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RYKUU

Water Trainer
Electivire (Sassy) no item
EVs: none
-Shockwave
- Thunder
- THunder bolt
- Thunder Punch

Magmortar (bold) no item
EVs: none
- Flame Thrower
- Lava Plume
- Fire Blast
- sunny day

Hariyama (hardy) no item
EVs: none
- Wake Up slap
- Force Palm
- Close Combat
- Reversal

Steelix (timid) no item
EVs: none
- Thunder Fang
- Iron Tail
- Stone Edge
- Crunch

GLiscor (Sassy) no item
EVs: none
- Night Slash
- Poisen Jab
- U -Turn
- X - Scissor

Torterra (Gentle) no item
EVs: none
- Earth Quake
- Crunch
- Giga Drain
- Wood hammer.

I want to know:
Do i leave this?
Do i Change, If so what pokemon, what moves, what item, what nature
Do i just change Moves?
And your opinino overall.
 
First of all, don't put 4 moves of the same type on one, or 3, or (most of the time) even 2.

Electrive, Adamant

Ice Punch
Thunderpunch
Earthquake
Cross Chop

Magmortar, Mild/Modest

Flamethrower
Thunderbolt
Cross Chop/Focus Blast
Will-o-Wisp/Overheat

Hariyama, Impish

Substitute
Focus Punch
Stone Edge
Payback

There's also...

Hariyama, Adamant

Close Combat
Payback
Stone Edge
...Facade...

Steelix, Impish/Relaxed

Earthquake
Stone Edge
Gyro Ball
Explosion

Gliscor, Impish/Adamant/Jolly

Earthquake
Aerial Ace
Roost
Ice Fang

Torterra, Adamant/Impish

Earthquake
Stone Edge
Wood Hammer/Seed Bomb
Leech Seed/Synthesis/Curse/Crunch



Huh... You have a lot of tank-ish Pokemon. O_O
 
Electivire (Adamant) Expert Belt/Life Orb
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
- Cross Chop
- Earthquake
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch

Electivire's Attack is superior to its Special Attack, and your moves were all Electric. If you ever come across a Ground-type then you're dead. Here, you might want to exchange Cross Chop for something else if its low PP doesn't suit you in-game. Moveset ripped completely from Smogon.

Magmortar (Modest) Leftovers/Expert Belt
EVs: 6 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Flame Thrower
- Solarbeam
- Will-O-Wisp/HP Ice
- Sunny Day

You shouldn't have three Fire moves on the one guy. Solarbeam doesn't need to charge up when Sunny Day is in effect, so that's a better option, and Will-O-Wisp keeps weather-changing predators at bay.

Hariyama (Impish/Adamant) Leftovers
EVs: Depends
Ability: Thick Fat/Guts
- /Force Palm/Cross Chop/Close Combat
- Stone Edge
- Substitute/Endure/Fire Punch/Ice Punch/Brine/Earthquake
- Reversal/Fire Punch/Ice Punch/Brine/Earthquake

Interesting, here. Once again, moves of all one type are a no-no. But you have some choice. Force Palm is weaker but has paralysis chance, Cross Chop is strong but inaccurate, and Close Combat is strong and accurate but lowers your defenses. You could use Substitute or Endure with Reversal, but it's not that great in-game. The elemental punches are good for type coverage, but I think they need a move tutor, so you might have to use Brine. Earthquake along with Stone Edge hit heaps of types, so use them.

Steelix (Impish) Leftovers
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Atk / 136 SpD
- Stealth Rock/Toxic
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge/Toxic
- Explosion

Steelix is a wall. So, if you like, you could set up Stealth Rock or cripple your opponents with a status problem. EQ/Stone Edge is a reliable combo that can be used again, and Explosion is a good last ditch attempt to destroy your opponent (provided you carry some Revives with you). You might want to get rid of Steelix and use a Special Wall, because this team lacks one.

GLiscor (Jolly) Leftovers/Life Orb
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
- Rock Polish/Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge/Baton Pass
- Roost

I'm not obsessed with QuakeEdge... o.0 much... You can either use the boosts from Swords Dance or Rock Polish (preferably Swords Dance) or you can Baton Pass them to Torterra, Hariyama or Electivire. I recommend passing them on, because you've already got three physical-centred 'mon at the moment and with the boosts you might be able to overcome opposing Physical Walls.

Torterra (Adamant) Leftovers/Choice Band or Scarf
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Spd
- Earth Quake
- Stone Edge
- Crunch/Synthesis/Leech Seed/Superpower
- Wood hammer.

Gotta love the starters. Nearly all of your Pokemon are capable of QuakeEdge, so that might be something that needs reviewing. A good combo, but its a good idea to have a BoltBeamer or something. Crunch is okay, but Synthesis lets you heal and you'll have Sunny Day support from Magmortar. Leech Seed is another option, and Superpower is more of a filler than anything. It's strong, though.

I want to know:
Do i leave this?
Do i Change, If so what pokemon, what moves, what item, what nature
Do i just change Moves?
And your opinino overall.

Changes and comments in bold. You need more Special-oriented Pokemon, and a few supporters. Maybe get someone to help you with choosing some different guys.

Good luck!

EDIT: Damn, I knew someone would get in before me!
 
thanks for that so are you saying i might have to re-breed them?
If i get a new team of poekmon can you suggest any that would make a good team (as a bunch)
could you suggest a new team?
 
Electivire@Life Orb
EVs: 6 HP /252 Atk / 252 SPD
Lonely
- Cross Chop
- Ice Punch
- Earthquake
- Thunderbolt

Magmortar@Choice Scarf
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 SPD
Modest
- Cross Chop/Focus Punch
- Flamethrower/Overheat
- Thunderbolt
- HP ice

Hariyama@Leftovers
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Def
- Focus Punch
- Substitute
- Bulk Up
- Knock Off/Stone Edge/Earthquake/Bullet Punch


GLiscor@Leftovers
EVs: 252 HP / 6 Atk / 252 Def
Impish
- Aerial Ace
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Roost/Knock Off

Torterra@Life Orb
EVs: 58 HP / 252 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Rock Polish
- Wood hammer.

I want to know:
Do i leave this?
Do i Change, If so what pokemon, what moves, what item, what nature
Do i just change Moves?
And your opinino overall.

YOur team had really bad moves change.
 
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