MAJOR help needed

[tegele]

okay i need these four rated and an idea of what my weaknesses are:
Starmie @ Lum Berry (experience w/ starmie says you need that):
Hydro Pump
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Recover
EVs in SpA and defense

Exploud @ Chesto Berry:
Rest
Overheat
Earthquake
Roar
EVs in SpA and Attack

Magneton @ Sitrus Berry:
Thunderbolt
Tri Attack
Protect
Metal Sound
EVs in SpA and SpDef

Ludicolo @ Persim Berry/Leftovers?:
Hydro Pump
Giga Drain
Ice Beam
Mist
EVs in Speed

 

[Taylor Ray]

I'm not very used to using Exploud, Magneton, and Ludicolo, but I think Starmie should have Surf instead. It has better accuracy. And believe me (I use Starmie in the BF) you will need it.

 

[firemonk]

take roar from exploud and replace it with hyper voice/hyper beam, it kills all. Magneton and Exploud will get owned by fighting types. Use Leftovers for Ludicolo. You don't need a chesto berry attached to exploud if you have hyper voice as it makes it immune to sleeping. May i suggest Removing ludicolo as you already have 1 water type and although it is effective it is not as good as your others. get a dragon or a ground type.hope this helps

 

[Shinyzubat]

okay i need these four rated and an idea of what my weaknesses are:
Starmie @ Lum Berry (experience w/ starmie says you need that):
Surf
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam/Confuse Ray/Recover
EVs 252 Sp atk 126 Sp Def 126 Speed
Exploud @ White Herb:
Rest
Overheat
Earthquake
Snore/Sleep Talk
EVs 252 Atk 252 Sp Atk 4 HP
Magneton @ Leftovers:
Thunderbolt
Reflect
Protect
Metal Sound
EVs 252 Sp Atk 126 Sp Def 126 Speed 4 HP
Ludicolo @ Leftovers:
Surf
Giga Drain
Thunderpunch/Ice Punch
Rain Dance
EVs 252 Speed 252 Sp Atk 4 HP

I haven't had much experience with Ludicolo or Magneton, but you will definitely need Starmie.

For Ludicolo, make sure Rain Dish is its ability, not Swift Swim.

 

[Umby]

Exploud really sucks.

 

[Cenzo]

Magneton should replace Protect or Metal Sound, (Whichever you think) with Swift.