I have been working on a fic for a while but it hasnt been coming along that great. I suck at detail and need a little help. I am not in any way asking for someone to write it for me, I just require a little help and maybe a beta reader. Below is a preview (I cant do spoiler tags )
We see Pewter City during the early hours of sunrise. The town is bathed in a golden light as the sun peeks over Mt. Moon, a tall mountain that was famous for its population of Clefairy, a short mammal that had small wings, short stubby arms and legs, curly hair, and small pointy ears. This town was home to a promising young soon to be Poke’mon trainer. His name was Matt Gibson, he was ten years old, had dark brown hair, hazel eyes, an iron will to succeed and didn’t take cruelty very kindly.
At the early age of ten years old, he was now able to be registered into the Poke’mon League. He was currently going to a Poke’mon school to learn how to battle more efficiently. He learned that in order to pass the finals, he would have to capture a wild Poke’mon to use in battle. Matt loved the idea and started thinking about what he would capture. After waking up early, he took the pet Vulpix that one of Matt’s older brothers had found on his adventure through Kanto, the Vulpix was a small fox shaped creature with six curly tails and an arsenal of devastating fire attacks. After arriving at the base of Mt. Moon, Matt started thinking about what was inside before wandering in. After a couple minutes of thinking, he decided that he would capture the first thing he defeated.
Shortly after walking in, Matt had Vulpix send a couple flares to light the place up. Vulpix shot out several small flames and made visibility easier. Finally, after about an hour of searching, Matt noticed something shuffling around in the corner of a small room. Matt ordered Vulpix to send out another flare in order to get a better look. Vulpix shot out another flame and showed what was hiding in the darkness.
We see Pewter City during the early hours of sunrise. The town is bathed in a golden light as the sun peeks over Mt. Moon, a tall mountain that was famous for its population of Clefairy, a short mammal that had small wings, short stubby arms and legs, curly hair, and small pointy ears. This town was home to a promising young soon to be Poke’mon trainer. His name was Matt Gibson, he was ten years old, had dark brown hair, hazel eyes, an iron will to succeed and didn’t take cruelty very kindly.
At the early age of ten years old, he was now able to be registered into the Poke’mon League. He was currently going to a Poke’mon school to learn how to battle more efficiently. He learned that in order to pass the finals, he would have to capture a wild Poke’mon to use in battle. Matt loved the idea and started thinking about what he would capture. After waking up early, he took the pet Vulpix that one of Matt’s older brothers had found on his adventure through Kanto, the Vulpix was a small fox shaped creature with six curly tails and an arsenal of devastating fire attacks. After arriving at the base of Mt. Moon, Matt started thinking about what was inside before wandering in. After a couple minutes of thinking, he decided that he would capture the first thing he defeated.
Shortly after walking in, Matt had Vulpix send a couple flares to light the place up. Vulpix shot out several small flames and made visibility easier. Finally, after about an hour of searching, Matt noticed something shuffling around in the corner of a small room. Matt ordered Vulpix to send out another flare in order to get a better look. Vulpix shot out another flame and showed what was hiding in the darkness.