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Flight

Alecat

I'm Back!
(or: "How I Learnt to Fly")

A quick comic I did last night. I'm not quite happy with the pacing, but I love the art in it...

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Hope you enjoyed it :)
 
Wow, very very snazzy. I love the perspecitve of the two figures on the smaller bird drawing. I really do love the design of the penguin a lot, and the poses, they're so action generated, it makes for a quite awesome effect.

I'd say the hands that support the girl in the last one don't quite look positioned right. I've done the same thing to a kid, but maybe it's just me. Besides, such a small thing doesn't matter when you did so much "Right" on the other panels.
 
Yes, the hands should be angled a little differently and the guy's head is a smidge too small... But who cares? Wow, that's an awesome image- I love the poses of the birds, and the concept as a whole. Is this india ink? If it is, the shading is phenominal, considering how hard it is to get tones perfect in that medium. I never see any really nice pictures done in india ink, so it's always a treat when I do. ^_^

Love the vulture, the owl and the pelican- although the penguin's pretty trippy too.
 
I Don't Blame The Girl, If She Falls I mean. XD. But Yeah, Change The Angle Of The Arms, And Then the black Bird Thingy, A Don't Know What It IS XD. So Yeah, Make It More 'Stand Out' Or Somethin. :/
 
Thanks for all the comments :)

The pose in the last panel is a bit strange because I switched art styles slightly, and because from my observations, people always seem to hold children kind of awkwardly- but I suppose I could have done it better.

This was done with Chinese Calligraphy ink, I'm not sure how similar it is to India ink but I think the techniques used would be the same. Most of the birds are also outlined with a fine liner pen, which I also used for the small details and the people.

Wesheg: the "Black bird thingy" (and the albatross) is from before I started solidifying ideas and referencing heaps of photos. So that could have been done a lot better too.

Again, thanks for the comments and criticism and stuff.
 
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