First team

[Turboclatin Jones]

Here is my first attempt at a team, I just got Pearl and from reading some stuff I came up with this. Tell me if its worth making and what not and give suggestions. And if its really horrible, please just tell me right away.

Skarmory@Leftovers
Evs: 252HP 96ATK 156Def 4?
Spikes
Drill Peck
Roost
Whirlwind

Empoleon@Leftovers
Evs: 252Hp 252SpDef 6SpAtk
Surf
Ice Beam
Yawn
Grass Knot

Garchomp@Leftovers;444;
Evs:252SpAtk 252Atk 4Hp
Swords Dance
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Fire Fang

Metagross@Expert Belt;376;
Evs: 252HP 252SpAtk 4Speed
Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Psychic
Thunder Punch

Magnezone@Leftovers
Evs: 252SpAtk 172Hp 84SpDef
ThunderBolt
Flash Cannon
Toxic
Barrier
Ill bet thats a baddy.

Palkia(Mah Homie)@Lustrous Orb
Evs: 252SpAtk 252SpDef 4Hp
Surf
Ice Beam
Dragon Claw
Thunder

Thanks, please rate out of 28. EX: 24/28;328;

 

[megachu17]

well, u cant hav palkia because its an uber, so if u use it, ull be going up against other ppl using ubers, then ull die...um...skarmory metagross and salamence r very common in competitive battling, so they tend to be good, but most ppl no how to counter them, so id say its a good way to start making a team, but ull probably end up changing it quite a few times(but then, the best way to learn is experience anyway), but yea...

 

[Hitsugaya]

Here is my first attempt at a team, I just got Pearl and from reading some stuff I came up with this. Tell me if its worth making and what not and give suggestions. And if its really horrible, please just tell me right away.

Skarmory@Leftovers
Impish
Evs: 252HP 96ATK 156Def 4 Speed
Spikes
Drill Peck
Roost
Whirlwind

New EVS from Smogon. Great....

Empoleon@Leftovers
Calm
Evs: 252Hp 252SpDef 6SpAtk
Surf
Ice Beam
Yawn
Grass Knot

OK, but this Pokemon is pretty bad compared to some other walls.

Garchomp@Leftovers;444;
Jolly/Adamant
Evs:252ATK/252Speed/4HP
Swords Dance
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Fire Blast

This isn't a Gabite. Anyways, Fire Blast is usually better to kill Skarm and Foretress. Fire Fang is weak, and the afformentioned won't be hurt much.
Use these Evs.

Metagross@Expert Belt;376;
Adamant
Evs: 152 HP / 252 Atk / 104 Speed
Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Agility
Thunder Punch

You'll like this one much better.

Magnezone@Leftovers
Modest
Evs: 252SpAtk 172Hp 84SpDef
ThunderBolt
Flash Cannon
Toxic
Barrier
Ill bet thats a baddy.

Somebody else should rate this. I'm not very experienced with Magnezone.

Palkia(Mah Homie)@Lustrous Orb
Evs: 252SpAtk 252SpDef 4Hp
Surf
Ice Beam
Dragon Claw
Thunder

Take him off your team, or you're gonna lose in uber battles.

Thanks, please rate out of 28. EX: 24/28;328;

No. Number rates aren't allowed.

Uber weak. Next time remember your natures.
Changes in bold.