.:Machine Union:.

[Shadow Ho-oh]

This deck is a yugioh advance deck. Can you please rate it...?

Monsters (22)
Submarianeroid x2
Heavy Mech Support Platform x3
Drillago
Mechanicalchaser
Machine KIng
Machine King Prototype
V-Tiger Jet
W-Wing Catupult
X-Head Cannon
Y-Dragon Head
Z-Metal Tank
Gear Golem The Moving Fortress
Emes The Infinity
Radiant Spirit
Electric Virus
Guardian Sphinx
Drillroid
Golem SentryVictory Viper xx03

Magic (17)
Pot Of Avarice
Heavy Storm
Reload
Power Capsule
Mystical Space Typhoon
MAchine Duplication
7 Completed
Fissure
Linear Acclerator Cannon
Swords Of Revealing Light
Geavity Axe - Grarl
Invigoration
Weapon Change
Limiter Removal
Tribute To The Doom
Gaia Power
Enemy Controller

Trap (16)
Roll Out x2
Just Deserts
Ordeal Of a Traveler
Dark Coffin
Spell Shield Type -8
Compelsory Evacuation Device
Covering Fire
Sakuretsu Armor
Dust Tornado
Ultimate Offering
Rare Metalmorph
Malfunction
Stronghold The Moving Fortress
Hidden Book Of Spell
A Rival Appears

Fusion (3)
VW- Tiger Catapult
XYZ-Dragon Cannon
VWXYZ-Dragon Catapult Cannon

 

[UltimateNagash]

This deck is a yugioh advance deck. Can you please rate it...?

Yep, sure. First things first, I removed lots of needless cards: you had 55 cards in your deck - if you're focusing on the V-Z series, you need a deck as small as possible. And you need a minimum of 2 of each version. So here's my redux of your deck. I added in Cyber Phoenix because it protects Machines, Blowback Dragon as it's decent field clearance etc.
Emes is a monster that can be kept or removed (I kept it as I think it's a good card - Perfecr Machine King is a good substitute though...)
Also, the Gadget's might be nice cards to add, and if you want, add Cyber Dragon - personally they're a bit overated, especially if you want to focus on something like V-Z. Enjoy

Monsters (20)
Emes the Infinity/Perfect Machine King
Blowback Dragon
Submarianeroid x2
Heavy Mech Support Platform x2
V-Tiger Jet x2
W-Wing Catupult x2
X-Head Cannon x2
Y-Dragon Head x2
Z-Metal Tank x2
Drillroid
Victory Viper XX03
Cyber Phoenix x2

Magic (15)
Pot Of Avarice
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Smashing Ground
Hammer Shot
Lightning Vortex
Scapegoat
Swords Of Revealing Light
United We Stand
Brain Control
Limiter Removal
Snatch Steal
Premature Burial
Enemy Controller
Dimension Fusion

Trap (8)
Roll Out x2
Solemn Judgement
Return from the Different Dimension
Mirror Force
A Rival Appears
Call of the Haunted
Ultimate Offering

Fusion (3)
VW-Tiger Catapult
XYZ-Dragon Cannon
VWXYZ-Dragon Catapult Cannon

43 cards main deck