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fakedex69
- Thread starter kavin69
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That thing doesnt have really any shading. And it ist roundish. the outlines were obviously used with the pencil tool. I dont really like the outcome, but if i were to immagine what they would look like if they were done better, theyd be prety good.
In conclusion, you have some good ideas, but your not the best spriter.
In conclusion, you have some good ideas, but your not the best spriter.
blazikenBAM
alittlestitious
wow
i'm sorry but these are just bad.
look at some tutorials or at just other sprites before you try to yourself.
they have no outline and no shading. really just blobs of color.
to remedy this, look at tutorials. start small: a recolor and then work your way up. scratch sprites are hard.
sorry if i'm being harsh.
just look at the stickies in the forum. they should help a lot!
i'm sorry but these are just bad.
look at some tutorials or at just other sprites before you try to yourself.
they have no outline and no shading. really just blobs of color.
to remedy this, look at tutorials. start small: a recolor and then work your way up. scratch sprites are hard.
sorry if i'm being harsh.
just look at the stickies in the forum. they should help a lot!
They're pretty bad, but to be honest, my first scratch sprite looked waaay worse and I think the ideas are good. (as mentioned earlier)
The sprite that looks best out of them is the bird, I think, as it looks "cleaner" than the others. Although you might want to work on the outlining of it, so it dosen't look so cut off at the edges. The wings for example would've looked so much better if the whole wing were outlined.
They don't seem to be completely scratch either, as the flames on the fireballs looks copy and pasted, so does the bird. Maybe you should try mixing pokemon first before you try to scratch?
Otherwise it's not anything that hasn't been mentioned by others, you need to work on your shading, and it would've been a good idea to look at some tutorials first. They could help a lot.
But that's just my opinion, sorry for the rant.
The sprite that looks best out of them is the bird, I think, as it looks "cleaner" than the others. Although you might want to work on the outlining of it, so it dosen't look so cut off at the edges. The wings for example would've looked so much better if the whole wing were outlined.
They don't seem to be completely scratch either, as the flames on the fireballs looks copy and pasted, so does the bird. Maybe you should try mixing pokemon first before you try to scratch?
Otherwise it's not anything that hasn't been mentioned by others, you need to work on your shading, and it would've been a good idea to look at some tutorials first. They could help a lot.
But that's just my opinion, sorry for the rant.
Glacia Rampage!
Sneaky Lil' Spinda
Wow... Everebody says there bad...
I think you should practice. I practice all the time. I tried to make this mix of Meganium/Dewgong/Swampert and i accidently deleted it ._.
I think you should practice. I practice all the time. I tried to make this mix of Meganium/Dewgong/Swampert and i accidently deleted it ._.
Glacia Rampage!
Sneaky Lil' Spinda
It's like you used the pencil tool without zooming in...