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ParaChomp

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Standard rules, no ubers, no legendaries and half of you team has to be the same type.

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Swampert
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Leftovers
Torrent
Sassy nature
[100 HP, 104 DEF, 252 SP ATK, 100 SP DEF]
Roar
Stealth Rock
Muddy Water
Earthquake

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Breloom
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Toxic Orb
Poison Heal
Adamant nature
[4 HP, 252 ATK, 252 SPD]
Leech Seed
Spore
Focus Punch
Substitute

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Umbreon
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Leftovers
Synchronize
Careful nature
[156 HP, 252 DEF, 100 SP DEF]
Wish
Yawn
Heal Bell
Payback

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Dusknoir
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Leftovers
Pressure
Careful nature
[252 HP, 4 DEF, 252 SP DEF]
Shadow Punch
Thunder Punch
Will-O-Wisp
Pain Split

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Rotom
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Choice Scarf
Levitate
Timid nature
[4 HP, 252 SP ATK, 252 SPD]
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Overheat
Trick

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Gengar
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Life Orb
Levitate
Timid nature
[4 HP, 252 SP ATK, 252 SPD]
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
Thunderbolt
Destiny Bond
 
It would really be helpful to have descriptions of your Pokemon. It's hard to tell you what you should fix about your Pokemon if you don't say what each Pokemon's job is.

I'll tell you a couple of things though. Dusknoir and Rotom-H are kinda redundant, since both are primarilly spin blockers and Rotom-A always outclasses Dusknoir. I'd also be careful about Gengar, as too many Ghost types will give you a weakness you don't want. Also, Umbreon is outclassed by Vaporeon as a Wish passer, and Swampert really doesn't make the best of leads due to it being so easy to set up on.

Once you've added in a good description, then I'll come back and give you a full rate. Good luck!
 
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