I'm back.

[The Sarge]

Ok, awhile ago you guys may remember a spriter named Damian the Duck, or Joshi, or something similar. Well, I'm back. Dumb me frogot both my username and password, so I had to make a new account. So, I'm comming back to spriting with this.

It isn't anything special, but its my first work with the 4th generation sprites.
Please C&C.

 

[TiagoGR]

It is nice I think, but the hat is kinda weird. And is he wearing a cape?

 

[The Sarge]

Thats his hair, not a hat. And he does have something on his back, a sword.

 

[blazikenBAM]

i think the sword on his back should be placed a bit more off center because it gets kinda lost in the hair.

overall the sprite is pretty good. a decent edit, just some extra features could really make it better. also, the shirt could use a bit more shading xD

good work

 

[The Sarge]

Thanks. I thought somthing wasn't right about the shirt, so thanks for pointing it out. Now that you mention it, I can see the think with the sword. Thanks for the review.