page?

EDIT: What's with the forums. Why are they so slow? I can't even load the front page most of the time :|
 
kind of an odd place to put them dont ya think? in the middal of pokemon fan comics lol. But there not bad. I dont know what to think of them yet becouse it just started but so far its cool. I hope you keep working on them.
 
Heh. Thanks.
Ok, updating with the NEWER looking comics. Looking new, because they are new. I actually made these recently :o
comments, thoughts, anything... please.
 
Wow I really like your artwork.The fact that you did it in MS Paint makes it look wonderful.I'm looking forward to seeing more so it's too early for me to make a detailed comic.^.^
 
Some minor problems I see:

You misspelled "damn it" in 1-4 and put "dammit".

Alot of the time I see the text touching the textboxes, which makes the comic look unappealing. Alos the text that is on the bottom is often cut short, I don't know if you did that to make room, or if it's somehtign wrong with the limage, but it makes it look shotty and hard to read.

Overall, it looks pretty good. I'd like to see more if you'll update. k?
k?
 
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