Larvitar

[Rageman]

http://i10.*******.com/2yto1vb.png
CC's.

 

[Chinese Teletubbie]

Very Good, defently the best Larvitar custom I've seen

 

[Blizregin]

It looks a little thin, but none the less, it is a very good custom.

 

[Rageman]

Fixed the tail up.
http://i14.*******.com/2e3twjr.png
More CC's, please.

 

[Blizregin]

His eye's looks like he's looking up at something. He also looks a wee skinny. Fatten him up.

 

[ellie]

As the above poster said, he looks a bit skinny.

Is that his tail behind him? It's way too big, and it's the wrong shape. Look at the Sugimori art or an anime picture for reference when making the shape of custom sprites.

His eye should not be solid red and white. You could give it a little shading if you want, but it's not necessary. However, you need to give it a black part for a pupil.

His legs also look a bit big compared to the rest of his body, but that might fix itself if you make him fatter.

Certainly not bad, but you should work a bit more on your lineart before you shade.

 

[pokeboy sarab]

As the above poster said, he looks a bit skinny.

Is that his tail behind him? It's way too big, and it's the wrong shape. Look at the Sugimori art or an anime picture for reference when making the shape of custom sprites.

His eye should not be solid red and white. You could give it a little shading if you want, but it's not necessary. However, you need to give it a black part for a pupil.

His legs also look a bit big compared to the rest of his body, but that might fix itself if you make him fatter.

Certainly not bad, but you should work a bit more on your lineart before you shade.

I have to agree it looks weird.

 

[blazikenBAM]

anorexic larvitar..?

you need to fatten 'im up! like what Chaos Emerald said, you need to use the sugimori are as a refrence or just another larvitar sprite. also, it's kinda hard to tell because of the size, but i think it has too much dithering in the shading.

just a few minor things that would improve your sprite!